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摘要
A woman won in a divine lottery that she didn't even know she was participating in, and as a reward for winning, she could choose to be reincarnated in another world with some wishes, or, if she prefers, she could wish for things in her world. It's obvious what her choice was, right?
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So far it's been pretty good, but the future is uncertain so I'm just going to passively observe how it goes. The FitnessGram PACER Test is a multistage aerobic capacity test that progressively gets more difficult as it continues. The test is used to measure a student's aerobic capacity as part of the FitnessGram assessment. Students run back and forth as many times as they can, each lap signaled by a beep sound. The test get progressively faster as it continues until the student reaches their max lap score. The PACER Test score is combined in the FitnessGram software with scores for muscular strength, endurance, flexibility and body composition to determine whether a student is in the Healthy Fitness Zone™ or the Needs Improvement Zone™.
Ahhh! I love this story! It has so much potential! Ahhh and this new arc. Please don’t rush over this arc! It has so much potential, (write at minimum 20 chapters here) can’t we get Mavis pov. I’m sure you can write dozens of chapters here. Like what was Mavis doing before she found our MC, what has she experience, was she happy or sad, what is her dream and her thoughts. You write as if we know the story already ( we don’t), and don’t want to change it. I was really upset when the MC decided to go to sleep for hundred of years. That was lazy writing, the MC is suppose to have a loving mother persona , how can she just abandon her children for hundreds of years? I let it slide since dragons are known to love sleeping but you could have at least have the MC visit her children before going to sleep. Remember that this is your story, you can change the plot, you shouldn’t rush while writing, flesh the story out more. From what I’ve read so far, you have good writing skills but you’re a bit to lazy for the side character development. Overall I really enjoy reading this story, keep up the great work!
Author?!! Where are you?!?! Come back, you said you'd only be gone for a while at best a week...
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
It's pretty fun to read until the tempest arc starts then it becomes incredibly boring. 4 stars though, i can appreciate the effort. . . . . . .
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Pure perfection. As long as he doesn't have romance and treats everyone like his sons, then everything will be fine. .
This story is good blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah
Maybe more chapters mhm..... . ...... . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . .
Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr
PLEASE update this okay? I like the warm feelings this fanfic gives me. I like the way you made Tia a loving mother who knows the struggles and needs her children have.
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It has become to the attention of the glorious Anti-harem sect that this particular piece of fiction is unsullied by the filth known only by "Harem-itis" that plagues this site, and thus as a Senior representative of the Sect I shall be in charge of reviewing this book and making sure it stays on the CORRECT path. Good day, and we hope to see more of you in the future.