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Moved into Anakin before the events of episode one. Experimenting with the Force, waiting for Qui-Gon, earning what he can. Ahead of Coruscant and the dubious prospect of becoming a knight. The canon is not retroactively changed, but from the moment Anakin arrives on Coruscant, the plot, the sequence of events, changes completely.
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the writing is horrible. difficult to understand. have used different names for iconic Starwars characters. couldn't get past half of 2nd chapter.
I hope the MC ends up with Ahsoka, she's my favorite girl from Star Wars besides Padme is kind of useless, she basically just gave Anakin trouble, the only thing I remember her being useful for is when she stole something from a her ex-boyfriend who was on the side of the separatists
So far it's a great story. However the grammar is absolutely horrendous, very difficult to understand.
everything except grammar, correct terms, and spelling is great. Problem is, the ungreat stuff gives me diarrhea.
The grammar is really bad but it gets better. But the first few chapters will seriously give you a headache. I really like the novel but I will stop reading because one thing that is just not acceptable for me : It seems like all the romantic interests will die. The first girl just die when his ship is attacked. the second girl is met when he travels into the past so she is long dead when he returns to the present. I really don't want to read a story where every female leads we get attached to dies.
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Solid story, would recommend but I feel like I read this on fanfiction.com like 3 or 4 years ago. Could be the same author but just a thought.
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very good, not boring, goes a different way than other similar fanfics, sometimes maybe too verbose but I prefer that than too cursory writing.
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Me alegra que no sigas el canon a la fuerza, no soy un gran fan de la franquicia pero me gusta como va la historia, es buena historia sigue con el buen trabajo
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La historia no está mal, está bien escrito, no hay muchos problemas en el guión, pero tengo una queja, que es la razón por la que me dejó caer la historia. Spoiler: La waifu, el autor fue inteligente, creo una linda waifu, era muy agradable, y luego la mata, además, fue de una forma muy poco emotiva no especial, en un momento estaba viva, y luego al otro murió, fue muy frustrante, incluso pensé en la idea, ya que el mc fue en enviado milenios al pasado, una vez que mc se recuperará y fuera de regreso a su tiempo original, que llegara justo antes de la muerte de la waifu, y la rescatará, pero mis súplicas no fueron escuchadas...
need your stones.