/ Fantasy / Rogue Villain
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Waking up after a traffic accident, a young man realizes that he might have transmigrated into the world of one of his favorite stories, which isn't all bad. Except for a couple of things.
The world and everyone on it gets destroyed at the end of the story.
He has transmigrated into the body of Ackster Phileam, an infamous roadside pebble antagonist who gets killed by the original Hero of the story a week after meeting The Hero.
And half that week has already passed.
*The story is pretty slow paced, especially the first decent batch of chapters. But if you're intrigued by the story but not the abundance of words, check out the chapter 1-56 summary. It will be full of spoilers, but just consider it a prologue.*
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all I can say is Author takes like 100 to 200 words to describe a kick or he writes to much detail and because of that the novel is slow paced slower than a friking snail it took Author to write 50 chapters to escape the hero if he could have done it easily in 15 to 20. just shows how much unnecessary detail Author puts in each chapter. currently at ch 65 and still no improvement. story Has potential and mc needs to get smarter he is a reincarnated person ffs he acts like a kid....well hope the author can improve on these things. otherwise it's a good story keep up
really good novel, good premise and the mc is using a differnet fighting style then the usual would recommend.
This is a pretty interesting novel. The grammar is great, the fight scenes are well written and the plot looks very promising. One con tho is that the place is pretty slow. The author tends to spend too much time explaining some little things. Another thing is how the MC seems to be carried by plot armor. He just jumps into his fights, realizes he's in over his head, and then brute forces his way through. This is the most pressing issue I think needs to be addressed. Besides these points, it's a great novel overall 👍🏽
The pace is too slow, too much fillers, fights drags for several chapters, too much inner dialogue, useless conversations. The MC is not likeble and not smart.
As a story, it's not bad. But it has too much detail in every chapter, slow pace , few and undisciplined world background . Mc does too much thinking and almost no dialogues between characters. If author change these problem, the story development will be very good as it's a interesting story.
Overall, it was an excellent read. The grammar is excellent. The story follows our MC on his journey to become stronger through fights that lead him to the brink of death. You get a good feel for his character in the story, and the author does a good job of describing fights and other dramatic situations that will feel like fights. The main flaws are towards the end, where it feels slightly rushed, and a lack of relational development between characters with a few exceptions. This does not play out as a harem. The first 300+ chapters do not really show any signs of a harem, and it only kind of is touched on towards the end and established in the last few dozen chapters.
I’m 26 chapters in and I’m writing this review to let others know that this novel has some graphic (injury) scenes. They aren’t gratuitous (if they were, I’d drop), but can be hard to stomach depending on your tolerance. In terms of writing, it’s clear and the grammar is good! The pace, so far, is a little slow, and at times it can be a bit repetitive. However the repetition is usually related to the motives of the MC, and I’d rather have that compared to no motivation for their actions. The MC transmigrates into a minor villain’s body and even though he’s uncomfortable with it, he stays “in character” so far, which I love because that doesn’t always happen. We still don’t know much about the world at this point, but given the quality of writing so far, I’m hopeful. I’m exited to see how this story progresses and will update this review as I get further!
Well, this is my 2nd time writing a review after years of reading on this platform. English is my 3rd language so forgive me if I don't properly explain things but I will try to be constructive as much as I can. I feel that this story deserves more attention. Now for the review: Story - So far the plot revolves around the MC trying to get stronger cuz his ultimate goal is to survive against the hero that will destroy the world that he transmigrated into. The story is slow-paced but not too slow in my taste. The author is slowly developing and fleshing his MC. The 1st 150-160 chapters is a testament to that. After that, the story takes a good and exciting turn. I can say with confidence that author's writing is good, great even. Personally, I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors, and words flowed smoothly. One thing to note is that there are times where some explanations are long-winded but maybe it just my preference talking back or something. Updates - Story is updated daily, what's more can be said? Other than pray that I can continue to get those daily golden nuggets to satiate my vitamin-deficient mind. World Background - Not too elaborate I guess as author is slowly unfolding the world as the story goes on. I don't mind it really, in fact, I prefer it that way. Character - Now, this maybe a turn off for many as the MC is not likeable at first but not with his personality but with the decision he made. I just wish that the author had explained why he is behaving that way in the earlier chapters(or maybe I'm just too dumb to not realize the signs) but it would slowly make sense in the latter part of the latest chapters. To be clear to people who will going to read this review. The MC is not some giga chad rooster or a Gary Stue who knows what they're doing. MC is just your really typical average dude that got transmigrated and wants nothing of it. MC is fighting against his denial and paranoia and most of his decisions if not all are based on that. But ofc, he will not stay that way and thankfully author delivered the consequences of his folly which in my personal opinion is duely deserved. Overall, I don't recommend this story for those who wants giga chad gary stue MC. He is far from it but in time he will be especially in the latest chapters where his training and struggles are showing results already. But for those who want a good character development where you can see and feel the MC struggles then this will be for you. If you can trudge through the part where you want to beat or curse the MC then you'll be in a good ride.
Amazing storyline and character development. It's one of the best I've read. Keep it up author.
it's a shame it's ended, but overall it's been a great ride. the whole book is about perseverance and will power. he did not become strong because it was given, he earned every bit of his power.
I'm going to be frank and admit that this story doesn't deserve five stars, but I'm going to give it anyway because I am a shameless author :P The story and writing are slow, and character development isn't any faster. But all of it improves as it goes on, which is why the almost 200 hundred first chapters are free. Read the summary of chapters 1-56 if you like the idea(?) of the story and want to try when it gets slightly better. Other than that, drop any questions down below. PS. I have a fragile soul, so please don't be mean to me, and be gentle with any criticism.