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Victor was a normal 21-year-old man, he grew up in a loving family that helped him take care of himself knowing that he had a practically incurable disease, the RH null blood, he was the owner of a rare blood type...
But what Victor didn't know, is that this blood type was a delicacy in the supernatural world, creatures that fed on blood loved his blood type...
And that blood he hated would be the factor that would make Victor the greatest vampire of all time.
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[A/N: The cover is mine, it's original.]
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Shameless Editor’s review! (No spoilers or plot discussion will appear. This is just my opinion on the overall story) I’ve been working on this novel for around 20 months, so a bit over 1 year and 8 months, and I must say that this novel has been a treat to edit. (Started working on this around Chapter 119) The story premise is very interesting, keeping a steady rhythm between detailed character development, plot progression, action, and steamy romance. The story is really enjoyable to the point where editing each chapter has never felt like work. It’s always managed to keep me engaged and anticipating what comes next, never once feeling boring or dragged out. The writing quality of this story is clear, concise, and has little to no errors. (It is my job to make sure that is the case, so it has my editor’s seal of approval!) The world development Author Victor Weismann has created is very in-depth, showcasing various supernatural factions which intertwine and interact to create a vivid world of fantasy hidden beyond the veil of a modern world. The use of real-life mythology and the way the different myths have been woven into the story both enrich the reading experience and work very well with each other to create interesting dynamics that is unique and engaging. Each character is well fleshed out depending on their significance to the plot, rarely, if ever, leaving readers unaware of a character’s traits, background, personality, or who they are as a ”person”. The use of pop culture and a healthy dose of anime/manga references create humorous interactions between characters and aid in defining many of the characters’ traits. (This story is Yandere heaven) With chapters being updated daily, with an average word count of 2000 words per chapter, this novel provides a decent amount of entertainment for everyday reading. And for those of you just starting, with a stockpile of 777 chapters as of writing this review, there’s an entire world for you to binge-read to your hearts content to consume a significant portion of your time to escape your boredom. So why not give it a read?
3 yanderes + cool family + funny maids + crazy mc = good novel .............................................................................
Yanderes are the best.......................................................................................................................
They told me to follow my dreams, so I turned around and continued to sleep. 😴 ..................................................... .......
Do you like yanderes? Do you also like the unconditional crazy passionate love that they offer? Do you often wonder what you would do if you suddenly wake up and find yourself married to, not one, not two, but three sexy women? Well, here are 3 beautiful and dangerous yanderes for you to read about. I usually don't give reviews for stories with less than 50 chapters, but for this one, it's an exception. My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires (M3WBV) follows an MC who wakes up after turning into a vampire, and finds out the during the process he is now married to a beautiful vampire, named Violet Snow. So far, there isn't much plot development, except the MC discovering more about the supernatural world that he now has become a part of, and that he also has 2 more wives due to an accident during the vampire conversion process. I foresee great potential with this story, and I hope that the author can deliver. In the first 25 chapters you'll experience sweet romantic moments, intrigue, mystery, and some unique characters. And it's definitely the unique characters and their portrayals that have had me hooked with this story. From the almost-bipolar yandere wife, to the stoic maid, and the MCs over-enthusiastic family - all of their interaction are fun to read, and generally enjoyable. TL;DR: Give this novel a try if you would like read about a good guy, who suddenly finds himself thrust into a marriage between 3 yandere vampires, and want to follow their developments.
This is like one of the best Yandere harem novels out there in my opinion. We have an mc who was just a typical avg nobody who got thrusted into the world of supernatural by him getting married to his first 3 wives. its journey man, seeing a weak ill guy turn into one of the strongest being, meeting new people, finding out old friends who were also involve with the supernatural world, having cute mother in laws, a lot of oyakodons, witnessing one of the most hated goddess getting character development and turn into one of the best character in the story and helping mc along the way. Mc himself is an extreme yandere for his wives too which was a nice touch in the story, how to tame a harem of yandere? become an even bigger yandere haha. Also this novel has a really big yandere harem with many lovely girls, so enjoy the ride. Final thoughts: as of chapter 777 it has its ups and downs but over all its a fantastic novel.
A novel that i look forward to every release date daily, excellent at everything for me, an MC with a personality and not a SIMP, gorgeous women and with personalities too (mostly Yandere), very good at fighting with enormous capacities. Keep doing a good job.
