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摘要
A man from Earth wakes up to find himself in a world he once believed to be mere fantasy, only to discover its stark reality—a place where life holds no value, where danger lurks at every turn, and where pirates roam freely. The corruption of the world government and the marines adds another layer of difficulty to an already chaotic existence.
He understands the challenges that lie ahead if he is to survive in this unforgiving world. However, as a traveler from Earth, he possesses a unique advantage—a 'cheat' of his own.
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[Ding! The communication between body and spirit has been successfully completed! The system is now operational!]
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With this newfound power, Ren embarks on a journey to carve out his path to glory and power, determined to etch his name into the annals of history—a history that he himself will shape!
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Disclaimer: All characters in the story are not mine except for some OC's.
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#Harem
#R-18
#Romance
#No NTR
#No Yuri
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Well, first I want to point out MC's background. He was a soldier in his previous life and he is used to fighting and killing.This is a good thing and will save the author many unnecessary events in this regard. Secondly,and the unique thing about this fanfic is MC's target,he wants to return home! I have read many One Piece FF and I have never seen MC have this goal, all authors choose to make their MC not have any family or a good relationship whit them in his previous world.It has always baffled me this matter, of all those incarnated in another world...there is not a single person who wants to return to Mazna?! I always found this unreasonable, and I'm happy because I finally found what I wanted. A message to the author-san:keep your work and never drop it please! I will support you, whether with comments or powers stones. Thank you for reading!
Comprehensive Review: - MC's personality suits my taste—calm, smart, cunning, deceitful, and caring towards those he's concerned about. Story Development: Very well done with a comprehensive change in the original plot, which is a positive thing since no one wants to see Luffy's journey replicated as if the anime has turned into a novel. Updates: The updates are very good. The Author isn't A human, 3 or 2 chapters a day, and the average word count is 2500 words, with some chapters reaching 4000-3000 words. Character Development: I've seen new versions of Nami, Nogiko, and Tashigi, while still maintaining their endearing personalities towards each other. .. .. FINALLY, I hope the Author continues with this story, as it's one of the best fanfiction stories I've read, There's no problem with spelling mistakes in the early chapters; the writer has improved significantly. I don't blame him because English isn't his first language.
It's good now.....................................................................................................................................
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Hmmmm, interesting 💭 ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
I see quality of your writing is much better now,that's good, And i hope Ren will not become someone who thinks only with his dic* all the time when making important decisions. I realy like how tactical and Smart he is and that he is using his Head.
Came with high hopes, seeing a One piece FF with almost perfect score but only found the average OP self insert + power fantasy. The characters feel bland and one-dimensional, the MC's personality is a bit all over the place and the grammar and vocabulary needs an improvement. Still, the writting quality has gone up consistently at chapter 40, so I encourage the Author to keep up the good work! Also, to the guy who's posted 20 5star reviews, pls top. It's misleading and can get the Author in trouble 😭😭😭
I'm not good at writing reviews, but I will support the author because I'm having fun reading the first chapters. Keep it up
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Ok, the new chapter showed Ren is someone who is ruthless and cold when it comes to people who deserve it, I realy wonder what he will do with the guys like Crocodile,Moria or Doflamingo, since they are Main Bad Ones in the series.
Pls dont give conquerors haki to all the members its supposed to be super rare so can u give to only some of them and not all of them pls pls
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At this moment i realy like this story, MC Ren isnot a hothead and reckless person, he plans his future actions in detail, He do not wants to be slave of Original Plot and join Straw Hats,but create his own crew and be his own person, He knows in One Piece World only strong and Smart ones can hope to survive in this World, if they want to matter in grand shame of things.