/ Fantasy / Primitive Man
摘要
A merciless and unforgiving world where a common cold could kill you, a world where survival of the fittest applied—
A world where humans aren't at the top of the food chain.
A world where the roar of predators echoes through the wilderness, and the threat of being hunted lingers around every corner. A world where the natural elements are both beautiful and deadly, with raging storms and scorching heat waves that can wipe out entire communities.
Every day is a battle for survival, with individuals and groups fighting tooth and nail to secure food, shelter, and water. The weak and vulnerable are often left behind, their fate sealed by the brutal law of the jungle.
And in this same age, same jungle there was a young boy, whose fate changed when he heard an unknown voice in his head.
Garnt woke up feeling a little better after he was on the verge of death because of a single wound he suffered from hunting, and the first thing he noticed was that everything around him looked foreign to him, even though the cave he was lying in was supposed to be his home.
While he was unconscious from the injuries, Garnt saw several things he couldn't even understand.
He saw people using brick-like equipment to communicate with each other and flying monsters that happily served humans by taking them inside their bodies. A bizarre world where everyone covered their bodies. He saw giant structures that stood even taller than the largest caves he had seen and suddenly a voice questioned his mind about what he witnessed.
[Why do these waters look muddy? Why don't you filter them?]
What are you talking about? This is how they are supposed to look.
[Why are these weapons so blunt?]
They are sharp enough for me.
[Where are your clothes, Don't you get cold?]
What are clothes, I don't know.
[Why do men and women look like they don't feel anything while having sex? Wasn't it supposed to be romantic and sensual?]
What do you mean? It is just an activity for procreation.
After witnessing such a world, Garnt felt like they were missing something important. His current status looked like a living hell when he compared it with the vision he had. But was that vision real? Does something like that really exist?
[Yes, it exists. Do you want to see that world? I will help you, but in exchange, you should make my dream come true.]
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Author's Note:
—This story has R-18 elements to it, but no netorare (NTR)
—This story doesn't follow the real evolution process from the Pre-historic period and there are some added fantasy elements since this is a work of fiction.
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I will give a complete honest review! Okay concept people have tried here and there. Primitive boy getting a system. Fresh. Writing quality okay. But main thing lacking is relatively of main charcacter to reader, for some reason I cannot connect to the main character at all.There is one novel with somewhat similar settings but fantasy, an modern guy waking as goblin, he was fully grasped to that cultural settings yet was relatable to modern readers, I was hoping for something like that, but it's okay.Good Luck.
Nice new refreshing concept. Really excited to see the future of this story. Stone age people discovering the technology is such and interesting concept.
Pre historic era book. Very interested the world, the grammar is good. The update speed is alright. You got something good here author, keep it up.
I would highly recommend this book to the new readers and see it in a positive light . There are going to be fantasy elements in the future right ? I have read 2 manga/manhua of this type and honestly they were great though sadly they were ruined by bad plot and other race harem stuff as the pure human feel was lost on later parts .... high hopes for this one too . so far its doing great other then the system that can get you material things that's a bit .... yeah .. everything else is good ... its good to see the mc's development . Hopefully you'll not ruin the relationships by making them his women and not calling them mom or aunt anymore 😜 the taboo fell must carry on . Good luck and well wishes.
I've only read the free chapters so far and it seems alright. However, the author keeps abandoning his/her older books. I'm gonna wait this out until it ends or it passes 1000ch to know for sure that the author will stick with this one. Otherwise it's a waste of time. Reading 300 chapters only to find out that the author abandoned the book is depressing.
I like the story so far just want to know if it's available somewhere else since it's really difficult to read all the chapters with limited daily pass
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This novel was surprisingly good (In my own opinion) My ratings for this novel is- Story 8/10Action 6.5/10Romance 8/10Harem 7.5/10Kingdom building 6/10Lemon 8/10Overall :7.8/10The story as its early volumes so I've only write my ratings I'm gonna write full details later The only downside on this novel is Informations were sometimes inaccurate and sometimes it doesn't make sense also lack of infos, Slow story but well I've understand since this has a slice of life tag
Theres just something different about a primitive background that I love. Its an above average in quality for webnovel and I was bummed when i ran out of chapters.
I like the theme a lot. Being the world so harsh I'm not expecting any exploration for the foreseeable future, but hopefully we get to see the outside and build something! Oh my, just seeing the clan building and technologic development tags I'm salivating. Hopefully the world can be interactive too like taming beasts and doing business and conflicts with other tribes or species!
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For anyone who wants to read a really good manga with an extremely similar concept to this, read Sousei no Taiga. Peak fiction
One of my favorite novels here, consistent and well written about evolution of a caveman with a person as a system
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Hello author ! Loved the work and wanted to ask if it was dropped. Have a nice day.
It's meh, synopsis is different from the story and the system part is dumb rather than being unique and useful.. Mc literally about to die from the system just because he step on ants... In a primitive setting, ants is everywhere.. I drop after reading the first chapter.. Especially when the "system" said Mc "acquired fire" rather than learning how to make one.. BTW Mc got that by almost dying from stepping on ants..
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