Hi Victor, we love youre book keep it up and don't listen to little kiddys who don't like Harem novels go with youre own flow. We love the way you are going with youre novel and because of this we are always on youre side. Im addicted to youre novel ^^. Best wishes from one big Fan [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Really good novel, but author please increase the update chapter. even though this novel per chapter words is bigger then most of the top novels, but one chapter a day and sometime no chapter (i know you have issues since i see your comments) really is a demerit to this novel. It really is such a great harem novel and kind of like the best harem novel with the most chadest mc i have ever read. I am personally only like the action (including training part with scarlett sisters) aspect of the story (whether it is the wives who are fighting or mc) but with wives and lovers such as Victoria (really feels like an extra to complete familydon), (Lacus and Siena; i really do not understand why these two got added in the harem but i get pepper ), Demon generals who ended up getting alucard name but we saw no ritual or even a hint of snu snu with them. I hope you keep on continue the novel for two years at least. i felt like you were rushing the entire Greek war (which i thought would be a really major arc with hundred plus chap but it got concluded in like fifteen chap?) Samar arc felt like it went on for a while but at least it gave us the background for entire Samar so i was ok with it. I see Victor became so strong after Greek war and his dragon evolution that i feel all primordial gods just got trivialize, as i remember the war, no primordial god used their true form as they didnt want to destroy the pantheon so that went on Victor's favor as well but i don't even know if the true form of these gods is really that big of an massive upgrade to the power as its not stated anywhere in the novel about their multipliers like how it was done so for the Vampires. Even though the introduction of Emperors and Overlords seems to open the novel to Universal and multi-versal level, but the terminology of Sectors (Low, mid, high), Galaxies, Universes, Cosmos need to be explore further as right now the true extent of power is still in the air and we just don't have a lot of basis to gauge Victor's power anymore. I just feel all the known strongest gods and primordial gods, Victor can fight them all without any issues. I have saw your comments of who could face against Victor would be Odin, Ra, Amaterasu (and her two brothers who were said to be average gods in chapter 0 but now due to Amaterasu feeling a second gen primordial, i assume they are also primordial gods?) and God-king of Elder gods but i just feel like they really wont stand much of a fight (i would love to be wrong as i like fights where mc would need to go absolutely all out to win). Another note on harem, as much as i love big harems but can you please make mc like say no have boundaries and standards to his harem, i really don't like that anyone with a slightest aspect of 'obsession' and 'yandere' aspect will end up in the harem while his other harems like Mizuki, Victoria, the three scarlett sisters, Demon generals gets no good development or personal time with victor at all. I miss the chapters where Victor use to take girls to dates with there one on one time which really does wonder in long terms. Goddesses such as like Lilith, hestia, persephone (may be?), Nyx, gaia,(you hinted Tiamat as well), Dun Scaith (now?), Hera and Rhea (may be?) I have no idea how will u be managing this but i trust you, as i have trusted you to not ruin your novel with the pacing all this time. There is now the Blood god religion as well which has its own fair share of yanderes who totally fits Victors lover criteria. I just dont know if any of them will be his wives or not as its all the air which i really don't like. In the discord, i see that everyone just accepts that all the females who gets named and have even the slightest interest in Victor will be in his harem which just destroys the charm of the novel that was built for like 690+ chapters. Please don't ruin it just for some readers ask that you add this girl or that girl in the harem. I have heard from some people that there will be like 6 more volumes after this and i am very much looking forward to it, so please do your best in each volumes and don't rush story. I would love to see more detailed explanation of Victor's powers and skill sets, its been missing since his blood dragon transformation. Also on another note Please like give a good explanation of Power levels as the one given in chapter 0 is really lackluster for the hype fights this novel had. I hope u read this comment and have a nice day.
Although I am too late, I wish that you win your WPC contest and take away the gold prize. I am your new reader and this novel was my first. I have to say that I am more than impressed. So I will be going to read your other novels. Good Luck and congrats in advance.
