/ Fantasy / Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
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Atticus’ life shattered in a single day— betrayed by his girlfriend, and then shot dead by a mysterious man.
But instead of the lonely void of darkness, he woke up in another world, reborn as the heir to one of the most powerful families in the human domain—in a world ravaged by war and teetering on the edge of defeat against a brutal alien race.
Now, driven by intense rage and a thirst for vengeance, Atticus will stop at nothing to grow stronger, uncover who killed him, and fight for survival in a war torn world.
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I think this is my second perfect score review of this novel, but that's just how great the story is. In my opinion, this novel should be ranked number one. The writing quality is great. The characters all have their own uniqueness, with the MC probably being one of my favorite characters. The MC is intelligent, confident, hard working, dermined, and cares about his friends/family, plus he worked/trained for all tge power he has. The world building and background are well detailed and explained in a way that flows perfectly with the story. The action scenes are well written, and it's easy to picture the fight as you read. Lastly, the author is very consistent in both chapter updates and the quality of his writing. If you are looking for a good fun novel to read that has magic, superpowers, romance, action, etc. Then this will be perfect for you, I don't think it's possible not to like this novel.
One of the best novels I read!!! This MC HAS BRAINSSSS.. definitely not one of them dumb mcs.. the MC is not a simp. He trains very hard for his power despite his talent.. He uses one of my favorite type of weapons so that like extra plus. I hope the author don’t drop this is a good master piece. Definitely deserves more recognition!!
Honestly the story is using complicated words and extra description way to much for no reason. It’s like the author is trying to compensate for the lack of a good storyline and the cliches that come with it.
start was good but when MC goes to academy story doesn't seems to progress at all author just repeating same chapter again and again
This webnovel shows a lot of promise in the beginning but falls down hard! The author is still finding his writing voice, especially in dialogues and fight sequences. The novel is full with complex words and descriptions, you will find very few interesting interaction between characters. Also, some parts of the novel might feel very familiar, like you have read something similar before.
This is very well-done novel. The plot is still young but the author has done an amazing job so far. The MC is strong but hardworking, kind to his loved ones, indifferent to strangers, and cruel to his enemies. His Dao is "Mess with me, I mess you up." I'm really looking forward to how the story develops. With time and if this quality of writing is maintained, I think this novel will become really popular kinda like "I Will Kill The Author". All the best, Author (I always give you one of my 2 power stones 😁👍🏽)
After Mc goes to the academy, the story moves very slowly. If you read it legally, you will be throwing your money away. 368 chapters read.
Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] This novel is about MC, who reincarnated into a young master of one of the most powerful families (tier 1 clan) with a cheat system.. The world MC reincarnated is in intense wars against intruder (alien) from others world.. The native have got no choice but to make an alliance with every race existent in that world to resisting outsiders' force.. But they are slowly closing into losing against foreign aliens.. MC is born with a system (system not as useful as you imagine) where his talent is monstrous, and his blood is quite strong.. MC awakened quite early (1 years old), where other genius awakened at 7 years old.. MC appears to have 6 years of head start compared to other people, but it has been a waste by his overprotective mother.. His mother has been forbidden him to train, but finally, he got a blessing and permission of his mother at 5 years old.. MC is OP, unrivalled, and untouchable in his age, peer, and his generation.. MC growth is at a steady pace, not too fast and not too slow.. The power rank in this novel starts from novice (lowest)< intermediate< advance< expert< master< grandmaster< paragon (strongest so far).. Each rank has 3 minor stages such as novice-, novice, and novice+.. The storyline is quite interesting, but of course, it depends on our own preference for the type of novel you like.. This novel author is a really good at expression using words for "emotion, situation, and expression".. You would see the author wrote 4-5 paragraphs about his novel character "waking up." 4-5 paragraphs expression of his novel characters emotion.. Or sometimes, there is a whole chapter that expresses his novel characters "thinking".. You can imagine the situation of this novel in detail by just reading it.. Of course, some people might hate this long explanation and see it as lingering, stalling, and thinking that it is a waste of time.. MC is also quite merciless against his enemy.. Most of the time, he just beat them, that's