/ Book&Literature / HP X LOTM : Please Call Me Mr. Error.
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"When did I sign away my wealth to you!?" Lockhart asked, shocked.
"That's the neat part about it, you don't know.", Loki said with a smile.
"Hmm...I can feel it. I can feel the power coursing through my veins." Voldemort said as he felt his face after his rebirth. "Huh? Where's my nose!!!?"
"Obviously, I have it! Do you want it? If you want it you need to praise Dumbledore!!" Loki said with an innocent smile.
"Lord Voldemort does not need to listen to yo- Dumbledore is the greatest wizard of all time!!" Voldemort said with fanatic eyes, creating confusion amongst the death eaters. 'What!? Why am I saying this!? What did he do to me!?'
"Who are you!??" Dumbledore asked calmly.
"Me? Have I not introduced myself yet? Please call me Mr. Error." Loki said with a smile while adjusting the monocle over his right eye.
Read more about Loki's adventures as he walks through his years at Hogwarts meeting and scamming an array of famous personalities that have become infamed in the world of Harry Potter.
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Good story cool ideas but story overall: Mc doesn’t know the world he is in nor have any understanding of magic / HP kinda get annoying when he says it 100 times and demonstrates that over and over again…. He let himself be murrdered and beaten down with his sister threatened and almost raped. Mc doesn’t look to have any guts or understanding or plan forward it is all riding on beyonders and lord of mysteries Great set up for what you have
the first few chapters felt like a slog but after that it just got better and better, at chapter 30 I couldn't wait to read more of this. i love the concept and the way the author combined the world's. to the author: if you need help or ideas for stuff like the rituals be sure to ask us readers or just look up ideas on the internet. I'm sure that can get pretty difficult.
Really good crossover between HP and Lotm, the novel is at first but I see the potential [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The story has good LOTM/HP the main character is quite enjoyable to follow so far the story seems smooth as the author has structured the story quite nicely. My only issue is the pacing can feel a bit slow but it’s fine if you binge read the story. The update stability is good as the author is consistent with it.
A unique crossover of HP and LOTM, one of the best LOTM fanfiction novels I have read that isn't a Translation. 10/10 for me. I'll give it a 5 star in everything except world background which I gave a 4 star since much isn't written yet about it.
(honestly I can't judge this is bad or good) in Harry Potter: you will be able to get magic power as long as you have a wand and magic talent. in lord of mysteries: you can become by drinking a potion or being blessed by a god.
10/10 story, a great blend of LOTM(Lord of the Mysteries) and HP(Harry Potter). You don't need extensive knowledge from both HP and LOTM to understand/read this story.
This is a great story so far and I hope toot continues to be great I can't wait for future chapters
It's an excellent story imo, as this is my first lotm x hp read and you may find the story boring or edgy in the start but it gets better and we do not have much world building as of now but so far it's good and the incorporation of lotm and hp verse is also going well... the update schedule is also quite good with more than one chapter usually... I would recommend you to try reading this book