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摘要
A young high school detective, Shiba Ryusei dies by being shot in the head and is reincarnated to another world by GOD.
He lives in this other world with his memories of the former.
How will a Detective survive in the Douluo universe?
How will a Dragon Spirit holder survive?
The story takes place in Douluo Dalu one and the MC doesn't know the story of Douluo Dalu and he will be completely unaware of the story as he had never read the novel of Douluo Dalu.
Well, the pairings for this novel are mc x rongrong.
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So let me break down why I gave this review: Writing Quality: The authors writing quality is decent. It’s not making me gag, but at the same time it’s not the best writing I have ever seen. As such it’s a decent three for writing. Stability of Updats: The only reason I gave this a four is because honestly I don’t know how fast he updates, all I know is that he does. For me that at least warrants a four star. Story Development: This is where the story really starts disappointing me, like most other fan-fictions do. First of all the MC is far too OP. He is a rank 57 when he is what 12 and his true combat ability is even better then that. The only advantage he has is his strong spirit and his previous memories yet he learnt the art of hidden weapons by HIMSELF WND better then the genius tang san. HOW DOES THAT EVEN MAKE SENSE. Not only that, I fee like Ryusei is almost the same as Tang SAN. Spirit Hall killed his parents, he treats tang hao as a father figure and he is in shriek academy. That’s not even the end of my complaints. I mean why is the author shipping with essentially every female in the Shrek academy. I don’t even get that!!! One of my favourites part of the original novel was Rong Rong and Oscars love story but now as a twelve year old she is already dreaming of making him her husband. And just a small portion of my complaints. Character Design: The character design is even worse than the story development. I mean one of the most fundamental responsibilities of an author is to make the reader relate to the MC but this author seems to be doing the opposite. At first Ryusei was too soft and ***** which I honestly did not mind as it was a good change of pace for me. BUT THEN THE SPIRIT HALL ATTACKED. Now the guy seems to be constantly going through puberty and is extremely unreasonable. He is the main reason that I can’t even bear to finish the story, though I did get pretty deep into it already. Finally the world design: What can I even give this??? This is a fan fiction and up-till now the author has not added anything new to the world that would push up the rating to a three or four star. Overall the story really only deserves a two star.
Shamelessly going to give Evil_Dragon a 5 stars, since I believe this fanfiction has a lot of potential. It's worth a read, and you probably won't be disappointed by it at all.
since you are the author of one of my fave. original novel. i will shamelessly give this a 5 stars rate. hoping that this will be good if not better as your first novel.
Rushed cliche revenge with no point Mentaly retarded characters and dip sh it Mc ................. . . .v.v.. .v.v. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .
I dont really like the mc mindset, but to manipulate their comrade like that???,, its fine for mc to growing hate SH well u are the writer we are the reader,, dont take it to heart,, chill
Want some points? 1-slow update with already existent content to copy from(TRUE) 2-why is this going for romantic way that doulou did? I would rather see one POV of romance between mc and rr not anyone else or harem with the mc???? 3- why the **** is the mc still not transforming? What the faq is going on? 4- are you sure you have read the story? 5- and dam he is not even looking at 60-90000 years old spirits on his 6th ring? 6-my god can you put them both in the same room? Romance needs a notch up. 7-and why the faq is this guy not utilzing good materials for hidden weapons?! 8-you are doing filler chapters at max slow pace? Howmuch are you packing at your patreon? Do you think you would earn a fortune this way? Its becoming less enjoyable how stupid you are writing, acting and thinking. 🤔 overall this is beyond stupid, truly one more push and dropped, its just that bad WITH EXISTENT CONTNT TOO, do you see how funny this is? If i wasnt in college i would probably do some stories that stomp this.
Awesome novel.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Keep up the great work. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 Is it 140 yet? Not yet it seems. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
It's indeed a good read. The development of the story is really good and while the MC is a powerhouse he does have some limitations, MC is badass but also extremely intelligent and somewhat ruthless. But fair warning the story drags out a bit in the middle, but later picks up speed again.
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The other no novel of this author is gopd. But I am going to rate this one 1 star because Author brutally killed MC's parents. And guess what??? Everyone is ok with them dying.
Man even worse, grammar mistakes everywhere. No wide range of vocabulary and slow pace with content????? Are you existing with an APE’s IQ? Patreon? PATREON! ON WEBNOVELS HAHAHAHA MOTHERFAQER. He slows more for patreon MEGA LOL (shake my head) how stupid can you get Either go 2-4 chapters daily or mass realeases or stop writing, no one would look here whos smart enough
Mc with op spirit so early on? Still not that op compared to Tang san with all his knowledge from a cultivation world. Mc is only a detective, so many weird spirits can't there be a spying spirit?
Lazy premise, events don't make a lot of sense. I trust this author to have something decent come out of this novel eventually, but I can't suppress my disbelief till then.
writing very acceptable, but otherwise... it's horrible!! it's all so cliché and with the plot armor that it's boring, he spends a lot of time saying he shouldn't show his spirits and everything, but when someone asks him to join the academy he says what it is... very badly done
esto es ilógico dice el autor que era detective y el mc actúa como un niño mimado y actúa como un tonto, de repente no tiene coherencia el facfic aspiraba a mas pero el autor la izo una mier**
first 7 chap made me drop cringe asf, what did you eat to make a story as cringe as this. cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe
You are a liar author there is a harem I dropped it at chapter 64 because I went to the titles and saw the name feng cai er and buying clothes for feng cai er and later on she likes him and he likes her too. I only read this because it had a lot of chapters and you said it had no harem, but you lied to me.
The grammar is fine everything else is trash. Too 20 rankings? The level of disrespect is astounding. Doesn’t follow the rules of the world. A six year old can somehow withstand the energy of multiple title douluo with no issues? Horse****
The author here, well, i am obviously giving myself a five star and to tell you about the novel. The MC will have twin spirits and both of them will be Dragon Spirits. This won't be a harem novel and it will only have mc x rongrong. I will obviously add some H-scenes when both of them are of age. So, guys support this novel and also let it reach the top 20 in the ranking.