it UNTIL he joined Academy where even if he kill other student, they will keep revive again and again with no limit.. And even though MC is unrivalled in his age, he is not fighting against his age only.. At 15 years old, EVERYONE has to join the academy of the human race regarding their status noble or commoner, no exception, EVERYONE need to attend the academy.. As 1st year student, MC is at expert rank while people at 3rd years student, the top genius are at expert- rank which 1 minor stage differences.. It kinda disappointing that MC, who awakened at the age of 1 year, only ahead of others with just one minor stage.. It such a waste that he got awakened 6 years ahead of others but not utilises and use them sufficiently.. It is annoying that every MC action is been monitored closely where all his secrets have been revealed.. Plus, there are many scheming against MC from behind, and MC has been played by his enemy plan.. His enemy is laughing and enjoying the show.. Currently, there are 593 chapters (for non-privilege), and I already read up to 519 chapters.. MC lost around 2.7 million academy points, which was a ridiculous high amount due to his enemy scheme.. MC already makes so many powerful families as enemies, and if we include that schemer one, there will add more and more powerful families as enemies that are as strong as MC family right now.. Romance? Yup, there is flirting but no excessive or adult scene or anything, so don't worry.. Readers might misunderstand because there is NTR in ch2, but Ch1 and Ch2 are the story about MC 1st life or before reincarnated.. I'm not sure if the author will put it later on.. System? It's not too useful.. Only show MC status window.. No mission or quest or buy/sell.. No storage space.. The most hate Arc in the novel? The Leader Summit Arc (Ch441 - Ch509).. It is where all top 100 ranker (1st year until 3 year student) in the school are competing.. And this is the worst arc you ever read in this novel.. MC has been nerf sooo bad to the point you who love this novel become soooo frustrated and hate the story progress further.. Don't believe? You could see how many people complain about it, even the author has to give a "statement" or "author note" to clear out about this.. How MC been nerf? MC is Expert+ at this arc while others' 3rd year top ranker is just at Expert- and Expert, which means that despite MC just a 1st year student, he already becomes the highest rank among all student.. So, the school decided to make all student reduce to intermediate+ because to make it "fair" for others student and also to not humiliated others 2nd year and 3rd year student (Including 2nd and 3rd teacher).. So, going back to the question: How much is MC being nerf?? MC has been seal to use ANY of his techniques (link to his mana), he can't use ANY of this element (fire, wind, water, earth, light, dark, space, ice, lightning, gravity), his bloodline, his Mana core, his weapon and anything related to those.. To unseal it, he has to do some mission to gain point, and after reaching a certain value, then he can buy them using point.. As he is stronger than others, he needs to pay more and more to reach his original power rank.. and that is for one thing.. Don't forget MC has so many elements and to unseal his element, all his elements have a price to unseal it.. For example: Mana core: 4000 SP Note: Gain access to your current restricted rank ■Bloodline: Fire; 1100 SP Space; 1100 SP Earth; 1000 SP Water; 990 SP Air; 990 SP Light; 800 SP Darkness; 800 SP Lightning; 790 SP Ice; 670 SP Note: limited to your current restricted rank ■Weapons: Katana: 4000 SP Exo suit: 5000 SP ■Ranks: 3000SP to each rank up Other people only have like one or two elements while MC has so many.. Their power rank also not as high as MC.. We love to see the MC grow stronger, not grow weaker.. It is like watch One Piece, and Luffy who can use multiple type of haki, his Devil fruit, his techniques (gomu gomu no pistol, Axe and so on) and skills (Gear 2, 3, 4, 5), then suddenly, Oda (Author of One Piece) make Luffy lose those while he has to fight many people on New World.. Yes, it is going to be a frustration experience for the fans.. If you don't understand One Piece terminology, then imagine like this.. You go to the airport to travel to a foreign country and at security check, you have to take off all your clothes, pants, shoes and bags, while hand over your wallets, phones, laptops and so on.. Then, to get everything back, you NEED to pay for ALL your item.. Your wallet, 500 bucks.. Your phones are more expensive than other people, so iPhone 15 Pro, 1,000 bucks.. In your bag, there are 15 items, and you need to pay each item for 100 bucks.. Will you like this? All these are yours to begin with, but you need to pay it "again".. Most readers are annoying with the author ways to nerfing MC.. We all can't understand the reason.. I even stopped reading at Ch519.. Well, the last Arc is very frustrating and dampening the mood.. But I still will read it in the future.. Just not now.. I don't feel like reading it right now.. So, please going on ur good work Author.. Note: I wish the author would boost his rank (jumping rank) and his elemental bloodline with some kind of misfortune turning into "opportunity." It is sure will be thrilling and electrifying..