I was surprised when I saw this novel, it is very well written, and you can see the effort the author is putting to make it well done. Don't expect anything too complex from this novel, it is simple and straightforward, the plot is well established and the characters are very good, (Kaguya is my favorite cough) Writing 5 stars. World was not developed enough for me to speak. Characters definitely 5 stars. updates? It's very good, the author updates every day with more than 2k words, as a reader I wanted more... but I know how difficult it is to do a good job like this without losing quality. Editor. this guy is very good, he is helping the author a lot. IsUnavailable, he's a good editor, the author sure found a gem. Overall, it's a good novel for you to read with a smile on your face all the time, Violet the wife who's been introduced so far is very cute, and everyone who likes Yandere can like her too. (Isn't she psycho like Yuno, is she more like Albedo than overlord?) This is a good novel that I will definitely follow, the author is also one of my favorites, I have always followed his work, and he is a good person. I think that's it for now, Seeya.
when I found out author was writing an original, it got me hella excited I mean I love the DC and Marvel fanfics I mean they're probably my favourite DC and Marvel fanfics and so far it seems that this is going to be even better
This novel is so good that i just had to make a review. I must say this is straight up deserves to be in the top ranking in wn both in golden tix and power stone. This novel has so many highs through out the novel. Some notable ones which i could remember on top of my head are the church ma*acre arc, japanese genocide arc, first supernatural meeting, the three wives vs pillar demons, vic vs entire biblical hel (special mention to vic vs horseman war), vic vs fenrir fight, then vic vs three primordial gods (and 2 god-kings) and currently the second meeting which is ongoing. in just 871 it has so much peak which can't even be compare to some of the novels with 2000 chapters. for that i must commend you author. Your fillers vs hype moments is very well done. Specially if you are reading all this in one go. You will see just how great the pacing and story for the novel is. Now some of the issues i had while reading the novel i will list them as well, it's fair that i praise the novel so i should also bring out it's short coming (though these short coming; most of them are very easy to fix as the story goes on). 1) victor's growth: as much as it is very well done and everything makes sense, but his power in itself leaves a lot to the speculation of the readers, not having a concrete power structure and not knowing what victor or his enemies are capable of does put a lot of things in the air and sometime it feels like maive a pull, like the fight with the 3 primordial gods (logic made sense of the gods not using their true form in that fight while fighting vic and showing vic evolved, all of that makes sense, but we do not even know how strong true form 'primordial gods' are, what we know is they are weaker then mc who fought them while he was 'god king' power, you get what i mean right. no where in the novel we have been given a 'definite' power structure which makes no sense at all. (i will get to that chapter 0 in a moment). I will be honest, i am a very big fan of planetary, galactic, universal and multiversal level of fights and i am seeing this novel going in that direction which is a ma**ive plus. This allows you to being 'outerverse gods' who should be astronomically stronger then whatever gods are in the 'backwater cosmos' (i believe we were told this for earth location) to 'mid region cosmos' but please give us some sort leveling structure or chart to keep tabs on every gods and what type of power scale they would have. (i have seen something like that done on the wiki fandom 'power hierarchy' and victor's 'power level' page, as much as i like it, it says that it's been done as a fan-made stuff so that doesn't really cut it. Till the novel itself validate it. There will be mistakes in that. Well anyways i think you may have some things planned regarding power structure which you could show in the future so i will stop saying more about this issue. 2) (a) harem: i love big harems specially when mc is not a simp and gets 'undeserved' love from fmcs and those 'cold shoulder' giving fmcs do not exist in this novel which i truly love about the harem. Now the issue is, with such a big harem it is bound to have screen time issues with the girls. I have seen plenty of novels suffer from this so it is not new, but this novel is just so good that genuine criticism and issues are very 'generic' issues present in all the harem novels. Some wives like victoria, mizuki, siena, lacus, eve/alter eve(surprisingly she is probably the least of the maids to get screen time), rose, eleonor, haruna (her presence in the novel in terms of wife is on the weaker side), demon generals like vine, vepar, helena, lily even though there work itself forces them to be in hel* and manage things there but this doesn't change the fact that they feel so extra and (very weak? or just the fights we see in this novel have reached such a point that normally strong beings feel weak). (b) lovers/love interests: with the theme this novel is going with 'emperor' vic and 'empress' violet its already fair to say that the current harem would increase due to victor's personality. characters like natasha (naty), carmila, valeria, maya feels very badly executed, they could be much more but with the novels pacing, their appearance timing makes them feel extremely irrelevant to the story, though i see this can change very easily as faction power matters a lot in wars and they could become strong enough to be considered one of the 'powerhouses' of dragon nest but for now, they feel weak to be worth anything. Also please do something with anna, i personally do not care if she truly leaves leon (as far i remember they didn't had any vampire ritual so they are not married) or stays with leon, but end this mini 'drama-like' arc that's been in background since she transformed into vampire. Even in the 'omake/future' chapter its hinted that anna is still with victor and was still referred as 'mother-in-law' i just don't know what to make of it, whatever you choose, please choose it fast so readers are not being left there hanging for so long. (c) goddesses such as lilith, nyx, gaia, amaterasu, hera, rhea, frigga (maybe in the norse conquest he also gets her?), hela (it's been hinted for a while that he will get the ruler so it is a matter of time), kali (ain't gonna lie i really do want her but idk if you would be fine with those 'religious' people acting like keyboard warriors and keep hara**ing you so i will just leave it to you.), hestia (her case has been dragging on for 200ish chapters, you should really conclude it soon.). 