摘要
First Gift: Dynamic Vision → Bullet Time → Inherent Time Control - Acceleration → Inherent Time Control - Time Stop…
Tao Yu reincarnated into a world being devoured by the Abyss and discovered that as long as he was willing to expend enough Yuan Force, he could infinitely enhance his skills.
With the help of his special gift, Tao Yu gradually realized that the world fragments within this Abyss were somewhat different, containing parts of Earth’s remains, and even legends from Earth were buried within…
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It’s been quite entertaining. There are some translation issues, mostly switching between pronouns for the protagonist but easily breezed over.
No wonder it doesnt have a rating. I hate lazy authors. You said it's got a system but that ain't the system settings. Just dumping skills that's not even needed and unnecessary story lines. You better go back and rewrite this shit if not it ain't getting nothing. It started with a bit of hope but after the MC awakening it all went down the drain with the lazy set up
It's great if you're chinese. The start was awesome and very relatable, but when the chinese movie/book world was introduced, everything went down the drain. The mc was good. Cautious, smart and pragmatic. But I just can't follow the story when, it's like the author thinks everyone knows the chinese movie world. Understandably, this is for chinese audience in the first place.
i cant quite pinpoint nor articulate why or how it does it but this book has this effect where, as you read it the sentences melt your brain. That is not to say that the story is nonsensical, so far it's been fine, but rather that something in the way it's presented makes it unbearable. Maybe it's the constant subliminal feeling that you're just not quite grasping all the information that should be there or perhaps it's something else i do not know. if i were to describe it I'd say it's reminiscent of an unholy chimera between the uncanny valley and weapons grade adhd getting injected straight into my veins.
it started a little slow but great, then it became disappointing and cringe especially the world building and the behavior of the mc
Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] This is a translator novel.. You might think why there are no tags.. Here is the tag that suits this novel: #NoHarem #Weak-to-Strong #Action #System #Superpower #Magic Well, I pretty sure that this translator is just translating the novel without care to read the story.. He has not taken this work seriously and is doing this dilly dally.. The translation is good at the beginning, don't feel like MTL at all. BUT As chapters progress further, the quality of the translation gets worse from time to time.. The name of "thing" are not constant, they changing sometimes.. For example, MC has a skill called Mental Immunity, but sometimes, this translator wrote Spiritual Immunity.. Another example is that there is a guy named Joseph, but sometimes, the translator uses Jose or Josef or Yose.. He is the same person, but there is different spelling on every occasion.. Then the snake monster skill name also changed from "Stalk - Python" to "Lurk - Python".. Sometimes, this translator also wrote the wrong person name.. For example, it actually the other character speaks, but the translator wrote MC name instead, such as, "Tao Yu also glanced at Li Le, perhaps he too found Tao Yu a bit displeasing." It looks like Tao Yu displease with Tao Yu.. lol.. The story seems to have potential and attractive but the more you read, the more your expectations drop significantly.. Until you finally got no interest in reading this novel anymore.. The beginning is quite boring.. Even when I read this novel, I did not fully understand many things.. I'm not sure if it is because the author is not good in explanation or the translator is doing a poor job.. There is no gauge or parameter of the system, which makes it harder to understand.. After killing monster, no EXP.. I also don't understand if there any drop after the monster die.. MC is super duper poor.. Plus, Yuan Force kinda likes currency?? I thought it was like mana or something.. Seriously, I feel like I have become an ADHD person reading this.. So I stopped reading this novel.. Maybe my English is just not that good to understand the flow of this story..
Today the mark for rating translation has been removed though I'll put here 3 stars for translation because there were many times when mc turns female, or where characters names jump back and forth with chinese and literal translations. and there are also a lot of chinese terma that actually do not make sense in English so please revise them and put it into words everyone would understand. Other that that, the novel is Awesome! Very interesting lore and MC doesn't seem to be exaggeratedly overpowered with his golden finger! The narration is a bit slow paced bit the content is thorough and every step makes sense more or less. Good job, Author! make it till New Year and don't drop it then because your timetable. I guess many people would be eager to donate you if won't drop it then and the story would be same original and exciting !
It’s a good book, though I’ve read up to chapter 270 and I can already feel the chaos in my skills, I hope they will somehow become integrated in the future
pretty sure the use of the alien films and the fact I need to pay to read violates copywrite laws
seems promising, please don't drop in quality or in chapter updates