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Ichigo hoshimiya Aikatsu... Support job, mix anime world. Good concept Just another fanfic can be try. Grammy need more learn Good luck for your write.
Alright, to be quite honest I was excited when I found a DLS fanfic novel. However, I'm disappointed. From the bad Grammer ( misspelling, capitulation, keywords ), and world explanation. The only thing I found right was the character descriptive writing, though there were some misha** here and there. Out of all of those things the worst thing I found was Saki's personality. It's not the neutral "no emotion" character. It's more of a chaotic out of character personality. Like a steak in the veggie isle. It doesn't fit. I guess what I'm trying to say is good idea bad execution.
Hello author daunloco here This second book for Saiki kusuo main character And for world i try mix all anime Related to ability cards, item card, and misterius world as (anime world) Thanks try for reading If have any question chat me here thanks. See you next time
💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓Don't stop this novel plz 😘💕💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
I’ll give this 4 stars for now I’ve never seen a Saiki K fanfic before and I’m excited to see how this story goes.
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Ichigo hoshimiya Aikatsu... Support job, mix anime world. Good concept Just another fanfic can be try. Grammy need more learn Good luck for your write.
Alright, to be quite honest I was excited when I found a DLS fanfic novel. However, I'm disappointed. From the bad Grammer ( misspelling, capitulation, keywords ), and world explanation. The only thing I found right was the character descriptive writing, though there were some misha** here and there. Out of all of those things the worst thing I found was Saki's personality. It's not the neutral "no emotion" character. It's more of a chaotic out of character personality. Like a steak in the veggie isle. It doesn't fit. I guess what I'm trying to say is good idea bad execution.
Hello author daunloco here This second book for Saiki kusuo main character And for world i try mix all anime Related to ability cards, item card, and misterius world as (anime world) Thanks try for reading If have any question chat me here thanks. See you next time
💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓Don't stop this novel plz 😘💕💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
I’ll give this 4 stars for now I’ve never seen a Saiki K fanfic before and I’m excited to see how this story goes.
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