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warning 2-7 my mc stays out of the way for the most part and changes small things 8 on is when there will be bigger changes.
Chapter 13 is the start of marvel
I've never written anything before, so it'd be nice to have some slack.
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I had a strange dream that I died and got reborn in a mixture of The Originals and Marvel as an original.
I thought that it would be an interesting topic to run with.
Ethan was just your average person, He had a trucking job and when he drove, he loved listening to fanfictions. mainly about The Originals and the MCU.
He always wished he had powers and was in these worlds but don't we all, but it's all in our head, that was until God made a mistake and threw a bolt of lightning on him.
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This will be a mixture of two different worlds, but it won't follow the story completely unlike the show it will follow the story's rules like it should, until I add my own twist and rules.
"Like the older the vampire the stronger they are, not until the plot needs it to change."
all credit goes to the writers of The Originals and the MCU. I only own my thoughts and character.
I didn't make the cover picture and if the owner wishes for it to be change plz contact me and we can talk.
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MC is like a thousand years old and still to hasty. and seriously Telling Others he's secret to Peggy And to the others stupid decision to make making his family All known to shield and to other hydra.
read 18 chapters so far and the MC basically just followed the main story of both worlds with little to no interaction or changes made. Which is impossible because of him being in the world. If I wanted to read about the two worlds story I will just add the subtitles on Netflix. what a wasted idea and a waste of time.
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Not for me sorry… 10 wishes thats too much i rly hate overpowered protagonists
I sincerely hope you continue the story because it's an interesting mix of the two
I read up to chapter 18. And I can't resonate with the characters, especially the MC. This isn't for me either.
I love the main character especially after he isn’t just reacting to what others do or say Keep up the good work.
I'ma do you a favor mate, alright? Now don't take offence because all I'm about to say will help you. 1, Dialogue, when a character speaks, it requires two things, 1, it's closed quotations, examples "Hi, you look nice," said a man. The man said, "Hey, you look nice." "Hey you look nice." 2, it's own paragraph, each character speaking owns it's own paragraph, so one chracter can have two soeaking setences in one because thats their paragraph, but another character can't share that paragraph, example, "Hey man, you look good," the man said, "What perfume did you put on." "Thank you, I put on yada yada," Said the woman."Oh that's nice."This is something you should really know because any book and fic contains these examples.Another thing to help you, time period dialect. If you're character is in a modern day setting, they won't call their mother, mother, they'll call her, mom, but if they're in an ancient setting or an older setting like ww2 era, than instead of mom, it would be mother.Now since im going by the top of the dome, thats all I can think of. You can go on reddit and quora for more, but a recommendation is to use grammarly for grammar mistakes and the like. Another recommendation is to read heavily followed fics over on fanfictions of your choice because they're famous for reason, i.e, most definitely for their grammar and their storytelling. Anyway good day to you.