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摘要
This is your typical isekai story where our protagonist Ben dies and is reincarnated into the One Piece World.
The story will largely follow the events however there will be noticeable changes and additions. The girls will be present in the story and have their own story. They might fall for our protagonist a bit easily.
There will be a system however it is not the focus. The character will be strong but not overpowered.
Additional Tags NSFW Scenes 18+, harem, adventure, fun
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4.3
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寫檢討
Luffy tried to become Pirate King. Ace tried to become White daddy son. Sabo tried to become Dragon son. Coby tried to become an Admiral.This guy tried to build harem that surpasses Tenryubitto. Zoro tried to find GPS GPS no mi. Sanji tried to escape from Okama. Ussop tried to run away from Akainu.
I can't take this novel seriously, the author seems to not even think about what he writes, just like the protagonist who acts without thinking.
Well.... just startes reading and its not bad. About 3 stars. There are a lot of things to improve but the most important is to fix the bad english. Punctuation is a complete mess, repetition problems and using verbs badly. After there there needs to be improvement in world building and character design to start somewhere
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Give a devil fruit to his scientist wife like a baku baku no mi(wapol devil fruit), brain brain fruit or mind mind fruit ,research research fruit Just my own suggestion
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i read the 1st few chapters.and i think i read it somewhere. i just forgot the title..
Ini cerita yang bagus Harem dengan cerita yang hot Tolong lanjutkan update nya Kalau bisa , update terbaru yang banyak Lanjutkan..... Lanjutkan..... Lanjutkan.....
this is not a proper review, will write one if this novel for me just want ask something. Quick question before I read this is there any yuri in this not a fan
MC tells every crew member that he was reincarnated and given a system by god. the author in the comments made it seem like he wanted the crew to trust him or whatever, but conveniently leaves out that he is basically mind raping them with his incubus devil fruit. this novel is inconsistent and the author has a fetish for making the mc is lame as possible.