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I’m the Owner of the Pokémon Day Care In the World of Pokémon
4.47 (75 評分)
摘要
After a brief slumber, Yuga woke up to find himself in the world of Pokémon, inheriting a family daycare business.
Note:
1. This book is a Pokémon fan fiction.
2. The story is heavily inspired by the animated series in terms of world-building and characters.
3. Early chapters
may contain mature themes, reader discretion is advised.
4. The main storyline involving the day care may have a slower start, please be patient.
5. Prior to reading, it is recommended to review the introductory sections for relevant information.
6. This story does not feature a female lead.
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Overall, Daycare Owner is extremely difficult to read with a main character who has shown themselves to be an unlikable sociopathic Mary Sue. If you do decide to pick up this fanfiction, then I wish you luck in deciphering the numerous grammar and word usage mistakes.Otherwise, it updates frequently. Updating stability should not be a factor when reviewing a story, and as such, I am giving it the average score.
Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read
Well , good concept just not good enough characters . It has few Chinese fanfic trademarks which I guess are expected from a MTL translation. Our mc is simply a uncharismatic , who just asks pokemon to be with him and they just agree (not all of them). This story itself is very much system dependent which is a minus for me. Our mc is also lazy and does everything to avoid hardwork. Pokemon battles aren't interesting enough as well. And i guess there aren't any female lead which is another disappointment . This is all after I've read 100 chapters . I guess i can try to read another 100 chapters . Of there is any improvement then , I'll delete this review .
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Pretty good story with translation that gets better the farther you read. Really good update stability and a Mc that isn’t the annoying Chinese young master type. Keep up the good work👍🏻
as promises I changed the rating I gave because I like the development of the story. the story itself is good, not perfect, but still good. it is a refreshing Pokemon fanfic because it's more of a daily life business of Pokemon in the Pokemon world. there are some battles and training arc for those that like some kind of action.
Honestly you have to turn your brain off to read this novel the logic is even inconsistent especially in regards to status screens and aptitudes of the pokemons. The main character is written as a manipulative person who abuses the dumbness of his starter pokemon. This treatment is written off as comedic release and is not taken seriously. The story is a bit slow but the release rate is incredibly high so it kinda balances that out. There aren’t too many grammatical errors. Overall a solid but not great story you can pass time with but shouldn’t get too invested in.
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This is one of the best pokémon fanfic I have read. It has a good and exciting story. It has a unique view of the pokémon world which is usually overlooked. I hope to read this story till its completion. I am looking forward to reading this story for a long time to come.
The idea of the story is awesome. but ultimately it fails to delivery on its premise. A daycare no ones allowed to enter or question. of the thousand pokemon hes collected to sell and breed, only a handful have been sold. The blue potentials sit and languish, doing nothing except breeding. No one questions his pokemon, no one questions his strength, no one seems to be aware of anything he does. idk, I bet professional Chinese writers are awesome but Chinese fanfic authors are the dumbest breed of human in existence. maybe one or two normal ones but for the most part trash. it reflects in this story. if he didn't have social plot armor he wouldn't have friends. and lastly, the translation is decent but there should of been editing and replacing of Chinese phrases to more English ones. it might be some proverb but how it translated, it sounds like nonsense.
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Of course 5 star for me since it's quite a relaxation and enjoyable to read. Also a plus since a lot of chapter already release👌👌
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the book is spectacular and had been truly interesting from the very first chapter and after reading the first chapter I become a ''diehard" fan of this beautifully written/translated book ❤️ 😍 form 🇵🇰 🇵🇰 [img=recommend][img=recommend]
No female interest is dumb..just a single.virgin weeb loser honestly..what is a he a monk his whole life..dumb when people do this in stories..doesn't have be all romance but just nothing is boring af..