Scarlet_Feather

If you're looking for a promising story where fiction becomes reality, this might be just for you. The grammar so far has been really consistent with little to no mistakes. Inconsistent grammar is a common thing on this app, so I'm glad this one is different. The worldbuilding has also been pretty good. The creatures introduced so far have been standard, but the descriptions and actions are really vivid. They aren't many chapters right now, but the one so far have been really enjoyable. I hope the author turns this into something great.

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