/ TV / Reincarnated in Legacies as a Dark Fey
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The MC is reincarnated into the world of TVD with 4 wishes.
Warning I am writing this to pass time and for fun.Also english is my second language so obviously it will be horrible and don't expect perfect chapters.
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The writing is really bad, It try’s to be something good but the author just can’t do it. There are parts that just don’t make sense; or really unclear pov’s and character dialogue. The Harry Potter spells kinda ruined it for me, It just doesn’t fit in smoothly. Interactions between mc and love interest is really poorly written too, so be aware of that.
like all, writing and conversation need a quick editor... like all your stories, writing starts off average and gets worse along the way. (ps: can you answer me why do you have an account that every week correctly floda emojis with 5 stars?, for me it looks like a secondary account improving your rating. his name is @daoist571053)
This is great 👍 can’t wait to see more !!!!!!! There is not many great tvd/to in Webnovel .I hope that you don’t drop cause I am really liking it .
I always hated the argument "english isnt my first language", it isnt mine either and i can still write on an understandable level...furthermore there are plenty of free websites/programms to help on with the grammar :/ To the Story: i kinda dislike that there are a lot of unlogical plotholes and that some of the original character act totally different to their "series-selves" for example: Klaus is too understanding as a father and doesnt get his common trust issues etc. with mc...
what is a Darl Fey? Also what is Legacies ? -------------------------‐—:':-)-7-)':':4)-.-.':3:?)?.-)-:-)??.-.-)-:-.-.-)-:-:-)-:---.-.-)?:?)?.-.-
This is amazing. Best original/vampire diaries fan fic on this site or that I have read. I NEED MOARRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A+A+A+A+A+A+A+
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This is one of the stories that I love the most and I really wish there were more updates, I miss it so much, the plot is incredible and the development they had in Harry's story is wonderful, I can't wait to read what happens next
Later on after the hp wold maybe some more wolds can they go to magicians and become gods?
this fanfic story about Alex in the original.hope is mc in this novel and Alex (mc fanfic) his babysitter.alex giving the best help for hope to grew up and this fanfic is quite good .thanks for the Chinese toist who give fake review and coment.
Now congratulations to the author. Now I haven't watched legacies. Maybe that's why I didn't like it and tried to read it. Now let's start by talking about things I should consider a failure. How is it possible for Hope to learn so many spells in 1 month when it has to be taught over the years to the students at Hogwarts. Another thing you said that the spells were more powerful than in their original world. Logically they should then have more difficulty to be used. The romance between Hope and the MC would have been more interesting if it hadn't been so rushed not to mention taxed. It's like romance isn't 100% the MC and Hope's choice. When you date someone you spend time with them and want them to be able to protect themselves. I don't know why Mc was compelled to teach Hope his spell collection. She already has a lot to learn from her own world and prepare for her different possible race evolutions. Bon other than that I found it a little annoying too since I don't like it when MC becomes a nanny for the original main character of the world.
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Really good so far. love how he doesn't know what's gonna happen and he seems smart and prevented Hope's Heart break. Can't wait for him to meet Klaus.