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has a good author has good writing quality and draws me in whats not to give it a 5 star for I also want to say this, imma post memes on this daily. right now I gotta sleep as I have been awake all day and night since yesterday
An amazing story that does not disappoint! I hope the author keeps the quality of the storyline because it's amazing! I look forward to each and every chapter. 👍
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
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the writing is amazing, the character also well describe, for anyone who like games, fantasy and adventures then this book is your best choice 😉 nice work author!
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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All the chapters are replaced and yet another new cool plot. The author has taken a different plot this time and true as it is, this one is as much interesting as the first one. I m not a fan of the system novels, but this one..this one is different[img=faceslap][img=recommend] give a try guys
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fl: 💥💥💥💥💥💥💥 ml : 💥💥💥💥💥💥💥 Izach is my new obsession👌👌😂although he is an ass sometimes intimacy :💥💥💥💥💥💥 storyline :💥💥💥💥💥💥
My bedtime jam hehe. I m loving how the story is going. Author [img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]
I have been reading this book religiously and I m hooked. I feel like this book deserves so much more. The author is doing a great great job and I m so glad I came across this book. It's a total new plot, everyone should read it [img=recommend]
This is a whirl wind story of both people fall in live and yet scared to admit to one and other. This is what happens when people in a relationshiP lacKs proper communication. asdfjk.😣😅
[ E X C E L L E N T ] A very good read, the story is so good and well written. Grammar is beyond decent as I hardly found any errors in the book. What I love most about this book is no dragging plot, the story is realistic so we can relate. Both ML and FL are refreshing and interesting characters. FL is so cool and not a pushover and I really like her character, I just hope both of them can work out on their misunderstanding asap. So far the smut scenes were so hot! But I think you don't need to censor the moaning cursing words on their love making. Oh also, maybe you can try to write the smut scene from Male pov, it would be great for male readers (shameless me 😤) Story : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Male lead : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Female lead : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Smut : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Overall : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
This book it's really great but the reason why I ain't rating it five star is because of the male lead who is my biggest turn off. He's selft centered, arrogant and proud. He's too domineering and I hate it that she can't even stand up on her own against him. She's always showing him how much he affects her. He took advantage of her when she blanked out. I thought he would smell cocaine on her and then they'll talk out things in the morning but it was only my wishful thinking. Would she go on spreading her legs if it was another business man who bought her workers of causs NO, she will plan well as a business woman. I don't see a strong FL here. If only she could give him a hard time so he knew she isn't to be played with. Only looking at him she's already drowning in his eyes like some love lost fool, and he'll keep having her in his bed because of his obsession and anger. I love your book author but I wish the characters will develop more
Ahhhh....another masterpiece from a legend! I am soo excited for this book and I don't need to think how it would go as I feel it would be awesome. I hope this book will go to a very high peak and keep on being loved by all! I love this and you too❤ sarahghae❤❤😚
Thanks for the novel I love it....I don't mean to be rude ..but can't you just put the thoughts in the creators thoughts section instead of just feeling space which can be used to prolong the chapters please .... They are tooo short...my bad though
I just started this book and it's going well. I know it's too early but how long will do misunderstanding stay. They need communication, I can't believe they divorced because of false assumptions from both parties. This thing has broken so many homes, author please don't prolong their misunderstanding as it makes the book less interesting. If you have no plans of clearing the misunderstanding any time soon. You can let meet and confront each other whether good or bad, let them at least talk to each other. Also in another chapter you mentioned about chaise petruding stomach, where's the baby? Or am I reading all wrong?
Quite an interesting plotline and turn of events. I haven't read much books like this but it certainly does keep one engrossed for what more drama is to come 🌟
love your storys keep writing📝. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🤩🤩🤩🤩😍
wow nice story loved it keep writing and entertaining us🤩😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
okay.... I am confuse and I need more! Author! take responsibility! Please update faster.. i am waiting😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Still needs the world building but a huge okay for me. I like how the mc is kinda wise and just idk smart. It is a good reccomendation for new readers as well since it was straight to the point.
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Despite after replacing all the previous chapters of the novel, the author has succeeded in creating a marvellous and fabulous system novel with a scifi genre. Writing Quality: Really nice. excellent. Story Development: As I mentioned above the author has replaced the chapters because of a certain reason that is why we readers might find the earlier chapters short but believe me you will get immerse in the story to read more. Cole gets a Vision system which opens the door of many mysteries in the story. Not gonna spoil it here. Do check this story and believe me you will gonna enjoy it. Keep up with the good work, dear author.
has a good author has good writing quality and draws me in whats not to give it a 5 star for I also want to say this, imma post memes on this daily. right now I gotta sleep as I have been awake all day and night since yesterday
An amazing story that does not disappoint! I hope the author keeps the quality of the storyline because it's amazing! I look forward to each and every chapter. 👍
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
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the writing is amazing, the character also well describe, for anyone who like games, fantasy and adventures then this book is your best choice 😉 nice work author!
