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This is the story of a soul reincarnated into the body of a first-year student attending Hogwarts, without any knowledge of the world(s) he's in. Follow his sleepless journey across the Harry Potter universe, where his single goal is to gather materials and become a god through his potion system. However, this isn't just any ordinary universe—it's an amalgamation of many. Join Gray Knight as he embarks on his quest to create the perfect potion, uncover who disrupted what should have been an easy journey, and evade the hunter chasing him.
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Warning!
English isn't my first or second language, but I'll try to write something you can read and understand. This story revolves around potion-making and the search for ingredients. As a wise dwarf once said, alchemy is about gathering materials, so there will be monster fights and hunting. In fact, if you have an ingredient Gray needs, you're done for!
As for romance, let me be honest—I don't know the Harry Potter universe very well. I've watched all the movies and am rewatching them while writing this fanfic, but I won't know obscure characters like Tonks. Who the hell is Tonks? I still don’t know! This makes romance tricky, but I'll try to find the most beautiful girl in this or other universes for Gray. Still, Gray’s first love will always be his gold coins. NO HAREM.
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What can I say - it's unreadable. ........................................................... ...........................................................
Would love more chapters really like it Maybe get him famous for a magic buff potions and stuff
short but nice chapters. it started with mostly retelling of year 1 till chapter 5 when mc got into making his own potions. mc potions have 1-5% chance to give perma effects for him to become OP. he made potion which slows aging which became perma. and mc has reached year 2 by chap 20 so story is going quick. give it a try
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Nice Fic, as for Tonks. Tonks is a family of 3 people. Husband, Ted Tonks is a Muggleborn who became a magical Attorney. Wife, Andromeda Tonks(used to be Black) is the sister of Belatrix and Narcissa and Cousin of Sirius Black, She ran away from family to not get married off like Belatrix and married Ted. Daughter, Nymphadora Tonks is 6 years older than Harry(she was 7th year in his 1st) and is a Metamorphmagus, meaning Shape shifter. Its a Lost Black family magical ability, she joined the Aurors under Mad Eye Moody and married to Remus Lupin (lol the age gap tho) and had a child, They both died leaving the child Orphan (harry become the child’s godfather)
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I think the only defect is the structure of the text, in some parts it is very confusing. Otherwise it's very good, the author manages to explore the potential of potions well and has a very good world development, he knew how to fit franchises like Tomb Raider very well
Bon début continue comme ça . 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡??¿??!?!?!??!?
So far so good, I hope you will consider those who do not know the lore in the worlds you add.
So far it has started off great!!! The author didn’t put any unnecessary details that would seem like filler and actually started the story just right. The way it’s played out is perfect and unique. It already stands out from other fanfics in the genre of HP. I can’t wait to see how the story goes especially for how unique this novel is already great.