Ok so, i like the story and its nice but can you please stop making Kawarimi a Thunder god jutsu beacuse its not and if it was do you think other ninja would not use it like that aswell and if it is that way then the thunder god jutsu AKA Minatos Kunai jutsu is totally useless like wtf?????
Correction, you can't say 'not sleep', but 'dont sleep'.
I plop down on the bed and...not sleep...I can't sleep damn it.
thrown into naruto (Up for adoption)
Book&Literature · Idk_wqe2
Hello Author here to give his totally biased review cuz why not. Hope u enjoy also for those looking for a Harem then this is NOT for you beacuse there will be no Romance whatsoever in it.
I like how you started the novel and i think it has potential and i think you should just keep it up beacuse i haven't seen much of these kinds of novels \fanfictions on Webnovel, and i think we need one.!
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original Uchiha's Fate
"There is only one Uchiha who has achieved this before me" "Those Eyes, those damned eyes" "The reality that you might think is true, may in fact simply be a illusion cast by someone's desire" "Just who are you!" "Me? I am the fate of this world, the unstoppable and unchanging. I am Uchiha ... !" --------------------------------------------------- This is my first fanfiction, hope yall enjoy it! :) - Sun Kage1 Chs 14 收藏
- original
Nindo
A Ordinary ableit strong willed child in the naruto Universe trying to become a ninja and shoot fire from his mouth, i mean thats cool isnt it? Though he might have chewed a bit more than he should of... Will he be able to survive the harsh life of a ninja or will he succumb to the pain, and suffering of such a way of life. Will he find out the secret behind his wierd ability or will it remain a shadow that he can never reach. =============================== Thats all for the synopsis, im a new writer and this is my first ever fanfic so you could say im a total newbie I will not make any promises and this might just never get updated ever if i lose motivation so yeah. Also im not a native english speaker so there will be spelling mistakes so please try to be understanding. Will be in need of a beta tester if this story gets famous though. Thats all cya from Author here.1 Chs 8 收藏
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Pain (Naruto Fanfic)
Anime & Comics · Aleksorks