/ Anime & Comics / Reuploading beacuse algorithem is broken since no upd 4 long time.
摘要
reuploaded with the same name as before Pain(Naruto Fanfic).
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寫檢討
Im the author here and imma give a max review cuz im shameless but i also belive that this novel really has all what it needs to be a best tier fanfic!! So peace out!
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Great Start of the Novel and i think it really tells the real shinobi world, and not just the dreams and happiness as in other fanfics! 10/10 for me! keep it up and dont drop it!
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I like how you started the novel and i think it has potential and i think you should just keep it up beacuse i haven't seen much of these kinds of novels \fanfictions on Webnovel, and i think we need one.!