/ Book&Literature / I really am a Titled Douluo
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[Semi-invulnerable, casual, daily updates of 10k+ words] Xu Sheng woke up to find himself in Soul Land! He wanted nothing more than to lead an unremarkable life until he realized something was amiss during his Martial Soul Awakening!
First Martial Spirit: Nine-Hearted Begonia! A mutation from the Nine-heart Asiatic Apple, it requires blood as a sacrifice and soul to nurture, completely shattering the myth of the support class!
Second Martial Soul: Ice Rose Sword! Its attacking power overwhelms the Hao Tian Hammer, becoming the strongest Tool Soul on the continent!
Under Suyun Tao's astonished gaze, Xu Sheng reluctantly looked at the nine crimson Soul Rings on his body, "Well, actually, I just wanted to lead a simple life, but do you think these nine red hoops look good on me?"
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1700 chapters in 8 days...?seems this guy just wants to archive the novel here or something.anyways let's give it a go
this is a translation of a fanfiction why is it uploaded as an original work?
A typical Chinese translation fanfic where the MC has no ambition and just goes with the flow. The grammar was actually quite well without many mistakes that I could spot. The story itself was progressing very slowly that it was agonizing. I stopped after a few chapters since I just wasn't feeling like the MC has a personality, he simply goes after the protagonist of the story as his chaperone.
it's been an excellent story all along every part of the story seems right there to me.
fanfic jelek, ga konsisten sama ga detail berapa tahun soul ring nya sama soul bone juga ga ada penjelasan berapa tahun
This story has so many plot problems that it makes me sick to keep reading. It's basically a very superficial wish fulfillment for someone who hasn't actually read the original story. Just to give you an idea, the soul awakens at 6 years old and the MC awakens at 10 years old. His sword soul has 8 100,000-year rings and 1 1 million-year ring, but in the evil martial soul he shows, he starts putting on 10,000-year soul rings. It's a waste of capacity. He could start with 100,000-year soul rings or even more if he wanted. If he had enough million-year martial souls, he could fill everything. Having these characteristics, he decided to enter the soul hall to nerf himself. Besides, he doesn't seem very intelligent and is only there to mark his presence in the story without doing anything to change. It's simply not worth the time spent.
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No consistency with already written words. Brainless MC. Not knowing the original character's mindset and personality.
So, about a thousand chapters have been written; i have stopped at 800 because, while the first arc was good about Soul Land 1, the second one went too much on the description of the continent war with a hundred chapters just to finish with a handshake and peaceful ties. The thing that made me leave was the third world, which wasn't even from Douluo Dalu but from a cultivation novel. A good start, a weakening middle, and a worse ending may continue when the third part ends, but we'll see.
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