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Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
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Jon Snow, a boy destined for a life of contempt by almost everyone around him, but a divine intervention can change everything. The boy who will pave the way to build the most powerful nation in the world.
I crafted this story with a focus on the creation of a kingdom, battles, economy, navigation, and exploration of the entire universe of Planetos, with a central character in mind.
Am I wealthy? The Stormlands, Dorne, the Reach, and the Westerlands all want to establish trade agreements with me.
And the East? I have trade agreements with Braavos, Pentos, Myr, Tyrosh, Lys, and Volantis. I can negotiate with everyone in Essos, except in the Slaver's Bay after I stole 100,000 chained men from them.
So, do you have enemies in Essos? About that? I indeed have quite a few. I started by stealing slaves from them, then raised a khalasar and began a bloodbath in the Dothraki Sea for fun. I was even named a Khal in Vaes Dothrak. Not to mention, the last time I went to Essos, I toppled the Titan's statue in Braavos. They wanted to stop me from destroying the House of Black and White. That day wasn't very pleasant for the Braavosi.
Wow, and the kingdoms below the Wall? The Wall? It no longer exists; I brought it down a while ago. I took the North as part of my kingdom and left the South of the Neck to the Southerners. They tried to reclaim the kingdom, but now the Southerners tremble when they feel my armies on their lands. I've personally killed one or two of their kings.
Really? Yes, ask what's left of Oldtown. I would answer, it turned to ashes. Lannisport? I burned it. Casterly Rock? It's at the bottom of the sea. The Twins? I blew up the entire place. King's Landing? The city is standing, but the Red Keep is history.
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this story has some problems with logic... and the way people act/ behave is like in a book for kids...the pov changes in the same pharagraph ... and other stuff....
I really have mixed feelings about this fic, I really like kingdom building and the prospect of a kingdom beyond the wall really attracts me, I think the story has a lot of potential. however, it really bothers me the way catelyn and ned are portrayed, catelyn is portrayed as executively disgusting, much worse than she should be, and ned, is portrayed as if he had no fault of his own, a literal saint, and jon idolizes him... which is really stupid, other than that, the story is really good, I really hope to see the end.
Idk, the paceing and writing style kinda throws me off, it seems kinda unnatural or kinda robotic.
The novel presents an intriguing premise but suffers from poor execution. The dialogue is excessively verbose and often nonsensical, severely impacting the story's credibility. The protagonist, Jon, behaves inconsistently with his supposed age, resembling someone in their late teens or early twenties rather than his actual age (9). This disconnect, alongside poor portrayals of other important characters (including their decisions and dialogue) highlights the author's lack of understanding of the characters, further detracting from the narrative. Additionally, the reliance on the trope of "the old gods granting knowledge" as a convenient explanation undermines the plot's integrity. Overall, a promising idea, but not her more.
amazing story I hope author will continue this story with no stopping [img=update]
Honestly was one of the best ASOIAF stories out there but because people didn’t understand that this was a Fanfic they got dissatisfied with the current story so those people can f right off!!! Author you are a fantastic author and I follow your other stories and never let these people that only spend time tearing others down to fill there so called pride. Hope you continue this later on in the future and sorry you had to take those comments and anything else!! Keep up your writing because you will go so far with it!!!
Dude Pleaseeee!!!!!!!!!!! don't delete this, I was eagerly waiting for its updates. Atleast, continue posting it on some other platform. This is the best Ongoing GOT fanfictions. Your work is great. Please resume posting it!
it's really good fanfiction .a little heavy on the bad cat stark thinygy but it's good
why was this deleted????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
what happened was the fabric deleted, or was it flagged, I was enjoying the story 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
Very interesting and well written story, one of the best GOT Fics out there.
Honestly one of the really good fanfics I have read in a while. The story is pleasant to read and gives off emotions while reading. The pace could be a bit faster but the different POVs also make it fun to read, I am glad other POVs don’t overwhelm Jon’s POV, it has a good balance. The details do add depth, the author doesn’t overwhelm with unnecessary details or words. The language and the writing part is very well done, nice and easy to read with good vocabulary. Really enjoying it, and hope to see more of it!
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