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摘要
Calvin Booker was a war veteran, he lived a good life and died happily without any regrets.
But when he woke up, he discovered he was in a supernatural world where Monsters that came out of the Gate and awakened humans called Hunters who fight against the Monsters.
But that is not the only thing he discovered.
He is Superman.
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This is my second book so please be gentle with me.
English is not my Language.
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My update schedule will be 3 chapters a week: Monday, Wednesday, Friday
Tags:
-NoHarem
-OverpoweredMC
-SlightRomance
-SliceOfLife
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[Extra Chapter every 200 power stones.]
*Cover is not mine, it belongs to -ArtStation- in Pinterest.*
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We start off well, a "Solo leveling" story and it takes place in Japan, its powers are good and somewhat daring. However, it's funny how relatively new authors think that asking for money at the beginning... Correction, financial support for a story that is clearly a failure would be correct. First of all the pesonage is absurd, he is supposedly an old war veteran, with an incredible maturity and coolness to make decisions. Then the author forcibly decided to add forced interaction to claim such a silly love interest. Not to mention that he completely ruined the world development by making the dungeons appear 30 years earlier because he doesn't even know the world in which the story takes place. Cliches and references to typical Japanese novels.... Wrong verb tenses and points of view, scene jumps and internal thoughts used at the wrong times. After chapter 2, everything is absurd.
Pretty childish writing so far with all the standard cringy stereotypes however its a cool concept for a story (superman in solo leveling) and has plenty of room for improvement and should be pretty cool if done well. But still very early days atm.
I had a lot to say on this in my mind but i couldn't express it in words properly, but i had the feeling every time I read a chapter in this novel, and i found the word to describe it "cringe".
don't read if you want to keep your brains... the only good thing about this story is the stability of posting, and apart from the writing, nothing else can be considered even average.(it's just bad)
The story would have been a lot better if the Mc wasn't so old. [Chapter 05] - Isn't this Elementry? Are children this age doing these things? The story made it seem like it was normal. I can understand that children were dumb, why were teachers acting like that? was the rich kid paying the teachers? If the teachers are this easily swayed, How is this school so popular or has a high reputation that Mc's parents who are so influential people agreed to admit Mc here? Did they not do any background checks? Isn't 20 families losing their jobs too much, they didn't do anything their only fault is that their children are dumb. And where did the Drugs and Blackmailing come from, wasn't it just bullying? Did Mc's dad frame the teachers?
Everything about this is mid. Grammar and character interactions, the MC, the world. Everything is just MEH. Its not even worth reading to pass the time honestly. It just missed that mark. So maybe its below MEH 🤔 well, whatever
I will give it 1-star cuz I find it super Boring. <-_- But I will also leave some honest thoughts: The writing quality is good. He knows how to write a novel. Chp is not too short, nor too long. Proper format for everything. Now, what is this novel about: SLICE oF LIFE ik author already told it, but still since this is the main theme of the novel. i decided to point it out again. Some authors write even slice-of-life OP stories in a very interesting manner. So most people enjoy it. But this one seems boring to me. Maybe only me. MC acting cute and all. I am no fan of such. Instead, the facts that starting chapters are just filler, and this author drop 3chp/week. I am like TF? But then again I realized it is a slice of life. So that's it, I just didn't like it. but you guys still give it a try. maybe I will come back and read it later when this novel has 40 or so CHP. so I can skip past the boring chp faster. But for now, I am out.
I can't review in few chapters. Just one think to confirm is MC non-killing Follower.🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
the love interest has ruined any idea i had of this being a great story due to the i would say relationship between them but at this point i would have left her for her own safety because she clearly is suicidal in her need for proving herself to someone who has shown to not care about how strong she is to stand by his side. and then this absolute WASTE of potential says he is PROUD of her...that is not behavior that should be encouraged (rushing headlong into CERTAIN DEATH for someone of her lvl because of a very misguided inferiority complex). but by all means now that she has made a deal for power with the people (Rulers) that want you (a MONARCH) dead go kill your juliet, romeo. thats the only way i see that deal playing out because she is incapable of self confidence.
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I want to split the book into 2 parts. before and after monarchs. It was beautiful before the monarchs and the author contradicted himself very little. but after the rulers too many contradictions joined us. For example, the head of hunters of korea can abandon his own daughter, then mc recognizes himself as an old friend who is the ruler and does what he says almost childishly. After this point, unfortunately, the age group drops to 14-15. and more contradictions and errors appear.
it's not bad, it's good actually, you guys should give it a try, the story is good but the chapters are too few for me, maybe i'll come back once it hits 20-30 chapters, the update speed is good though, the writing quality is not bad, give it a try.
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This is the first fanfic I finished and it was good but I wished it would tell use more about his son and Jin woo
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It's good. Highly recommend it to solo levelling fans. There is one point that I don't like it would be him wearing his Superman costume, I just feel it is unnecessary because most S-rank hunters don't even wear any armour or anything like that.
Definitely one of the best Superman fanfics out there. Recommend![img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
It started nice with the MC having strong powers, the grammar also had very little mistakes that I could find. However the flow of the story was quite bad, with the MC being 90 plus years old somehow acting immaturely. The conversations isn't flowing and are actually awkwards. I stopped reading at chapter 5.
At ch 2 directly after he is reborn he swear to protect some random strangers that he know only at most about 30-60 seconds
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