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摘要
Cole Sullivan is your typical teenager who loves to play streaming matches with his squad INTREPID.
But he got diagnosed with a disease that would turn him blind slowly. With no hope in life, hanging on the verge of turning blind forever in the future, Cole comes across the bionic lenses offered to him which little to his knowledge, he had no idea that it was more than just two pieces of lenses to clear his vision.
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With Cole having no idea what The Suprem Vision System is, the host itself activates the system also while calling out for the extraterrestrial beings for a relay as it functioned that way.
Unknown to Cole, the entire universe is after him now!
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"Stop changing my eye color," Cole yelled.
"What? Why? Don't you want to attract the girls? Half of them are attracted to eye color."
"Then stick to one color. You keep changing them every second from blue, green, grey, orange. People are giving me weird looks." Cole wailed.
"Oops! My bad! Too many girls here and all have different preferences."
Cole just groaned amid the shopping mall.
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READ TO FIND OUT ABOUT COLE'S JOURNEY! THIS IS NOT LIKE YOUR TYPICAL SYSTEM NOVEL! THINGS GET INTERESTING, JUST KEEP CALM. IT TAKES TIME!
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has a good author has good writing quality and draws me in whats not to give it a 5 star for I also want to say this, imma post memes on this daily. right now I gotta sleep as I have been awake all day and night since yesterday
An amazing story that does not disappoint! I hope the author keeps the quality of the storyline because it's amazing! I look forward to each and every chapter. 👍
[ E X C E L L E N T ] A very good read, the story is so good and well written. Grammar is beyond decent as I hardly found any errors in the book. What I love most about this book is no dragging plot, the story is realistic so we can relate. Both ML and FL are refreshing and interesting characters. FL is so cool and not a pushover and I really like her character, I just hope both of them can work out on their misunderstanding asap. So far the smut scenes were so hot! But I think you don't need to censor the moaning cursing words on their love making. Oh also, maybe you can try to write the smut scene from Male pov, it would be great for male readers (shameless me 😤) Story : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Male lead : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Female lead : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Smut : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Overall : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I have been reading this book religiously and I m hooked. I feel like this book deserves so much more. The author is doing a great great job and I m so glad I came across this book. It's a total new plot, everyone should read it [img=recommend]
I loved this story very much as I read this in wattpad... please update soonest. This story is really interesting and everyone should take the chance to read this story
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All the chapters are replaced and yet another new cool plot. The author has taken a different plot this time and true as it is, this one is as much interesting as the first one. I m not a fan of the system novels, but this one..this one is different[img=faceslap][img=recommend] give a try guys
Ahhhh....another masterpiece from a legend! I am soo excited for this book and I don't need to think how it would go as I feel it would be awesome. I hope this book will go to a very high peak and keep on being loved by all! I love this and you too❤ sarahghae❤❤😚
This is another masterpiece, Chaya! I super love the story! I love the way you introduced the main characters! I also like the way you purposedly made us readers confused, making us look forward to the next chapters! Great job! 😍😍😍
The synopsis already has me hooked, and as I got to the chapters it's even better. Your writing quality, plot, and description is wonderfully done. There's really nothing bad to say about this but keep up the good work.
It's such a fantastic read!! The descriptions are absolutely beautiful and takes me right to the scene. It's like watching a movie while I read. Definitely check it out! Keep up the good work author <3
WOW VERY GOOD WORK KEEP IT UP THE PROLOGUE IS LEGENDARY I READ YOUR CHOOSE BETWEEN TWO BOOK that book is also very interesting thats why i came to read this book also u r my fav writer now on webnovel
I like the premise of this story and I really can't wait to see where it goes from here. I'm excited for what's to come in the future. I can say that NEVER is something you should DEFINITELY read
Interesting premise though I can't say much more since its just the prologue ATM. Cheers to you on more chapters soon! 👍👌👏Interesting premise though I can't say much more since its just the prologue ATM. Cheers to you on more chapters soon! 👍👌👏
Despite after replacing all the previous chapters of the novel, the author has succeeded in creating a marvellous and fabulous system novel with a scifi genre. Writing Quality: Really nice. excellent. Story Development: As I mentioned above the author has replaced the chapters because of a certain reason that is why we readers might find the earlier chapters short but believe me you will get immerse in the story to read more. Cole gets a Vision system which opens the door of many mysteries in the story. Not gonna spoil it here. Do check this story and believe me you will gonna enjoy it. Keep up with the good work, dear author.