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Decent start, all novels are messy In the first two chapters or so, don’t worry it will be smooth riding from here on out. Assuming you’ve got names and stuff down
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we learn more as it goes on throughout the story I actually really like the story but updates aren't to stable and a few things reworked here and there otherwise it's really good read I recommend it for everyone who likes fantasy
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Decent start, all novels are messy In the first two chapters or so, don’t worry it will be smooth riding from here on out. Assuming you’ve got names and stuff down
we learn more as it goes on throughout the story I actually really like the story but updates aren't to stable and a few things reworked here and there otherwise it's really good read I recommend it for everyone who likes fantasy