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摘要
currently on hiatus.
What would happen if a young man died and his soul was lost? where would it go? while this has never happen before doesn't mean it couldn't happen at all
The world had dimmed as dawn rose. He stumbled back against the wall and fell, butt first on to his spruce floor. The window showed no clouds over the sunlight, but it was dark. His heart sped up and he started feeling light, almost pushed out by mere breaths of air. Fell back as the world seemed to span outwards into blackness.
Akio was 23 at his time of departure, with a normal and fulfilling life. He was a one sport athlete in school and collage, had a degree in architecture. He had a wife whom he had been dating for 6 years. But that didn’t quite matter anymore.
——-requirements filled——
Akio opened his eyes to darkness, nothing was visible and nothing was heard as the message popped in his mind
—-welcome to the system of Verglas—-
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Chapter frequency: my motivation
NOTE, SLOW BURNER UP TO CHAPTER 14, THE FIRST 14 ARE JUST DIALOUGE TO GET FROM POINT A TO POINT B. ACTION,CHARECTOR INTERACTIONS AND MAIN PLOT LINE START AT 15 (pls give it a chance, i will edit the first 14 later on to make it interesting :D)———————————————————————————
*this is a work of FICTION all characters, places and events are not real
*cover is not mine, PLEASE tell me if you want it removed and it will be removed immediately
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寫檢討作者 frewdsfagr
Decent start, all novels are messy In the first two chapters or so, don’t worry it will be smooth riding from here on out. Assuming you’ve got names and stuff down