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Hello author ! Loved the work and wanted to ask if it was dropped. Have a nice day.
It's meh, synopsis is different from the story and the system part is dumb rather than being unique and useful.. Mc literally about to die from the system just because he step on ants... In a primitive setting, ants is everywhere.. I drop after reading the first chapter.. Especially when the "system" said Mc "acquired fire" rather than learning how to make one.. BTW Mc got that by almost dying from stepping on ants..
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For anyone who wants to read a really good manga with an extremely similar concept to this, read Sousei no Taiga. Peak fiction
I like the story so far just want to know if it's available somewhere else since it's really difficult to read all the chapters with limited daily pass
I've only read the free chapters so far and it seems alright. However, the author keeps abandoning his/her older books. I'm gonna wait this out until it ends or it passes 1000ch to know for sure that the author will stick with this one. Otherwise it's a waste of time. Reading 300 chapters only to find out that the author abandoned the book is depressing.
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I will give a complete honest review! Okay concept people have tried here and there. Primitive boy getting a system. Fresh. Writing quality okay. But main thing lacking is relatively of main charcacter to reader, for some reason I cannot connect to the main character at all.There is one novel with somewhat similar settings but fantasy, an modern guy waking as goblin, he was fully grasped to that cultural settings yet was relatable to modern readers, I was hoping for something like that, but it's okay.Good Luck.
One of my favorite novels here, consistent and well written about evolution of a caveman with a person as a system
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I would highly recommend this book to the new readers and see it in a positive light . There are going to be fantasy elements in the future right ? I have read 2 manga/manhua of this type and honestly they were great though sadly they were ruined by bad plot and other race harem stuff as the pure human feel was lost on later parts .... high hopes for this one too . so far its doing great other then the system that can get you material things that's a bit .... yeah .. everything else is good ... its good to see the mc's development . Hopefully you'll not ruin the relationships by making them his women and not calling them mom or aunt anymore 😜 the taboo fell must carry on . Good luck and well wishes.
This novel was surprisingly good (In my own opinion) My ratings for this novel is- Story 8/10Action 6.5/10Romance 8/10Harem 7.5/10Kingdom building 6/10Lemon 8/10Overall :7.8/10The story as its early volumes so I've only write my ratings I'm gonna write full details later The only downside on this novel is Informations were sometimes inaccurate and sometimes it doesn't make sense also lack of infos, Slow story but well I've understand since this has a slice of life tag
Theres just something different about a primitive background that I love. Its an above average in quality for webnovel and I was bummed when i ran out of chapters.
I like the theme a lot. Being the world so harsh I'm not expecting any exploration for the foreseeable future, but hopefully we get to see the outside and build something! Oh my, just seeing the clan building and technologic development tags I'm salivating. Hopefully the world can be interactive too like taming beasts and doing business and conflicts with other tribes or species!
Nice new refreshing concept. Really excited to see the future of this story. Stone age people discovering the technology is such and interesting concept.
Pre historic era book. Very interested the world, the grammar is good. The update speed is alright. You got something good here author, keep it up.
Hello Everyone🔥If you have any questions or requests leave them here, I will try my best to answer. Thank you for reading💖
Hello author ! Loved the work and wanted to ask if it was dropped. Have a nice day.
It's meh, synopsis is different from the story and the system part is dumb rather than being unique and useful.. Mc literally about to die from the system just because he step on ants... In a primitive setting, ants is everywhere.. I drop after reading the first chapter.. Especially when the "system" said Mc "acquired fire" rather than learning how to make one.. BTW Mc got that by almost dying from stepping on ants..
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For anyone who wants to read a really good manga with an extremely similar concept to this, read Sousei no Taiga. Peak fiction
I like the story so far just want to know if it's available somewhere else since it's really difficult to read all the chapters with limited daily pass
I've only read the free chapters so far and it seems alright. However, the author keeps abandoning his/her older books. I'm gonna wait this out until it ends or it passes 1000ch to know for sure that the author will stick with this one. Otherwise it's a waste of time. Reading 300 chapters only to find out that the author abandoned the book is depressing.
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I will give a complete honest review! Okay concept people have tried here and there. Primitive boy getting a system. Fresh. Writing quality okay. But main thing lacking is relatively of main charcacter to reader, for some reason I cannot connect to the main character at all.There is one novel with somewhat similar settings but fantasy, an modern guy waking as goblin, he was fully grasped to that cultural settings yet was relatable to modern readers, I was hoping for something like that, but it's okay.Good Luck.
One of my favorite novels here, consistent and well written about evolution of a caveman with a person as a system
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I would highly recommend this book to the new readers and see it in a positive light . There are going to be fantasy elements in the future right ? I have read 2 manga/manhua of this type and honestly they were great though sadly they were ruined by bad plot and other race harem stuff as the pure human feel was lost on later parts .... high hopes for this one too . so far its doing great other then the system that can get you material things that's a bit .... yeah .. everything else is good ... its good to see the mc's development . Hopefully you'll not ruin the relationships by making them his women and not calling them mom or aunt anymore 😜 the taboo fell must carry on . Good luck and well wishes.
This novel was surprisingly good (In my own opinion) My ratings for this novel is- Story 8/10Action 6.5/10Romance 8/10Harem 7.5/10Kingdom building 6/10Lemon 8/10Overall :7.8/10The story as its early volumes so I've only write my ratings I'm gonna write full details later The only downside on this novel is Informations were sometimes inaccurate and sometimes it doesn't make sense also lack of infos, Slow story but well I've understand since this has a slice of life tag
Theres just something different about a primitive background that I love. Its an above average in quality for webnovel and I was bummed when i ran out of chapters.
I like the theme a lot. Being the world so harsh I'm not expecting any exploration for the foreseeable future, but hopefully we get to see the outside and build something! Oh my, just seeing the clan building and technologic development tags I'm salivating. Hopefully the world can be interactive too like taming beasts and doing business and conflicts with other tribes or species!
Nice new refreshing concept. Really excited to see the future of this story. Stone age people discovering the technology is such and interesting concept.
Pre historic era book. Very interested the world, the grammar is good. The update speed is alright. You got something good here author, keep it up.
Hello Everyone🔥If you have any questions or requests leave them here, I will try my best to answer. Thank you for reading💖