3) general characters: i have noticed this but there is a severe lack of 'strong' and 'competent' male characters ( i do not count genderfluid beings like regulators or end beast). I do not know what you really plan, but this novel could do really well with male characters who could be reoccurring and friends with victor (character like shiva could be great as beauty and charm doesn't really work effectively against him so good friendship could be form with characters like him and those characters should be able to face against victor and could do a 'draw match' though we know victor is stronger then shiva but you get the point, just introduce beings who are on the same level as victor even if they are millions or billions of years older then him but at least the novel shouldn't just be female dominated powerhouses). Though don't get me wrong, i don't want male characters to join victor's dragon nest pantheon but just good friends who could rival each other and force each other to become stronger and stronger 4) usage of words: there is a very very high over usage of words such as 'handsome' and sentences about how victor is this and that, we really don't need to be reminded of how handsome, strong, competent, genius victor is, we know everything, we have been seeing his pov all this time, we know him more then his harem itself knows of him. You should really cut down on same sentences being repeated in every other chapter while stroking victor's naturally big ego. It is very hypocritical that victor says how big gods ego are and all, but next we see his ego is even bigger then all the gods combine, sure victor has the power to have that ego but that doesn't really mean you have to repeat it all the time. 5) retconning information: I have seen a few times that the information which we are told gets thrown out of the window with new info which makes every info-dump that characters give meaningless. prime example would be yggdrasil, she was said to be a neutral tree when Scathach said about her bad personality and she had seen her. then 200~300 chapters later victor says that there is a negative side of the world tree in biblical hel? so the initial a*essment of yggdrasil being neutral tree is wrong. Another being amaterasu and her brothers, initially her brothers, susanoo and tsukiyomi were told to be average gods, but later we are told that amaterasu is a second generation primordial god that would literally mean that her brothers are also the same, so why were they ever called average gods in chapter 0 when victor's power was discussed. Kali case is also super weird like, she was said to be in same level as special being like vlad but then we got told that she is literally the strongest goddess and near the path to become a primordial entity, the information retcons that happen through out the story is not good. Vlad is also has a very funny situation, he was introduced as one of the strongest being and him alone resulted in other pantheons to not attack his faction and was capable of making friends with shiva and limbo, but the more you are shown the more you see how weak mortal factions truly are, witches were always weak, werewolves only had fenrir but otherwise they are weak, vampires had the countesses and vlad but now countesses are in another faction, vlad alone means vampires and werewolves are more or less in same situation. Yokai? well they were introduced as a new faction and they joined victor's faction so they were spared from the start. Eldergods who want to remove vampires from their planet, their god-king is said to be as strong as victor (you said it in a comment but its not said in the novel so i expect a retcon to this anyway), why the fk elder gods couldn't get rid of vlad and his vampire faction before even victor story started? this just makes no sense at all. 6) ranking: i have seen some mentions of top 10 gods and such, but we never really got that list and we genuinely just have no idea how many strong gods and mortals are even in the earth sector and universe. In the initial a**essment on chapter 0 literally all primordial gods (1st and 2nd gen) are ranked 1 which really doesn't help with the understanding of powerful people, through out the novel we are told that power level is not constant, which is nice, but if we do not even have a base concrete standards for power some of these 'generalized gods and beings' have, how can we even imagine what would happen if these two beings fight or who would be able to fight one vs one with victor and such. That part just doesn't exist in this novel. These were some of the points i wanted to bring out and say to you while reading this novel, i see a lot and lot of potential that still hasn't been tapped in this novel and there could be so many plots and arcs that could be explored in the future. Thanks for this amazing novel and keep doing your best with this novel. I love reading this story so much
TLDR - Scathath best girl Okay, so this is one if not the first review I had to write for a novel on this site. I love the premise and while the beginning develops quite fast, the characters and MC are very well done. Came for the waifus, staying for Scathath
The characters so far have all been interesting, fun and engaging. The updates have been regular. Story in intriguing and has been developing well so far keeping me interested in what's to come. Only reason I didn't give the world 5 stars is just that there hasn't been enough time to flesh it out yet meaning so far it's been good, but not enough to say if it will become amazing, just stay good or become less good. Definitely interested in learning more about the world though.
