/ Anime & Comics / saiki kusuo with super idol girlfriend
摘要
He just gets back at his new world little by little get back his all ability op psychic powers... This not real deal but the first after Saiki wakes up, he was not just alone in his room. he sleeps visit with an adorable little girl
What happens with his life now?
Who her mother?
Saiki just get said the first time is
"Yare yare... She little girl with cute while sleeping... W-Who she is?"
"Emm... Papa. Morning!" Little girl said
"..." Saiki Speechless after hear this.
'What happened god make a joke with me?!!!'
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Alright, to be quite honest I was excited when I found a DLS fanfic novel. However, I'm disappointed. From the bad Grammer ( misspelling, capitulation, keywords ), and world explanation. The only thing I found right was the character descriptive writing, though there were some misha** here and there. Out of all of those things the worst thing I found was Saki's personality. It's not the neutral "no emotion" character. It's more of a chaotic out of character personality. Like a steak in the veggie isle. It doesn't fit. I guess what I'm trying to say is good idea bad execution.
Hello author daunloco here This second book for Saiki kusuo main character And for world i try mix all anime Related to ability cards, item card, and misterius world as (anime world) Thanks try for reading If have any question chat me here thanks. See you next time
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Ichigo hoshimiya Aikatsu... Support job, mix anime world. Good concept Just another fanfic can be try. Grammy need more learn Good luck for your write.
I’ll give this 4 stars for now I’ve never seen a Saiki K fanfic before and I’m excited to see how this story goes.