This is one of my first novels I Read , that emphasizes this much on the internal dilemma of a character and it was quite entertaining to read .
This is engrossing. The genre is quite common but the plot is great and interesting. So far(till chapter 10) the story has been great, let's hope that it will continue in the future .
Maybe make a short POV of liam
[A/N: Would you guys like to see the POVs of the other characters more, or focus mainly on Ren]
Fantasy · avbutt
Kolkata
where are you from ??
yeah
are you Bengali ??
I think you should resurrect the commoners .... mc's personality will suit that .
The story is good . .. .. the plot is also great . .. .but just one request , start powering up the mc . .. .. keep it up and PLEASE DON'T DROP.
The side story is also quite intriguing .. ..
[Author here. Tried not to overthink this chapter. I hit a bit of a writing block here—it's a bit tricky for me to focus too much on characters outside the main cast. Hope you enjoyed it nonetheless!]
Betrayed, I Met The Demon Lord
Fantasy · Hazy_0832