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
揭示劇透 All the chapters are replaced and yet another new cool plot. The author has taken a different plot this time and true as it is, this one is as much interesting as the first one. I m not a fan of the system novels, but this one..this one is different[img=faceslap][img=recommend] give a try guys
👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌✌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌✌✌✌👌✌👌👌✌👌👌👌👌👌
fl: 💥💥💥💥💥💥💥 ml : 💥💥💥💥💥💥💥 Izach is my new obsession👌👌😂although he is an ass sometimes intimacy :💥💥💥💥💥💥 storyline :💥💥💥💥💥💥
My bedtime jam hehe. I m loving how the story is going. Author [img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]
I have been reading this book religiously and I m hooked. I feel like this book deserves so much more. The author is doing a great great job and I m so glad I came across this book. It's a total new plot, everyone should read it [img=recommend]
This is a whirl wind story of both people fall in live and yet scared to admit to one and other. This is what happens when people in a relationshiP lacKs proper communication. asdfjk.😣😅
[ E X C E L L E N T ] A very good read, the story is so good and well written. Grammar is beyond decent as I hardly found any errors in the book. What I love most about this book is no dragging plot, the story is realistic so we can relate. Both ML and FL are refreshing and interesting characters. FL is so cool and not a pushover and I really like her character, I just hope both of them can work out on their misunderstanding asap. So far the smut scenes were so hot! But I think you don't need to censor the moaning cursing words on their love making. Oh also, maybe you can try to write the smut scene from Male pov, it would be great for male readers (shameless me 😤) Story : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Male lead : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Female lead : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Smut : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Overall : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
This book it's really great but the reason why I ain't rating it five star is because of the male lead who is my biggest turn off. He's selft centered, arrogant and proud. He's too domineering and I hate it that she can't even stand up on her own against him. She's always showing him how much he affects her. He took advantage of her when she blanked out. I thought he would smell cocaine on her and then they'll talk out things in the morning but it was only my wishful thinking. Would she go on spreading her legs if it was another business man who bought her workers of causs NO, she will plan well as a business woman. I don't see a strong FL here. If only she could give him a hard time so he knew she isn't to be played with. Only looking at him she's already drowning in his eyes like some love lost fool, and he'll keep having her in his bed because of his obsession and anger. I love your book author but I wish the characters will develop more
Ahhhh....another masterpiece from a legend! I am soo excited for this book and I don't need to think how it would go as I feel it would be awesome. I hope this book will go to a very high peak and keep on being loved by all! I love this and you too❤ sarahghae❤❤😚
Thanks for the novel I love it....I don't mean to be rude ..but can't you just put the thoughts in the creators thoughts section instead of just feeling space which can be used to prolong the chapters please .... They are tooo short...my bad though
I just started this book and it's going well. I know it's too early but how long will do misunderstanding stay. They need communication, I can't believe they divorced because of false assumptions from both parties. This thing has broken so many homes, author please don't prolong their misunderstanding as it makes the book less interesting. If you have no plans of clearing the misunderstanding any time soon. You can let meet and confront each other whether good or bad, let them at least talk to each other. Also in another chapter you mentioned about chaise petruding stomach, where's the baby? Or am I reading all wrong?
Quite an interesting plotline and turn of events. I haven't read much books like this but it certainly does keep one engrossed for what more drama is to come 🌟
love your storys keep writing📝. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🤩🤩🤩🤩😍
wow nice story loved it keep writing and entertaining us🤩😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
okay.... I am confuse and I need more! Author! take responsibility! Please update faster.. i am waiting😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Still needs the world building but a huge okay for me. I like how the mc is kinda wise and just idk smart. It is a good reccomendation for new readers as well since it was straight to the point.
THIS IS ANOTHER BLOCKBUSTER BOOK BY THE AUTHOR😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Despite after replacing all the previous chapters of the novel, the author has succeeded in creating a marvellous and fabulous system novel with a scifi genre. Writing Quality: Really nice. excellent. Story Development: As I mentioned above the author has replaced the chapters because of a certain reason that is why we readers might find the earlier chapters short but believe me you will get immerse in the story to read more. Cole gets a Vision system which opens the door of many mysteries in the story. Not gonna spoil it here. Do check this story and believe me you will gonna enjoy it. Keep up with the good work, dear author.