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When an ordinary dude gets plopped into a different reality, and in Star Wars at that. Everything tends to spiral out of control.
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I was looking forward to the idea of the story, however, reality is often disappointing. I belive it's written by or with AI, the descriptions and the repetitive use of pointless phrases scream AI. Unless author is repeating phrases like "The immense weight of his future knowledge. . ." for no reason, it's AI.
Very clearly written by AI since it’s basically repeating itself 1/4 of the chapters is the same with different words, sometimes not even different words just plain the same
Its refreshing to see a story thats this good i hope to see more updates until this story is finished i would like to say please dont stop writing isee so many storys that are chinese translations lately that i became sick of them this is good
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The book is great so far keep updating things repeating is not a major issue but a minor one. grammarly is good keep using it I don’t have to do mental gymnastics to understand what is happening
I like this, i like the story a lot... Please continue this story, it is quite pleasing...
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one of the best fanfic ive read. the flaw this book have is few repeating sentence which a mild annoyance to me for bow. but if t keeps happening, i can see my future self might get frustrated by unnecessary annoyance. for now its one of the most enjoyable fanfic ive read. advice to author : the book title is cool but it probably have less publicity and hard to find for people who seek star wars fanfic
I'm at chapter 20. Even those some thoughts from MC are questionable, It was still a good read. The only thing I'm worried about it before starting to read is the lack of chapters. And after 20 chps in I'm still if not more worried, that how good the read was.
Only on chapter 4 but wanted to leave a review with my thoughts for the author or any potential readers on a few thing so first of all I don't think AI is being used to write this as in AI isn't actively writing or changing the authors writings I believe the reason for this mistake is at the start of every chapter so far the author sets the scene with a description of the surroundings(which has been the jedi temple each time again only on ch4) there are no other tells like clunky writing weird descriptions pronouns being randomly switched ect the writing quality e.g spelling and grammar punctuation is really good so far and so far the character building is good if you where aiming to make him seem the type to think alot while being quite impulsive he seems convinced almost immediately he was brought by a higher power to save the galaxy despite no hints to this which is weird but other than that I would recommend anyone give it a go will update my review as necessary
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It is honest a lot of fun too read this. Its been a month, update it GOD DAMN IT!
Would give more but its been a while since the last chap. But overall, no mistakes, slow and steady character development and no op mc within 5 chapters. Overall i enjoyed this one and hope for more chapters in the future.
I loved this novel quite alot definitely one of the best SW fanfics ive ever read I highly hope you continue with writing this
I'm loving it. Please don't drop :( it's so sad when someone is good at writing fanfic, and they just drop it. Please keep up the good work, i love where you're going with the story so far.
I like this story I would like to know if the mc will have any romantic attachment
I dropped, but you may ask why the five star review, because liking something and something being good can be two different things. even though i dropped due to my own taste. i was still compelled to give a five star review. This is well worth a read