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this could have been much better but it was just meh it is a decent time killer but over all its lacking ..................... ........................
It started nice with the MC having strong powers, the grammar also had very little mistakes that I could find. However the flow of the story was quite bad, with the MC being 90 plus years old somehow acting immaturely. The conversations isn't flowing and are actually awkwards. I stopped reading at chapter 5.
There are alot of issues with the story some things just dont make sense but hey were humans things cant be perfect. I see there is alot of negative 1 star reviews ngl cant argue with most of them but the story is solid 3 stars with the added respect of finishing the story 4 stars unlike other authors who would drop it after the negative reviews you got. Thanks
At ch 2 directly after he is reborn he swear to protect some random strangers that he know only at most about 30-60 seconds
its cringe... its the 3rd time i have picked up this story, i cant.. i just can't take this no more. MC's background doesn't match with his personality, Characters are 2D with nothing but a single thing to their personality, Writing is boring
yeah...... definitely one of the worst fanfic out there with minor good twist, should've went with **** monarch in SL or something superman is a disrespect......
This is the first fanfic I finished and it was good but I wished it would tell use more about his son and Jin woo
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Hey author great book, I’ve read about 60+ novels by now and I can tell you create awesome stuff. Don’t mind all the narrow minded people who take peoples hard earned work for granted. I on the other hand loved it so keep writing maybe one day you’ll be up there with the greats Er gen, IET and the company
it's a cringe fest and boring. Also the 5 yo Kanae has way too many unneccessary screentime. This should be titled as Superman in SOL instead of Solo levelling since this seems more of a slice of life.
the love interest has ruined any idea i had of this being a great story due to the i would say relationship between them but at this point i would have left her for her own safety because she clearly is suicidal in her need for proving herself to someone who has shown to not care about how strong she is to stand by his side. and then this absolute WASTE of potential says he is PROUD of her...that is not behavior that should be encouraged (rushing headlong into CERTAIN DEATH for someone of her lvl because of a very misguided inferiority complex). but by all means now that she has made a deal for power with the people (Rulers) that want you (a MONARCH) dead go kill your juliet, romeo. thats the only way i see that deal playing out because she is incapable of self confidence.
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This story and writing is too ridiculous to be enjoyable. The grammar is barely understandable. The plot is forced and full of holes. The whole things just comes off as idiotic.
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I stopped at chapter two. I tried to go further but it’s getting worse and worse. The story is rather poorly organized, from the first chapter the scenes are badly written, it seems that they are not in order, the scene with the chimpanzee would have been more moving if Caesar had signed his "thank you". Being a very old man and loved these new parents the second they see them is totally unrealistic. He died at 88, he doesn’t look like one, he’s totally childish, unrealistic in a nutshell, it seems like the author is writing without bothering to proofread, information is given too early or too late, giving a feeling of dissatisfaction, as if something was still missing. I don’t recommend if you want to have a good time.
I want to split the book into 2 parts. before and after monarchs. It was beautiful before the monarchs and the author contradicted himself very little. but after the rulers too many contradictions joined us. For example, the head of hunters of korea can abandon his own daughter, then mc recognizes himself as an old friend who is the ruler and does what he says almost childishly. After this point, unfortunately, the age group drops to 14-15. and more contradictions and errors appear.
Please continue this story as there are not many good solo levelling stories out there. Also the plot of the story is good and does not feel forced. Continue this story please. Continue this story please. Continue this story please. Continue this story please. Continue this story please. Continue this story please. Continue this story please.
Superman in Solo Leveling sounds great! I actually liked how the MC had a full life and it was very well put together. issue is the super cringe scenes, grammar that makes reading this a little painful. This is in no way bashing the writer, keep improving and writing but I can't read beyond chapter 10.
