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I think this was dropped or something happened to the author if it is nether please tell us fans what happened is it on a different platform now
Pls come back sishhsieieejdnrke...emekr.d.r.rjd.ddd.d Dn.d.mrmrmr Rjrndnmrmr..jjjkjjjdjjddjdjdjejdjejejejejejj. yeah this the best good tensura fiction top 10 . . . . . 5 star
Author?!! Where are you?!?! Come back, you said you'd only be gone for a while at best a week...
When the primordial mother comes, all simps break loose. Tiamat gains a reverse harem.
(I don't know how to write a review so i'm just copying a previous oone i believe fits my oppinion) Pure perfection. As long as he doesn't have romance and treats everyone like his sons, then everything will be fine. .
Magnífico simplemente Magnífico, vale la pena leerla es una gran historia con mucho potencial para desarrollar la historia. No busques una historia extensa y con giros y vueltas, esta es una historia para recordar y disfrutar
I love Tiamat, power........................................................................................................................
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Pure perfection. As long as he doesn't have romance and treats everyone like his sons, then everything will be fine. .
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Me encanta este fanficfic mas que se trata de tiamat y tensura ya que no hay ni un fanfic de tiamat grande autor grande autor grande autor grande autor grande autor grande autor grande autor grande autor
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Vamos mas de Esta genial historia me encanto como el personaje trata alas personas y como se desarrolla mas siendo tiamat mas que casi nadie hace un buen fic con ella
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This story is good blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah
Maybe more chapters mhm..... . ...... . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . .
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PLEASE update this okay? I like the warm feelings this fanfic gives me. I like the way you made Tia a loving mother who knows the struggles and needs her children have.
Ahhh! I love this story! It has so much potential! Ahhh and this new arc. Please don’t rush over this arc! It has so much potential, (write at minimum 20 chapters here) can’t we get Mavis pov. I’m sure you can write dozens of chapters here. Like what was Mavis doing before she found our MC, what has she experience, was she happy or sad, what is her dream and her thoughts. You write as if we know the story already ( we don’t), and don’t want to change it. I was really upset when the MC decided to go to sleep for hundred of years. That was lazy writing, the MC is suppose to have a loving mother persona , how can she just abandon her children for hundreds of years? I let it slide since dragons are known to love sleeping but you could have at least have the MC visit her children before going to sleep. Remember that this is your story, you can change the plot, you shouldn’t rush while writing, flesh the story out more. From what I’ve read so far, you have good writing skills but you’re a bit to lazy for the side character development. Overall I really enjoy reading this story, keep up the great work!
Perfect, although it hasn't been developed, it's perfect since it wasn't long ago, I say it in such a way that there are protagonists of other novels who get into the script a lot and the plot still doesn't change. I like her caring and protective mother attitude, especially with Guy Crimson hahaha. I also like that he doesn't have any love interest, the closest he can be in that position is Rimuru.
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I think this was dropped or something happened to the author if it is nether please tell us fans what happened is it on a different platform now
Pls come back sishhsieieejdnrke...emekr.d.r.rjd.ddd.d Dn.d.mrmrmr Rjrndnmrmr..jjjkjjjdjjddjdjdjejdjejejejejejj. yeah this the best good tensura fiction top 10 . . . . . 5 star
Author?!! Where are you?!?! Come back, you said you'd only be gone for a while at best a week...
When the primordial mother comes, all simps break loose. Tiamat gains a reverse harem.
(I don't know how to write a review so i'm just copying a previous oone i believe fits my oppinion) Pure perfection. As long as he doesn't have romance and treats everyone like his sons, then everything will be fine. .
Magnífico simplemente Magnífico, vale la pena leerla es una gran historia con mucho potencial para desarrollar la historia. No busques una historia extensa y con giros y vueltas, esta es una historia para recordar y disfrutar
I love Tiamat, power........................................................................................................................
揭示劇透 Pure perfection. As long as he doesn't have romance and treats everyone like his sons, then everything will be fine. .
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Me encanta este fanficfic mas que se trata de tiamat y tensura ya que no hay ni un fanfic de tiamat grande autor grande autor grande autor grande autor grande autor grande autor grande autor grande autor
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Vamos mas de Esta genial historia me encanto como el personaje trata alas personas y como se desarrolla mas siendo tiamat mas que casi nadie hace un buen fic con ella
揭示劇透 This story is good blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah
Maybe more chapters mhm..... . ...... . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . .
Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr. Suppppeeeeerrrrrr
PLEASE update this okay? I like the warm feelings this fanfic gives me. I like the way you made Tia a loving mother who knows the struggles and needs her children have.
Ahhh! I love this story! It has so much potential! Ahhh and this new arc. Please don’t rush over this arc! It has so much potential, (write at minimum 20 chapters here) can’t we get Mavis pov. I’m sure you can write dozens of chapters here. Like what was Mavis doing before she found our MC, what has she experience, was she happy or sad, what is her dream and her thoughts. You write as if we know the story already ( we don’t), and don’t want to change it. I was really upset when the MC decided to go to sleep for hundred of years. That was lazy writing, the MC is suppose to have a loving mother persona , how can she just abandon her children for hundreds of years? I let it slide since dragons are known to love sleeping but you could have at least have the MC visit her children before going to sleep. Remember that this is your story, you can change the plot, you shouldn’t rush while writing, flesh the story out more. From what I’ve read so far, you have good writing skills but you’re a bit to lazy for the side character development. Overall I really enjoy reading this story, keep up the great work!
Perfect, although it hasn't been developed, it's perfect since it wasn't long ago, I say it in such a way that there are protagonists of other novels who get into the script a lot and the plot still doesn't change. I like her caring and protective mother attitude, especially with Guy Crimson hahaha. I also like that he doesn't have any love interest, the closest he can be in that position is Rimuru.
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