/ TV / Reborn As Kai Parker | TVD/TO/Legacies
摘要
A story about one Atlas Tyme; from rebirth to struggling in a family who treats him like an abomination for something he can't control. Read and experience the process that made Atlas- now named Malachai- live up to the horrid expectations of those around him.
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great story, very well written. Question: Are you going to make the main characters compare themselves to Kai's morality or are you going to leave it like the original story, where they feel like heroes even when they don't do something "heroic" and promote evil? If you feel that this might remove the fun from the story, you don't have to answer, answer only if you want to!
Amazing concept but I think Kai could be more powerful with some sacrificing rituals which will make MC to be on same power scale as other characters
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So review only 4 Chappys atm but it's surprisingly well written and entertaining if you loved Kai in TVD I mean we all did then you will like this story so I recommend adding to list.
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With the exception of small logical inconsistencies and what I don’t like in the initial conditions (who the main character was and considers himself), I liked this story, I look forward to the next chapters.
I hate elena so much but the Story is just the main charact is simple and just sime lost in every chapter and his 30 some in this life but like kids how are 16to15 like WHAT!!!
This is a good book and I reccomend reading it author will probably not update but if the author does it’s definetly gonna be one of the best Tvd fanfics.even though the book has 6 chapters only there still very long and entertaining!The book draws you in every chapter and you are excited every chapter!
I have a question? What would happen if kai became an original vampire and siphon his own magic to use for spells? I've seen siphoner said they can use originals as infinite magic battery but will it work the same if the host itself is also a siphoner?
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great fanfiction[img=recommend] just we need more chapters [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Thank you for continuing the story this is the first Vampire Diaries fanfic that is focus on Connie Parker and I really love the first five chapters and I'm so glad you decided to post another one and I hope you continue to post because your work is amazing so thank you👍😅😎