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The book is going really great 👍 same with ur other one…I’m liking Kanae more than Kenji tbh so grt job writing the romance… Can u give me some suggestions on how to write fight scenes..I’m working on a new fanfic nd having some difficulty writing fight scenes..thank u ✌️
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Okey the last thing if he thanked me for that he was literally semi naked to kill the mark of the beasts lolhahaj and God was great the fight :3 I look forward to the next cap
its good, though i think its better to cut of his relationship with kanae.. i dunno, its just super cringe.. He's 96 years old yet he act like a virgin, lovey dovey guy.. its suckss
The story would have been a lot better if the Mc wasn't so old. [Chapter 05] - Isn't this Elementry? Are children this age doing these things? The story made it seem like it was normal. I can understand that children were dumb, why were teachers acting like that? was the rich kid paying the teachers? If the teachers are this easily swayed, How is this school so popular or has a high reputation that Mc's parents who are so influential people agreed to admit Mc here? Did they not do any background checks? Isn't 20 families losing their jobs too much, they didn't do anything their only fault is that their children are dumb. And where did the Drugs and Blackmailing come from, wasn't it just bullying? Did Mc's dad frame the teachers?
Hi, I'm Jin. I'm giving this 5 stars because the author is my cousin...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Imma rate this 5 star cause it's a non harem fic which is something that you can only see once in a lifetime. [img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This book is a little odd at some points but overall I enjoy it a lot, some spelling errors but pretty easy to read all-in-all, the mc is has a glaring weakness but didn't do anything about it yet so that's a little annoying but I do enjoy this book so far and will keep reading.
Mid story overall, but a non-harem that has stable updates is already like a holy text on this site so ill rate it well.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I wouldn't say it's bad, I quite liked it but it got boring around ch29 And I don't see why people said the author made the mc a pedo all the dude did was accepted the girl to be his gf while also telling her mother that he won't do any bad stuff unit she is 18+ so yeah it's a good read and kinda slice of life story
The writing quality is good its pretty understandable to me🧐 The updating stability is slow and steady which is good cause its improves the writing quality Story development is pure garbage like what? Like how did he went to a war veteran to a pedophile like are you for real? I know he is the same age as her but how about his soul and mind?😠 Character Design is good i've seen better but still good👍
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this could have been much better but it was just meh it is a decent time killer but over all its lacking ..................... ........................
It started nice with the MC having strong powers, the grammar also had very little mistakes that I could find. However the flow of the story was quite bad, with the MC being 90 plus years old somehow acting immaturely. The conversations isn't flowing and are actually awkwards. I stopped reading at chapter 5.
There are alot of issues with the story some things just dont make sense but hey were humans things cant be perfect. I see there is alot of negative 1 star reviews ngl cant argue with most of them but the story is solid 3 stars with the added respect of finishing the story 4 stars unlike other authors who would drop it after the negative reviews you got. Thanks
At ch 2 directly after he is reborn he swear to protect some random strangers that he know only at most about 30-60 seconds
its cringe... its the 3rd time i have picked up this story, i cant.. i just can't take this no more. MC's background doesn't match with his personality, Characters are 2D with nothing but a single thing to their personality, Writing is boring
yeah...... definitely one of the worst fanfic out there with minor good twist, should've went with **** monarch in SL or something superman is a disrespect......
This is the first fanfic I finished and it was good but I wished it would tell use more about his son and Jin woo
揭示劇透 Hey author great book, I’ve read about 60+ novels by now and I can tell you create awesome stuff. Don’t mind all the narrow minded people who take peoples hard earned work for granted. I on the other hand loved it so keep writing maybe one day you’ll be up there with the greats Er gen, IET and the company
it's a cringe fest and boring. Also the 5 yo Kanae has way too many unneccessary screentime. This should be titled as Superman in SOL instead of Solo levelling since this seems more of a slice of life.
the love interest has ruined any idea i had of this being a great story due to the i would say relationship between them but at this point i would have left her for her own safety because she clearly is suicidal in her need for proving herself to someone who has shown to not care about how strong she is to stand by his side. and then this absolute WASTE of potential says he is PROUD of her...that is not behavior that should be encouraged (rushing headlong into CERTAIN DEATH for someone of her lvl because of a very misguided inferiority complex). but by all means now that she has made a deal for power with the people (Rulers) that want you (a MONARCH) dead go kill your juliet, romeo. thats the only way i see that deal playing out because she is incapable of self confidence.
