/ Book&Literature / Last True Remnant of Old Valyria
摘要
An unknown powerful Dragon Lord with knowledge of the modern world and future comes into the turbulent time of the Dance of Dragons. With lineage greater than Targaryen could ever hope to achieve. What change would it bring to the fate of others??
Because I am new to this it takes hours to write one chapter so just give me some motivation with power stones and reviews.
And last English isn't my first language, and I am learning as I write.
Chao! Enjoy
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This is first work so be magnanimous forgive my shamelessness. If you like my work do leave reviews here
It's going very well I love the background story of the character, the development could improve a lot if he first gets involved in it and the moment of the dance arrives or removes the dragons from the targaryen, but that depends on the author and I respect his story a lot so it's just my opinion I would really appreciate it if it is updated more often[img=recommend]
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The World Background and character Interactions are top notch but the Story Development ruined this Masterpiece. I know it was a bad decision to Ally with Targaryens but it still continued believing Author's abilities and he miserably failed me. Whatever i guess. Read it if you want the author have putted enough time in this but the MC is not up to my tastes
Three paragraphs and I can see the heavy lack of punctuation marks. Grammarly free can easily solve that problem. Ps: how you write reviews with less than 150 characters?
It looks promasing I will edit this review after chp 30 ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..………………
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⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💞💞💞💞💞 so far so good though a bit slow. But I suppose it is necessary to make the story. And it was a nice and enjoyable reading for me. Keep it up. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Es muy interesante por eso me gustaría seguir leyendo, es todo lo que diré y porfavor sigue actualizando más capítulos🙏♥️♥️♥️🐭......................... ..........................................................................
as a game of thrones fanfiction this one premise about a dragonlord is new one for me. the MC character is good with a nice storyline and waiting for more.
Great start to the story👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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More of this fanfic. And 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁plzjshsgshshshbshsgsgshshdgdgdhdhdhdhdhdhdbshshshshshhshshdhdhdhdgdgdgdgdgdggdgdgdgdgdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdggdgdgdhegehheheheheheheheh
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Hey man ! Your fic is very interesting for many reasons but the main reason is that magic is used and the rituals are very interesting. Keep updating and keep cooking brotha !
Поначалу мне было интересно читать, но когда начались эти пространные рассуждения и витиеватые описания, желания резко убавилось. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
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Very nice start to the story. I hope you are involved more in the story and character interaction, as the last few chapters were just general info and power boot up. anyways I really hope you continue the story...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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If you do not have content to write then don't write why make us waste our time . you wrote one chapter about him and wasted 6 chapters for your stupid and chapter numbers.