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摘要
Take your time and read me slowly.
This is a story of a young man in the wrong world. No grand design, but a simple mistake. What is a coincidence, what is fate? Such profound thought is unnecessary in this Hellish Apocalyptic world of 'The Walking Dead.'
The story is a revitalization of my old work.
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For now it's 4 chapters but I have little hope in this ... I feel this story is super rushed and lacks detail... it's like watching a movie with video speed X5 ... it's weird to explain but you can guess what happens but it's just too fast... Also I noticed and there might be a chance that the MC has cultivation powers so for any sane/healthy person who wants to avoid that... yeah
I will rain my powers stones on this novel like a middle aged men rains his money on a stripper in the strip club. Kepp goin author.!!!!!!!!!
It was good until it was dropped. My previous review: Great fanfiction! The grammar is good, you won't have to reread sentences constantly. But it's not perfect, you'll encounter some minor errors that can easily be looked over. Chapter release is steady, I read a chapter around late afternoon then wake up to another chapter in the morning. Story development is at a good pace, but falls a bit when it comes to characters. There isn't a lot of thrill like how the show was. It's almost predictable, but hopefully that changes in later chapters after butterfly effects ripple constantly. In terms of character design, the OC characters have some plot but the interaction between characters seem stiff and a bit off. That's just how I feel about it, if there were some chapters that were dedicated to some of the characters to have a better understanding of them maybe it might feel better. Though I won't lie, I probably won't read those chapters if the first one of them is not interesting. In terms of relationships between characters, Amy in my opinion is too clingy. She died early on in the original work so not much to really know her actual character. But relations in general between the MC feel really clingy and possessive, the constant *** and blowjobs also make the relationship aspects of the novel dull. (But aye, the views that you'll get since lets be honest. A lot of the people who read fanfics desire "harem, ***, harem, ***, more ***, more women for harem." But that's just how the community for the genre ended up on this site. It's either you write smut or an out of the box, yet good, novel.) World background, there isn't a lot of areas shown in the show, but obviously it's literally our planet. The author has a lot of potential to not follow cannon and branch off to other towns, cities, states, countries, continents, and islands, that he isn't using to his advantage. It's still early in the story, so it's understandable that he wants to follow cannon a bit before making the novel entirely his own. Overall, it's a good read so far. I enjoy it and hopefully I enjoy the story later on.
Writing quality: 4 star Updating stability: 1 star Story development: 1 star Character desing: 1 star World background: 0 star The protagonist said that he will not follow the plot and that he would not join Rick's group, after a few paragraphs he joined Rick's group. the protagonist said that he will not go to the center of Atlanta and the CDC also told others not to go there, but then he goes to that place Rick orders to go there and tells Mc that he has to go with him to protect the group.
Interesting development of the story’s flow and keep you track of what coming next.
excellent story so far please continue and don't give up.................................................................................……………...
why did you stop plzz don't give up it was just starting to get really good.............................................................……………......
Great thank for the story It's fun and you are the first fan fiction of the walking dead that I read^^ ............................................................................................................................
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Great work! I'm enjoying the steady pace development of the story line. Can't wait to see how your created characters impact the walking dead world.
This is good keep it up. Very well writing. Lengthy chapters. And bad ass MC. It very good so far in my opinion.......................................................................................