DaoistdXV9mx

DaoistdXV9mx

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徽章 11

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DaoistdXV9mx
19 days ago
Commented

300 taels = 30000 golds So, why 90000 golds. Is it total transaction value ??

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7 months ago
Posted

Well, darker than dark story. Too much 💔 Plus it does not have same quality as author other novel ( Saga of Atlantis ).

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DaoistdXV9mx
11 months ago
Commented

Author sometimes takes longer nap that why he can't update regularly

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DaoistdXV9mx
11 months ago
Posted

As a story, it's not bad. But it has too much detail in every chapter, slow pace , few and undisciplined world background . Mc does too much thinking and almost no dialogues between characters. If author change these problem, the story development will be very good as it's a interesting story.

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DaoistdXV9mx
11 months ago
Commented

too much detail and slow pace

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DaoistdXV9mx
11 months ago
Commented

Too much thinking and same dialogue from different pov.

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DaoistdXV9mx
11 months ago
Commented

Chapters title would've make it better .

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DaoistdXV9mx
12 months ago
Commented

what was that.. . why go there if he can't use hide his full strength ... . I don't know why author do this sometimes ??

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DaoistdXV9mx
1 years ago
Commented

Too much info dump, plz reduce it