This is a really great novel, have been following this since it had around 600~ chapters. The daily wait for one chapter was way too harsh at times. never thought this novel would actually turn me, a manga, manhwa, manhwa enjoyer into reading blocks of text. Before reading mtw, literally never thought i would sit in chair and read a wn as i always thought, there is no way i would enjoy reading text only. but this proved my initial thought wrong. Now i actually like reading novels quite a lot. i have read till the recent chapter 887 as of this review and i must say, the sheer amount of plot progression that happened in one single volume cant be matched to all your previous volumes combined. Vol1 to vol5 is like prep for our mc victor, he was basically a continental level powerhouse near the end of demon wars and in king among kings, he is now at galaxy level which is fkin n*ts. He literally is like a cosmic horror akin to lovecraft works tho obviously if u compare the power, vic is quite significantly weaker then great old ones and such but i can totally see victor surpa** them in power scale as we are barely at vol 7 and i heard there could be 5 or 6 more volumes in plan, if following the same type of progression and cool powerups, vic could very well be the definition of op mc, a true weak to strong then to op mc. also really want to know, just how many volumes are you truly planning as this volume alone has been going for like 6-8 months already, probably the biggest volume for this novel till date. It did give of the feeling that you would end this novel in like next volume or something which i hope isn't true. this probably is my personal opinion, but i think you could try to lower your avg word count per chapter and give us 2 chap a day for a lot more consistency. which would atleast be a good return for the privilege purchase, like the highest priv locks 50 chapters/50 days worth of chapter for 30(31) days. and given your tight schedule, we barely even get 30 chaps a month. could you like lower the priv pruchase for the highest one or just make more chaps to justify the cost. while reading the story, specially in the current 800chap onwards, there is often mentions of 'sectors' 'galaxies' 'universes' and 'cosmos' this novel just makes me confuse as to what scale of things sometime being talked about by the characters. Earth is in milky way galaxy and earth is a mid level sector, so does this sector means that entire galaxy itself is a mid level sector area or a sector means one planet/solar system or multiple galaxies can be equated to one sector. Same confusion with samar and nightingale. gods in this novel are kind of really weak(?) tbh. idk why but aren't gods suppose to be omnipotence and omnipresent beings. but they all do some much dumb decisions, even more idiotic then mortals do from time to time. Clarification of god level is really poorly done, like from what i understood, its basically just primordial entty>primordial god>peak god king>god king>high level battle gods> average gods>low level combat gods>minor gods such as mountain god, etc. It truly feels very barebone. Victor basically already tops the power levels if you just remove regulators, as they are said to be truly infinite power, victor is nowhere near reaching that. There are emperors and overlords, but sometime i dont even understand how powerful they are tbh. All the primordial gods we have seen, no one has ever used their true forms and actually go all out and we dont truly see the scale of destruction being done. Where as if you look at victor, he has so many powers left to be explored and he is already galaxy creator level. We still dont know what his bld dragon exclusive progenitor perks. His concepts which awakened really recently also have a long way to go. He has gained both positive and negative energy sources, he has begin. only thing left form him to access chaos concept should be end only i guess. He also has yet to reach grandmaster and the stage above grandmaster well. so many power ups left. But the character pool of beings who could fight vic and make vic go all out doesn't really exist anymore. We have yet to see foreign entties who could very well face slam earth gods like a joke. that could be entertaining to see, but for now there is no as such character in the story. Velnohra won't be an enemy to vic anyway, so i hope the enemy she has is very very strong for her to go to a mid level sector to ask for help. The harem, please author make dedicated chapters for the girls first time at least, just having it skipped with just one or two lines is so lame, even the big o**y was skipped with some word counts, it is such a big l, big harem should in turn give us more seggs and more threesms and such, it just lacks so much in that department, its so sad. overall till chapter 887, i whole heartedly rec this series to anyone who likes an actual alpha mc and really like big harem in the scale of 30 to 50 harem members with the current pacing.
