摘要
In the days of the Primordials, there was a legendary tale that transcends all other tales. This is the tale of a young cultivator and his war against a powerful darkness.
Live the story and tell the tale.
This is Pathway.
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Impressive narration. Excellent explanation. I have read quite a lot of xianxia novels and i have to say that this one is better than most bull**** novels out there. And the characters are so lovingly good. Great job.
great novel.. keep up the good work as long as you don't drop it i will keep supporting. .. ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️.........................................................
A true xianxia novel alright! If you're into cultivation, details, and solid universe with no BS or cheap egotistical power fantasy hijinks this is for you. Personally, it reads too stiff for my taste and there are parts which read like a young monk practicing writing scriptures, a worthy and good practice but not yet there at sounding wise/pleasing/beautiful. They're tying though- definitely trying. Too unnaturally stiff even if there are little grammatical errors and the dialogue is well thought out. It's also very heavy on the details. I respect that because obviously that's a lot of well thought out efforts bit it hits you with walls of info. Great if you're into technical cultivation and a fan of the genre. (if you're a casual reader who just wants convenient magic and some butt whooping then no). Another reader asked if this was 'Slice of Life' but I don't see it, instead I see it's a very detailed world-building. Don't try to fulfill WN's great appetite for immediate satisfaction for action and seeming randomness here. Overall very quality work but can be an info overload if you're not a fan of this genre. I saw no holes in the building thus far but it is too wooden and rheumatic. The storyline could be more personable but that's just my tastes.
The author certainly has a way of writing words that pulls a reader into their own world and doesn't let go easily. The detailed descriptions are like an added cherry to the top especially, since there are no grammatical errors in the story. This story is a way better than the normal run of the mill stories we get here on this site and its marvellous!
THOUGH i'm no fan of xianxia, i think this story is nice. keep writing. recall to interact more with your readers and make some changes to your synopsis.
This book series is so good. I have to admit that i find it hard to read xianxia novel but so far this one exceed m expectation. Highly intelligent writer and perfect characters. Too good.
I actually love this novel so far. Love the characters and the world build up. Love the use of the Dao methods in the novel and the quotes are simply beautiful. Intelligent writer.
Part of a review swap and at time of writing, there are 32 chapters. However, reviewing after reading 20 as I already have a grasp of the story. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language so any minor grammatical errors are usually missed by me. However, there is NO way that there is any here. The writing quality is superb and the way things are described. Whoa. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development/Character Design/World Background: What can I say? The way the Author details the background and the characters can pull you into their world so easily. It's interesting to see how they progress and the sort of trials that they are going through. I like descriptive type novels and this one fits the bill. All the best, Author. °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°
I used to prefer wuxia to xianxia but i love this book. I know its too early to leave a review but i just have to do it. It's a very brilliant book. I love everything about it.
This is an excellent novel. The characters especially the main character was adorable. The worldplay is fantastic. The whole book is an enjoyable read so far. Issue is rate of update.
This was not too bad a novel. Actual fun it is. Like the characters and the world build up. I have to say the intro was dope as fack. Keep it coming, you've got a fan here.
This book is really good. I was reading it very happy. Its just too sad itvwas still only few chapters in. If not, its a very good novel different from the stupid ones on the internet
More updates. This is simply an excellent novel. It was a little bit early to be giving reviews but this novel is just wonderful. It deserves an oscar awards 😂. Excellent
Excellent novelle. Love the people. Love the techniques the characters are very good. Love the titan in particular, he's crazy. Love Haider too. Respectful. Cool guy. need more updates frequently. But,100%.
Well, this is making me love xianxia more. Better world, better levels and better character. Better than most of the useless systems and characters.love it, love it. 😊
This guy is really immortal writer. Love the begining, loving it all. Love Haider, tho strange name. Keep the writing going. I can't wait to read them all.😂
There are not many good novels out there but this kicked off perfectly. Lovebtge begining and build up. A must read for anyone looking for an excellent novel. You wont regret it.
Excellent novel. Love the world build up. Interesting characters. Interesting use of dao. Can't ask for more. Surely better than most nonsense novels out there. Love it.
This is a very interesting novel. A bit of mixture of names but a very good xianxia novel. It has great potential. I will quietly read before further comments.
Detailed description of the world. With its evolution and development. Everything is described from the very beginning, which immediately gives an understanding of how stable this world is. Which is very cool! Tien Shan - heavenly mountains ... interesting level)) The path of enlightenment, the path of tao, the path of understanding the world! Is it not Tao? Is this Buddhism? Chan Buddhism? Philosophy, harmony and being? The wheel of fate ... The wheel of Sansara? A very interesting work with deep thoughts on Eastern philosophy, while presented in a fascinating manner, is an amazing short story. It sparkles with information, the text is smooth, it’s not catchy, there are no rough edges. This is a novelty, as it is already otshlivannogo, with a beautiful cut diamond, which is worthy to decorate the crown of magnificent writing work! Great !!! Respect to the author
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