/ Book&Literature / The day of studying in Hogwarts
摘要
Author: Lazy cat on the keyboard
youtube: Young_Sunlight
Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/@Young_Sunlight
Albert never had any big ambitions and always considered himself a "salty fish," but after being reborn with a system cheat, he's determined to become a winner in life. Just as Albert plans to become a goal-oriented "salty fish," an owl delivers a Hogwarts invitation letter, revealing that he has actually transmigrated into the world of Harry Potter novels. Now, Albert is contemplating how to be a dream-driven "salty fish" in the magical realm.
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(Note: This is not my story and is written by a Chinese author.
This is a Machine translation. I have cleaned all the chapters I publish to the maximum of my capabilities. It's not perfect, but it's still an enjoyable read.)
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4.17
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Translation is very good Story is interesting but it is slow burn Too slow for me I read around 50chapters but MC is still in his 2nd day of Hogwarts I will not read it anymore but i will recommend if you can handle slow progress Stories
I like the story but it does have strong down sides. The inability to get the names right or even to keep them the same inside a same chapter is confusing and a sign of shoddy editing. I mean some change 3 times in a couple of paragraphs, it’s not difficult to go back and clearly change the names and it would massively improve coherence. Overall, like the story but need proper editing.
Ya leí este fan fic y se me hace aburrido pero te doy 5 estrellas por como te esforzaste a arreglar algunas partes en chino se lo difícil que es arreglar partes en chino ya que estoy traducción 3 fan fic chinos y se me hace difícil y algunas partes en imposible arreglar
A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio. A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio. A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio.
Giving a 5 star just because this is literally the first translation I’ve seen that I couldn’t tell was a translation it’s that good writing quality
This Reminds me of The Fanfic bloodline wizard and seems to be a bit of a copy and is way to slow for me
I'm sorry I couldn't get you out of your patreon. but here I will try to comment on each part. Thanks in advance.. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . .
It is a great book. I love it. The only problem is the names he keeps changing the names or using the wrong name and it is annoying.
I love the story, although the translation is not accurate. also update rate is really frustrating
The translation is good, but the MC is really annoying. He talks about how he has a humble attitude and doesn't like to show off, because he's originally from China, yet he constantly brags and shows off his wealth and knowledge. I just can't enjoy the story with such an annoying, unlikeable MC.