/ Anime & Comics / Rimuru in gate with a world traveling system.
摘要
Surprise, surprise motherfucker I'm back. I got hit by truck-kun and fucking died the end goodbye.
Well shit, met ROB (no fucking idea what it stands for) and now I live in the gate anime at least I get to go back to japan, what do you mean that I'm a decade early, and I have to cultivate to keep my system and get stronger.
cover by paint by numbers.
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
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Feels like a Story generated by AI, The word choice is so formal to the point that it's hard to comprehend.
Absolutely no character development no world building just a mc running around a world pranking people for half the time I was reading I was just confused on what is happening and where’s the story going