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摘要
Power-hungry MC? Check!
Evil MC? Check!
Pervert MC? Check!
Harem? Check!
What? You are still here?
Go read the damn story!
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This is my first time writing a story. Also English is not my first language. As for grammar? What's that? Is it eatable?
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- 寫作品質
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- 人物形象設計
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other than mc being idiot, i can say no more..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
So auth are you going tO continue the book…please continue it its pretty good✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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the story is awesome everything is good only the problem is less chapters update when it update God knows when , I hope that author san increase the speed for updating as it been more than 8 months only 20 chapters have updated I hope that author san make update 4~5 chapters as it very less chapters . Everything is good only the updating chapter is the problem
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This my most aproximate evaluation for this story. I do not like super short chapters only for saying some details about the MC transformation , I do not like that the MC is getting to choose 1 OP ability before being transferred and the " system " gives him sooo many op stuff for free just because , just say that MC will have more powers. Up until now the story is meh, maybe with more chapters it will get better for up until chapter 5 I did not experience any " good MC " or any interesting start.