Author has potential. Interesting story, alright world building, intriguing characters. Author is just new to writing so suffers from some major things that made me not want to continue reading. Author's main flaw is DIAOLUGE. Author will have a huge build up to a scenario. Using grandiose words, and verbiage, then when it comes to executing, the words just fall short, or sometimes don't come at all. Almost like the author doesn't know what he wants the characters to say. Second, in an effort to make the antagonists more capable, the author makes the protagonists seem a little incompetent. In an effort to not make the MC naive, he becomes borderline annoying. Last, the chapter lengths are just too short. Feels like so much is skipped over because the author set himself a limit on chapter lengths. Which solidifies my believe that stories with short chapter lengths end up being subpar. All that being said, give this a chance in you're bored though.
Why oh why is this even popular? The existence of this novel stands to prove the r*tardity of WN readers. Sure, this was a decent power fantasy for the first few chapters. Yeah, until we reached the abhorrent atrocity that is the academy arc. Redundantly dragged out chapters? Check. Pacing that makes a sloth seem like Usain Bolt? Check. And oh, the rom- no, calling whatever that was as romance is a grade 10 insult to centuries of media humanity has developed based on the aspect of love and human nature as a whole. The word ‘cringe’ wouldn’t even begin to describe the horrid butchering that is supposed to be the ‘romance’ according to the author. Author. Pfft. Who am I kidding? I mean the AI that wrote this novel. I am completely fine with authors using AI to assist in writing descriptions while starting out. This novel was the same. The author was new, and blatantly over 50% of the novel was written by AI(50 is me being very generous). But. It. Gets. Worse. Instead of improving, the author, RealmWeaver, is in a downward spiral that serves to atomize his non-existent writing skills. The last 10-20 chapters(non-priv) have all be over 75% or even completely written by AI. At this point the AI isn’t ‘assisting’ the author, but rather, it is the author. On top of this, looking at the author shamelessly thank his readers who praise him for his ‘writing quality’(which doesn’t exist) at times, I am left with an ugly expression of unbridled disgust. At least authors like Calm_Mountains write their own novel, no matter how bad they might be(-10/10). RealmWeaver is worse in the way that this novel isn’t even written by himself. Paying to read a novel which is so blatantly a GPT product is akin to pouring down lumps of money down the drain. Why on earth are ppl still reading and/or supporting this novel? One can only wonder. Alas, it is simply impossible for me to understand what runs through the minds of those with an IQ lower than a mere hundred.
It's good. The only problem is that many chapters are completely filler. Example Ch 293 and 294 both were just about Atticus going to the new classroom. Nothing happened in between except small talk with Kael. I wouldn't mind fillers as long as the chapters are longer.
good novel and i havent dropped it yet 😁 only thing is that I'm not willing to spend even a single cent on WebNovel🖕so i can only read 3 chapters a day with the ads and fast pass :/ also no free reads online 😢
Honestly love the story so far, a gem amongst the garbage most authors publish on this app. The MC has the right mentality towards everything including his family/enemies. Looking forward towards the future of this novel and I would definitely recommend it to people who enjoy a Smart & Rational MC with a system in a dangerous world.
A good read! Things that I liked, - Good length and pace - Visuals, very descriptive when it comes to appearance. I liked being able to envision that - Word choice, author can implement ‘fancy’ words without making it look like it was thrown in There’s barely any critiques I have for this novel. The author does good with grammar, the only one I can think of is the characters way of speaking to each other. If it’s a tough moment one would have an outburst and maybe even tried to be violent but with the MC personality I don’t think they’ll do that and remain calm to a point. Otherwise good work author [img=recommend]!
The storyd's good but sad to see author providing very less content per chapter.