揭示劇透 This story and writing is too ridiculous to be enjoyable. The grammar is barely understandable. The plot is forced and full of holes. The whole things just comes off as idiotic.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I stopped at chapter two. I tried to go further but it’s getting worse and worse. The story is rather poorly organized, from the first chapter the scenes are badly written, it seems that they are not in order, the scene with the chimpanzee would have been more moving if Caesar had signed his "thank you". Being a very old man and loved these new parents the second they see them is totally unrealistic. He died at 88, he doesn’t look like one, he’s totally childish, unrealistic in a nutshell, it seems like the author is writing without bothering to proofread, information is given too early or too late, giving a feeling of dissatisfaction, as if something was still missing. I don’t recommend if you want to have a good time.
I want to split the book into 2 parts. before and after monarchs. It was beautiful before the monarchs and the author contradicted himself very little. but after the rulers too many contradictions joined us. For example, the head of hunters of korea can abandon his own daughter, then mc recognizes himself as an old friend who is the ruler and does what he says almost childishly. After this point, unfortunately, the age group drops to 14-15. and more contradictions and errors appear.
Please continue this story as there are not many good solo levelling stories out there. Also the plot of the story is good and does not feel forced. Continue this story please. Continue this story please. Continue this story please. Continue this story please. Continue this story please. Continue this story please. Continue this story please.
Superman in Solo Leveling sounds great! I actually liked how the MC had a full life and it was very well put together. issue is the super cringe scenes, grammar that makes reading this a little painful. This is in no way bashing the writer, keep improving and writing but I can't read beyond chapter 10.
揭示劇透 The book is going really great 👍 same with ur other one…I’m liking Kanae more than Kenji tbh so grt job writing the romance… Can u give me some suggestions on how to write fight scenes..I’m working on a new fanfic nd having some difficulty writing fight scenes..thank u ✌️
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Okey the last thing if he thanked me for that he was literally semi naked to kill the mark of the beasts lolhahaj and God was great the fight :3 I look forward to the next cap
its good, though i think its better to cut of his relationship with kanae.. i dunno, its just super cringe.. He's 96 years old yet he act like a virgin, lovey dovey guy.. its suckss
The story would have been a lot better if the Mc wasn't so old. [Chapter 05] - Isn't this Elementry? Are children this age doing these things? The story made it seem like it was normal. I can understand that children were dumb, why were teachers acting like that? was the rich kid paying the teachers? If the teachers are this easily swayed, How is this school so popular or has a high reputation that Mc's parents who are so influential people agreed to admit Mc here? Did they not do any background checks? Isn't 20 families losing their jobs too much, they didn't do anything their only fault is that their children are dumb. And where did the Drugs and Blackmailing come from, wasn't it just bullying? Did Mc's dad frame the teachers?
Hi, I'm Jin. I'm giving this 5 stars because the author is my cousin...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Imma rate this 5 star cause it's a non harem fic which is something that you can only see once in a lifetime. [img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This book is a little odd at some points but overall I enjoy it a lot, some spelling errors but pretty easy to read all-in-all, the mc is has a glaring weakness but didn't do anything about it yet so that's a little annoying but I do enjoy this book so far and will keep reading.
Mid story overall, but a non-harem that has stable updates is already like a holy text on this site so ill rate it well.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I wouldn't say it's bad, I quite liked it but it got boring around ch29 And I don't see why people said the author made the mc a pedo all the dude did was accepted the girl to be his gf while also telling her mother that he won't do any bad stuff unit she is 18+ so yeah it's a good read and kinda slice of life story
The writing quality is good its pretty understandable to me🧐 The updating stability is slow and steady which is good cause its improves the writing quality Story development is pure garbage like what? Like how did he went to a war veteran to a pedophile like are you for real? I know he is the same age as her but how about his soul and mind?😠 Character Design is good i've seen better but still good👍
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