/ Anime & Comics / One Piece: Starting by Refusing Shanks
摘要
Takumi finds himself unexpectedly transported to the world of One Piece, where he activates the Traveler Sign-In System. This unique system allows him to receive powerful rewards by completing sign-in tasks at specific locations throughout the world.
In his first sign-in, he gains mastery over all three types of Haki.
At Windmill Village, he acquires the powerful Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire Technique.
In Frost Moon Village, he receives the legendary Demon Sword, Star Fragment.
At the Baratie, the Sea Restaurant, he masters Shunpo (Flash Step) and the devastating Night Guy technique.
As Takumi continues his journey, he signs in at iconic locations like Loguetown, Drum Island, Alabasta, Skypiea, Enies Lobby, Sabaody Archipelago, and Impel Down, gaining more incredible abilities along the way.
Red-Haired Shanks: "Rejected twice... This guy really knows how to ignore me."
Garp: "Even if we can't be comrades, we can still be friends, right, Takumi?"
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This novel is a translation of the original work "海贼：从拒绝红发邀请开始" by 冥幽九歌.
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From story to plot , everything is quite well written . But everything good with the story gets pretty much forgotten with the mc. He's not even a generic one. He's just a robot with no dreams or ambitions. His interactions are incredibly bland. And the system just slaves him around . That's another negative point of the story.
well to be honest i found it really monotonous the mc only cares about alcohol and the sign-in also feel like he has no personality whatsoever and every character he meets tries to recruit him. besides those it is good if you don't have any other fanfic to read.
mc is like a depressed overpowerd teenager, and everyone around him acts as a conserned mom trying and failing to break him out of his depression. anyways good story, I hope it continues
The translator is doing a good job at making the story more appetizing but it's soooo boring I have read a lot of Chinese fanfics but this one take the cake for the most monotone,boring,repeating story ever.whenever he goes to a new location all the npcs have the same dialog and reactions.
This is really good. Mc is a traveller with a system. His system makes him interact with one piece characters to get rewards. In a way he is like Hawkeye - traveling alone and drinking alcohol (sake).
O MC é praticamente um robô sem personalidade nenhuma e escravo do sistema,tudo se resume a ele viajando para fazer login e beber sem nenhum propósito real,simplesmente pq o sistema manda
The author does a good job with the writing and that is what hurts the most, the Chinese do not know how to make a good one piece plot, in short he is just a depressive child who one day woke up the system and began to obey. religiously, the protagonist has no charisma or self-esteem, he is just a robot that obeys the system, the interactions are so low and forced.
This story is interisting and all, but I getting tired of the MC personality, in the beginning was funny but now his bored attitude is getting annoying. At least have some sense of wonder, the dude travel to a fictional universe full of fantastical shit and call himself a traveler but in no point he seems to be enjoying any of it, he is just in autopilot going where the system point him to, he barely seems to care for the power ups he is getting. I not even saying that he should be a happy-go-lucky guy just give him a goal or something, show that he is traveler because he want to explore and see the wonders of the one piece world. Ok, final thing, please have any bartender deny him a drink, at least one person in the world should tell the 10 year old kid "no" when he enter a bar alone asking for booze.
Everything is really great, including the translation quality, except for the actual MC. The dude is seriously off putting. He has no real personality and he just ignores anyone around him that says anything slightly troublesome. For example: Garp: hey kid who are you MC: stares at him in silence as if to convey some profound meaning Garp: Hey I asked who you were Mc: fifteen seconds of silence before he says "takumi" Garp:Are you here all alone MC: Ignores him Garp: Where did you get that wine Mc:ignores him Garp:want to join the marines Mc: ignores him for a minutes before saying no Garp: are you sure? Mc:ignores him There's just nothing interesting at all about an Mc who has no personality and acts like that. Don't get me wrong, not all of his conversations go like that, but a decent portion do. However besides that, I really can't complain. Mc isnt a crazy sociopath like most Chinese Mc and his goal is admirable.
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the translator is amazing but the history is trash Mc is complete apathetic have no goal or objective i don't know why such good translator is wasting his time with this kind of novel
a well translated novel but a poor choice of a story, you can switch the mc with a stone, and i think it would be more interesting. hope to read your next novel 👍
Heres how the story goes: MC gets to new island, signs in, power up, throw in a popular character, popular character gets surprised at his potential, tries to recruit him and gets rejected. Repeat. Same thing at least till chapter 40, repeated like 5 times. MC feels like an edgy teenager.
Personally, in my opinion, this story is not bad with the MC focusing on his goal of completing the task given, plus writing that suits me
قصة ممتازة شخصية البطل فخمة تفاعله مع شخصيات القصة جيد جدا و قد ترك اثره على الشخصيات ارجو ان إستمر في كتابة الرواية و لا تسقطها يمكنك محاولة إضافة شخصياتك الخاصة القصة و جعل البطل يسافر الى جزر لم تظهر في القصة من حين لاخر
İ love this main character he is like yasuo.İ tried read the original version im hoping god bless editor and im hoping you load much more episode
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