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The current world is faced with a shattering choice. We find out Lucas ideas and concepts did not come from the realm of fiction, but from a force vision trying to prepare the world for the inevitable... The Arrival.
(I am making this simply because a Star Wars fan-fic has such the wealth of opportunity it is a shame that there have not been more on this site. Plus the one I have run across has been such a disappointment it forced my hand. Do not have any idea how this is going to go but I plan on finishing this story not matter how it ends.)
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A story with a huge potential, I recommend that you give this story a chance if you like Star Wars, the author is also dedicated to the quality of writing and the speed of launching new chapters.
Can you please update, I dislike cliff hangers or novels being dropped please write another if you would be so kind. ppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Paragraph format, grammar and punctuation is getting a lot better and has improved greatly since the beginning of the novel. The novel is getting even more interesting than before. However I wish the author would focus more on the main character, but I like the world building since its not completely the Star Wars Universe. 10/10 would replace Lunarbase with Death Star.
Bro I need to know if you’re gonna update this story😭. Now to those reading the reviews. This is by far, my favorite fan fiction of star-wars. This author has good knowledge on the Star Wars world and I recommend giving this one a try.
It is a great Star Wars fan-fic novel in this app. I left the overall rating 4 star. Because, there are minor errors in punctuation or let say the writing quality, "For some might be bothered with the lines". I can't ask for more, because this is great story to begin with, wishing you the best author. 3000/10 Story development.
it's a good story once you get over the first few chapters. the author has a talent to make us feel inferior, so many will hate the first few chapters. it gets a lot better afterwards and is really interesting. SPOILER: black light sabers.......... how cool as **** is that? i mean they are light sabers but they are black! *mindblown* they're going to saber rape every jedi and sith just with that. i mean B! L! A! C! K! light sabers. ****. its cool. and cringy at the same time. will they be called chaotic force users? or emo force users? only the force can tell. the only thing we need now is a skull throne and more blood for the blood god! altough there is no mention of my personal favorites (system and what never should be missed a harem, becacuse no harem no life) which results in a 1 star minus, this is just my preference. none the less, it's a good story and very well written for a free story. thank you author. keep up the good work. Motherf****** BLACK light sabers. dude. ****. it's like blown tha mind you know. fantastic idea. see that samuel gay jackson. (sorry dude but you should have turned down that role once the color of your gay as f*** light saber was known. it's f****** violet..... i mean, did you want to be a joke? or where you just drugged up liike motherfucking hobo?)
This is one of the best fanfics i have read to date. I need More. I look forward to if/when it gets some more updates. I cant wait to see where this novel goes next.
One of the best stories on the site but what happened? Where are you author sama?!?? Can someone please continue this or give us an update on whats going to happen? Please
Thank you for your creativity. You have uncovered one of the original plots. It's clever, beautiful, detailed. It's beyond primitive: come, see, win. I look forward to the sequel.
I love this novel and cant wait to see more chapters released. Keep up the amazing work and dedication all starwars fans have come to know n love.👍
Awesome read! hope it will make it till completion. and i hope he will get a Promotion as he is still a Apprentice haha. Keep up the good work!
This is a great Star Wars fanfic I have read but if the Author doesn’t have a stable update time. Every day I look to see if The author uploaded one chapter
Excellent story with interesting characters. Worth multiple readings. Wonderful look on Earth and if it was in the star wars universe. Hopefully author will come back to finishing it.
Great star wars fan fiction, best I've seen, would recommend you up sidious power level cause Jack is getting slightly broken, although revan is most likely much stronger than sidious but it will be boring if he just destroys everyone.
I’ve been on this site for a hot min so I’ve gonna use to reading stories with great ideas and backstory but with errors in spelling,grammar, etc I never complain since that’s why I read fanfics they’re not official books so it’s expected. This story however SETS THE F***ING standard for outstanding Fics not once was I able to stop reading so thank you, please carry on, and have all the stones.
A Truly inspiring novel which I cannot stop reading I can't even get it out of my mind even when I dream A twist to Star Wars which no one's ever seen truly inspiring I picture everything that Will l peak my interests more and more Keep up the good work off their I'll be looking forward to your releases
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