Review as of chapter 58. The writing style is smooth and mostly without mistakes. If there are mistake that occur there are few and little. There isn't much to say about the story as of now, nothing you haven't seen before, which doesn't mean that it's bad. Despite the typical tropes of reincarnation and transmigration the author does a good job to deliver an interesting story. Characters as of now are rather flat and cliché, we have the doting mother, the stern but with a soft spot grandpa etc., sure, the story is at this moment just at its start, but sometimes you wish for more indepth characters. The protagonist is smart and rutheless, yet understandable and emotional regarding his family. On the other hand, the "family loving" main character, doesn't even shed a tear or second thoughts after never seeing his "original" mother on earth again. Furthermore, he just accepts his new family and instantly feels an emotional bond. To add, I don't like an adult (highschool age) person to just simply revert back to act as an infant or small children, even if it is just for show, though that's only my personal liking. Overall, the story is entertaining and provides a good time if you are into a typical transmigration, reincarnation and op protagonist story. All the best to the author and may this novel be successful.
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Hey author, i am loving the book so far,and i think its one of the few good ones remaining.I expensively love the mc's personality,but ima just put these out here in hopes you'll see it. I was hoping Atticus doesn't just ignore the fact that Zeoy was fussing about their relationship not being official,then she ends up not excepting his confession twice(if i remember correctly).Everything is cool and shi... but i think its unfair on Atticus, he didn't deserve that .I think she should have just been clear on what she wants like how she made him be clear. i can understand him brushing off the thing Magnus did since they're family(even though it still rubs me the wrong way),but as a dude i wouldn't be able stand watching(or reading) about another dude double back 3 times for some h*e(a good written character by the way,no hate) who doesn't know what she wants. PERSONALLY i think she should be the one to take initiative and he shouldn't make it easy,or like his friend said earlier move the along.once again this book is amazing and to anyone seeing this i would definitely suggest reading it despite what i said.like i said earlier the mc is really good.(i hope my comment doesn't get deleted man. [I understand that its your book,and the product of your own handwork, thus i in no way have the right to dictate what should happen nor do i want to, thank you]
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One of the most overrated novels I've ever seen, given that there's practically nothing innovative except for the classic cliché of the overprotective mother who doesn't want her son to train despite him being the rightful heir, just for "a happy childhood"? What's the point of a happy childhood if he'll be bullied for being weak? Furthermore, how do the parents not notice if the son is awake or not when they're in the same room? If they can't even notice that, then their cultivation is garbage. And most importantly, why should the MC "cultivate in secret" and hide it from his parents? It literally makes no sense, although considering the mother's personality, I can somewhat understand it. Moreover, I still don't understand how two supreme families can decide the outcome of a commercial agreement based on the dispute between two children. Apart from this, there are countless other clichés.
If you told me the main character was based on Vergil from Devil May Cry, I'd absolutely believe you. Now, onto the review. Also, spoilers. KInd of. Alright, let me get this out of the way. White hair, wears a trench coat, has a katana, blue eyes. I don't know why, but it just screams Vergil. Heck, he even has a move that reminds me of Judgment Cut. Okay, enough rambling. Do I recommend this novel? I do. Despite the synopsis that clearly feels like it's just listing the tags of the novel with extra steps, so far it's done exactly that. MC is pretty overpowered for his peers. Unbelievably so. Although the beginning of the story might turn some readers off at how edgy he felt, don't worry it loses that cringe edginess rather quickly. And thank goodness it did that. I think the one thing a reader needs to know when reading this is to have an open mind. If you're the type to be overly sensitive when a female gets hit, even if she deserves it you'll probably be turned off very quickly to this novel. If the violence bothered you then you really shouldn't be reading fantasy novels. Atticus our MC is one of those Eye for Eye, Tooth for Tooth kind of individuals. Mess with him and he'll mess with you back, just with more ferocity. I feel I could make this review way longer but I'll just get to the End. Maybe one day when this gets published on Amazon I'll leave a full review but Yes overall I recommend the novel. Yes there's no harem Despite feeling like it could have happened if the Author wanted it too. Overall Score: 8.9/10 Personal Score 9.6/10