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Burn this pile of trash. Half of the reviews were probably made by the author with different accounts. The other half are 5 year olds with weird fetishes. (emoji spam and terrible use of punctuation intensifies)
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I like it how he gradually use the liquid to slowly capture his targets and don't rush. needs a bit more release rate because we want more. Just hope it doesn't get dropped.
I love the novel it's amazing the only thing is I wish for you to release more and move up the passing of time a little it feels like only 3days have passed since the beginning I mean what about school, vacation or going to the mall, beach he's a teenager and he hasn't left the house yet in 58 chapters and even if he doesn't feel confident about doing stuff outside it helps progress incase writers block *hint* *hint*
I see da seggs i see da seggs i liek huhuhuhu 100/5 words words wordswords words wordswords words wordswords words wordswords words wordswords words wordswords words wordswords words wordswords words words
keep updating Thor, and the storyline is expanded, for example school arc, teacher, friends with their mother (oyakodon). Thank you[img=recommend]
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this is ART!!!!!!!!! ...................................................................................................................................................................
i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating
At sixty chapter the mc cannot control the house .... to slow progress[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Getting better and better still it would be nce if pictures of the girld wuold be added
Pretty good. I like this fast pace stuff no need to delay stuff that will happen for more plot. too much plot ruins it sometimes but this is good.