I quite like the concept. I rarely see skills involving clones so it was quite a fresh read for me. I wanted to know more how he will level up his clones.
My only advice is to add more details. I sometimes lost in the details because the story was fast paced. But aside from that, everything was done well. Keep up the good work!
Lucien Blake is a twenty six years old shut in otaku. He live his life reading novels, watching animes, eating and staring at computer all day. One day he went out to buy his favorite chicken lunch box meal at the nearest convenience store. But a robber came in and decided to rob the store. Without knowing why or what for, the robber shot him in the chest before running away.
Can his life as shut in otaku get any worse?
A series of beeps flooded his head, forcing him to wake up. When he open his eyes he found himself in another world very much like his own. Except for one thing. His beloved protagonist from his favorite anime is staring at him face to face. A notif pop into his head saying,
[Dear host, find and help the protagonist escape his fate of getting killed. Help him in his mission of eliminating the demons. Points will be added. Failure to do so will result to deduction. Zero points will lead to your death. Good luck.]
Lucien was left no choice but to adapt to his life as a mob character, helping the protagonist pave his path into greathood. It was all good at first, if you count off the number of times he has to pick up his butt running away from hideous creatures drooling after his flesh, his life being protected from protagonist halo was awesome.
That is until.... the protagonist pushed him down to bed.
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Updates are on Wednesday and Thursday
On the fourth day of May, Kevin was murdered in his apartment. He has no enemies and no friends. His parents have their own families, and he lives alone in a 200 meter square apartment – in other words, he does not have anyone who bores hatred against him.
But he died. And the police concluded his death was an act of revenge homicide.
Kevin pondered who would kill him when he suddenly woke to unfamiliar surroundings. And it took a few minutes to be processed in his head…
Why are the furnitures so big?! The bed's mattress is so wide it's like the whole floor uses it as a floormat! The window is so high Kevin felt he was inside a church with glass walls as high as a three-storey building! Even worse, the appearance of a flower vase at his side is as tall as him!
What the hell is going on?!
[Host, you now possess the identity of the Male Lead's precious cat!]
Kevin: What did you say?
[Current Mission Progress: 0%]
[Host, please work hard and prevent the Male Lead's terrible fate!]
Kevin: …… What nonsense?! I just died!
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[Host, the villain is one step closer to harming the Male Lead's life! Please prevent them!]
Kevin: ……
[Host, a villain's lackey wants to kill the Male Lead! Please stop them!]
Kevin: …..
[Host, the Male Lead incurred a huge loss because of the villain, please bring him home and pamper him well!]
Kevin: ……
[Host, the Male Lead is injured because of the villain! Please nurse him back to health!]
Kevin: …… Am I the Male Lead's mom or a pet?!
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Updates are on Wednesday and Thursday.
Dwayne saved a cat. He did it out of love, not knowing that the cat is the thousand-year-old god of love. The god was touched by his actions and granted him the power to see the fated strings. He also gave Dwayne a mission to rekindle love in the hearts of humans. In other words, he has to play as a matchmaker!
Dwayne vehemently refused! But the god of love promised to fulfill his wish. And he was tempted. For his comatose mother, Dwayne agreed to do the missions.
Until one day…
[Ding! A new mission was issued to the host!]
Dwayne: What is it?
[Mission: Your fated partner has arrived. Please become lovers with him.]
Dwayne: My partner? Wait, who? Let me see! Is she a beauty? ... Huh? ‘Him’? What do you mean, ‘him’?
[Your fated partner is a male.]
Dwayne: llkhrwfbhsfdyw!!!!
[This will be your last mission. When completed, the god of love will fulfill your wish.]
Dwayne: …… Who is he?
[Partner information: Raven McGrden, the CEO of Vermillion Garden Corporation. The co-founder of Scarlet Garden, a famous underground syndicate. The illegitimate son of one of the famous richest families in the world who paved his way to success by plotting the deaths of all his family members in gruesome ways.]
Dwayne: …. Can I request a fated partner change?
What is a Drifter? A Drifter is someone who does not have a house or a proper job. He’s constantly on the move and does not stay in the same place for a long time. Because he doesn’t have a place he can call home.
*****
On July 7, 2016, Cayden Campbell watched helplessly as his parents got killed by monsters he only see in movies.
On August 7, 2017, he watched his best friend get eaten by a BOSS monster.
On September 9, 2018, he found a girl he fell in love with. Xyris was also a player and he swore he will protect her.
On October 19, 2020, she used her life as a price to save him from the penalty instance. When he finally came out from the game, she was already dead.
On February 26, 2030, he stood at the eightieth floor of the Dark Tower. He and his comrades raided the instance, but the constant fighting has worn them out. Enemies that are defeated come back to life.
Blood was spilled until Cayden was the only man left. The enemies did not stop growing and spreading in numbers. Surrounding him, forcing him to surrender. And he lost all hope. Maybe it’s better if he’ll stop fighting and just die.
*****
[You have obtained the Legendary item, Drifter’s Clock]
[Would you like to give up all your points to rewind the time back to July 7, 2016?]
As Cayden take his last breath he uttered, “Yes…”
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My name? Lance Augustus
Age? 15
Nickname? Five.
Why they call me that? Because the mark tells us so.
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"Don't be stupid, steer out of trouble, and whatever happens, stay alive."
I really don't know why Dad always repeat those words to me everyday. I take heed of his words. Play by his rules, never dared to go against him except if it's extremely necessary.
He's all that I need to get by. Our life was ordinary. Everything was perfectly fine, perfectly normal, just an everyday routine we get used to live. But then this guy calling himself 'The Seeker' came... And he start making a mess out of my life.
He said I have powers. - Who believe that crap?
He said I have extraordinary abilities. - Cool! I want to be Superman.
He said I was chosen. - Who? The god of newbie bullies?
The mark of five imprinted deep into my skin proves that I am one of the TWELVE. - You sure it's not a tattoo? I firmly believe it's a tattoo.
I never believe him. I drove him out. I did not listen. I wish I did. Maybe he could have help me. Maybe he could have save me from the trouble of falling right into their trap. I know nothing. Because of my stubbornness I lost everything. So now I'm all alone. But she stretch her hand to me. She gave me hope. She invited me to come. And I did.
So our search began. For the remaining TEN.
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The Matchmaker and the Villain were bound by fate
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