This will be a review and also a couple suggestions on my part. Please note that this is just my personal opinion with the suggestions and should not be taken too seriously. The story overall is great, absolutely love it. How all mythologies come together is great and very well depicted in the story of how these interact with each other and Victor himself. I love how the world is and how there is more than just "Earth", with other sectors and other lands with different gods and creatures, variety is there, and that is very important to keep things interesting. The fight scenes are more than enough and are interesting. Some arcs are really great such as Demon War Arc/Victor vs Diablo. Others however are not so great imo, such as the Samar Arc, it is great that we get to see Victor make friends with Aurora and Fenrir, however Tasha and Maya joining Vic`s Harem is something that troubles me about the Character Design and Development. The characters are interesting, and overall different, however when it does come to the harem, I am starting to get frustrated a little bit. The problem is, that there are many characters that are just either not important to the story, or are not developed enough to become important. The characters that are not developed enough but are joining are for example characters such as Carmilla, Victoria, and Naty/Natasha Fulger. They are not relevant per se to the story itself and do not change anything whether they are there or not, they might change something about Sasha or Natashia, but to the overall bigger picture mean almost nothing. Same can not be said about characters such as Kali, Nyx, Persephone, Gaia, Lilith, and the Generals. They are important first of all for the reason that they are strong, or have strong subordinates such as Gaia with Typhon. Or are a strength of the MC as well. And therefore can be said to be important to the story. The problem however now comes that the story is progressing quickly with Overlords and Emperors coming in, but the characters are not progressing. They are not part of the wives yet such as Gaia, Nyx, Persephone, Amaterasu, basically the strong goddesses and the generals as well. Therefore it is important that these characters need to be developed and added to the harem. Therefore, when a new arc either starts, such as Samar Arc, Victor should not be getting any more wives as of right now, because as the aforementioned characters are already not developed enough, and adding more will be difficult if the variety and difference in characters is not properly addressed, and then it will become a pokemon pick-up harem. This can also be said for characters such as Anna, we know it will happen but we dont know when and what will happen so therefore I suggest taking the time to progress the mentioned characters. The story is progressing in a good pace which I believe is very important, however for it to develop further some characters need to be removed, such as New Dawn, Egyptian and Norse Pantheon, and Elder Gods. By removed I mean properly killed off. They are too weak, and are just wasting time of the story currently to actually do anything, I have read in the discord that they are cannon fodder, and they should be, but it needs to happen sooner than later. They are weak, bring nothing to develop Victor and the story further, maybe if they hurt one of his wives and he gains divinity or something like that would be a good idea, but as of right now they mean nothing because it is so heavily empathised that Emperors and Overlords are coming that these need to be removed. The scale of strenghts has skyrocketed, with Victor having even more energy than Kali and Shiva, the two strongest on the current earth. Therefore I believe that a slice of life Arc is very important, where Victor gets to meet Kali, Amaterasu, as well as the other major goddesses in his faction should become part of his harem. They need to be developed to 1st. make the characters not the same, 2nd to make Victors overall power and influence grow so the story can properly progress. The World overall is great, with is background being the primordial entities and the system. I love that we have characters that are so strong that the MC has a goal, and love that these people regulate everything and Victor can achieve that, well because he is already as strong as kali in terms of energy. These entities and the system bring something very unique to the story, which is very different from many xianxia novels where u live in the inner world of some heavnly dao guy or something like that. They are impartial and that needs to stay that way and is very important so that it does not come to the typical "I need to break through to not be regulated by some entities anymore". I believe that is very important and should definetely stay that way. Overall, great story, love it! The characters just need to be a little more developed and then it would be perfect for me.
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I read this novel 3 times its that good. please author dont stop this story. I never found a novel that hit all the nodes i like in a harem novel. Though only one complain would be, please make 2 chapter a day. this novel is such a great work but just 1 chap a day and sometime none really hurts.
This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it... Yes, I had commented on this in the past, but it was deleted... T_T, I'll just go here as a reminder, sigh. About the novel, give it a try, as it was my first novel, I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in the beginning, but I improved as the volumes went on. I hope you like it.