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Nathan Drake begins his journey as a sage in the one piece world as Monkey D Luffy . So come and follow as he dominates.......
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if the author does make it a fine mature harem novel then let's try making it best there is, if not atleast top 10, so fans come and give your power stone and make it the best
Love it, OP mc, HAREM confirmed!!!, Naruto power!!! Perfect for fanfic and how they should be!! &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& I'm giving all 3 power stones here everyday if he doesn't drop it
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Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😍
I read the author's monologue and totally disagree. As? My fanfic sucks, but since it's a fanfic, okay? I love OP but it has to make sense. Praise be to Saitama Sensei.
Bland and boring, nothing really unqiue. The story just like any other bad generic fanfic. A mary sue character that just went 0-100 in an instant. 0 ******* in any scenes. Simplistic character who dosent really have a thought process and just go scene to scene. Bad grammar. And female sidechicks who might as well be any random female due to a lack of personality or if there were just the typical generic anime bimbo The first few chapter have very little or no world building or characther, and it only goes down hill from there Really dont get why the review rated it so high.
Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors!
The problem with this is he SEVERELY changes the characters personalities, and ruins certain elements of the one piece world that shouldn't be changed.
Neeeeedddd MOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!!!!😏😏😏😏😏 One of my most hated novels because it doesn’t have enough chapters lol. Also the author uses am instead of I’m which kinda annoys me but overall I LOVE IT 😍
I hope author-san to explain more about the ability of the mc, how much stronger he is now? rear admiral?vice-admiral?accurate admiral?... I'm looking forward the bounty and Garp face when he see the video.
very good story!!! i really like one piece!!! hope you can keep up the work. i am looking forward to how this story continues. dont drop it!!!!!!!
good novel. i like OP mc. keep up the work. thanks. ...............................................................................................................
Really well written novel. i would highly recommend it... its so good i almost don't want to read it chapter by chapter and let it accumulate them and Bench watch them at once but i just cant wait for the next chapter.. also i am loving the speed of chapters being released
The way I see it you either love or hate OP MC at the beginning. As for me I realy like those type of MC because it removes the ******* and overall makes the novel more relaxed/ fun. I realy can't wait to see where you'll be taking the One Piece story (Especially Skypia because MC has no rubber body and Enel will roast him without Haki). Please don't butcher it completly. We don't have enough content right now to write a legitimate review Imho but I decided to balance those 1 star troll reviews.
Please pick it up again this is a really really really really really really really really really great story. Please continue. Don’t drop it please
Even if MC is not than well writen and without any character built but still Harem element makes it wroth to read this fanfic as its the only one piece harem i have ever read without too much nerfing.
Great idea i like everything but there is little role for othe character but i hope volume 2 come without much waiting XD hhh hhh hhh hhh even *** scene is good please continue lol hhhh
Good story and characters but you could introduce new characters that are not in the cannon and make them join or have an impact in this fan-fiction it will be good then also good hentai scenes 🙄🙄
a waste of time. there is nothing interesting to read, he gets rinnegan and full elemental control + op stats within a week of entering the one piece world. mc is boring and gets everything from the system with no effort(since he was close to water he got wind and water release completel mastered, close to vulcano,on an island... you get the gist.) if you want to know how bad it is, just read the first and maybe second chapter.... and yes it only gets worse.
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