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Alfonzo Marcus and Elicia Taylor, a pair of lovers who were preparing to marry in the near future, tragically lost their lives in a car accident. However, this was not the end of the road for either of them. When they next opened their eyes, they found themselves in a small orphanage in the port town of Hargeon. After connecting with the memories of their previous lives, they realized that they were in the world of one of their favorite anime, Fairy Tail.
Now, how will Alfonzo and Elicia change not only their own fates, but also the fates of those around them?
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At present, this novel is not my main focus. My other book, High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms is what I will be focusing on until it is finished. Updates for this story will mainly happen on Saturdays and Sundays, unless inspiration hits me out of nowhere.
Also, my drawing talent is abysmal. So, if anyone draws any of the characters, I'd love to see them.
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it's a good fanfic I can see it becoming amazing in the future although I am hoping for no harem as that would work better for Alfonzo and Elicia as they both have had a past and Alfonzo with his personality would get arrogant if he had more than one girl and he should stay loyal to Elicia as she has been loyal to him
It was really good, the story was satisfying and it was a fun read. Up until chapter 70ish, when he randomly started introducing characters from other anime, without really any consideration on how the world affects things. It all feels incredibly forced, unsatisfying and overall stupid. He went from meaningful relationships and characters to forcing characters he likes into the harem, and it’s destroyed the characters and the harem in one fall swoop. And seeing as he didn’t really having anything going for the story besides characters and mainly harem, there isn’t any desire for me to read beyond hoping Sun and Marin somehow get written out of existence. I honestly just feel disgusted with how forced it feels now. Why would an S-class wizard follow mermaid law. Why is the mermaid law even a thing in fairy tail, where and I’m quoting several other people, where gods and dragons and mythical creatures exist on the daily. It’s just so bad and meaningless now
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This is a very well-written story. The pacing is very good in my opinion and it is worth giving it a try. However, as of chapter 72 I will now not continue to read the story because I can now see what the crossover aspects are going to be like. It seems the crossovers will only introduce new Harem additions. I am already not a fan of Harem stories because the introduction of a Harem always results in two dimensional and forced relationships. This story is good enough that I could ignore the Harem elements. However, with the introduction of a crossover harem, it has just become too much. Which is honestly sad, because the story doesn't need Harem and crossover elements. It is already great without them. It would be, in fact, better without them. For the author, I can only recommend to rethink the harem and crossover aspects. For the potential readers, I recommend that you try this story. Form your own opinion on it.
It is a decent story however after chapter 70 I lost complete interest. I had hoped for a Fairy Tail fanfic strictly in that universe, but the AU elements to the story ruined it.
Do not read unless you like forced plot points constant death threats and forced relationships this fic is worthless garbage and it just keeps getting worse it's good up until Ch.70-ish then it plummets and keeps getting worse honestly not sure how the author even got to Ch.300+ of this waste of time it's trash
Author, I really like your DxD ff and this ff is also really good and I enjoy reading it so far, hope you keep this up! Waiting for more chapters - 5 stars
Lets hope this is better than cherry blossoms DxD novel you wrote... It was good until the Dark Martial Arts tournament where quality dropped to the underworld. I also hope you dont rushedEND/Axe this one
very well hidden harem creation novel... slice of life mostly. 230 to reach laxus attack on fairy tail, so veeeeery slow. If you want to feel day to day life in world of fairy tail that it is definetly for you, meaning everyday is almost the say and sometimes worse.
Everything is great with this story such as the writing quality and world building and grammar etc. However the MC’s magic usage is pure trash. All he does with magneto level magic is make some springs around his legs to jump farther and make some type of sticks called eskrima sticks or something. The number of times these words “escrima sticks” have been mentioned is over the top.
One of the few Fairy Tail Fic with OC as MC that is very good, the story and development are going very well, the harem is being very well built and the intersection of the characters does not seem forced. To be the author's second Fic, it's on a good path, let's hope he doesn't do the same at the end as the past and also, I hope he doesn't take so many girls in the harem, in my opinion that was a big mistake at the end of his first fic.[img=update][img=More pls]
Hate the characters personalitt mc doesn't have an spine and thats all im gonna explain too annoyed to say more.
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Lo escribire en mi idioma natal por comodidad, es una buena lectura en general y no me importa el harem pero lo dejare por ahora porque se notan las intenciones del autor de hacer una historia enfocada en el harem antes que en la aventura y bueno no soy fan de eso, si tengo algunas quejas: 1) es que las peleas son muy cortas con pocas descripciones. 2) me encanta que el MC tenga esa capacidad de creacion pero no escribes sobre eso no pido una descripcion total de como armar un automail pero cosas como el material de la pierna de UR o porque tendria un motor mas para darle la explosividad de su pierna original igual con el brazo del Mc o una mini historia de como hizo las armaduras de erza o las armas de alzac. 3) entiendo que el prota piensa a futuro y no le importa agregar a una chica bonita al harem pero me parecio fuera de la personalidad aceptar a la sirena y a erza, porque sino los "matarian". No digo que sea un protagonista chino dominante pero para alguien que supuestamente peca de orgulloso se dio a demantas estupidas de personas mas debiles hubiera sido mas emocionante una salida estilo fairy tail y que enfrente el problema mandando a sun al gremio para intentar enamorarlo o x no se con loa tritones haciendo maniobras politicas contra fairy tail.
Well I didnt mind the harem tag befire reading but after seeing the really good relationnship between rhe male and female mc hate is just destroying the stroy especially whem the mc have enough emotional bagage even without more people to romatically worry about. And just bc the female mc is open for a threesome you dont need to make a harem them just habing fun without permanent relationships would have beed way better
The story is good. There are hardly any good Fairy Tail fanfics on Web Novel. I'm thinking of writing on myself in the future. Yours is great. Especially with a pair of reincarnated lovers. And if this goes like your DxD story I'm sure the lemons you write will be great. Also if the pair decided to add another lover or two into the mix that's cool as well. Keep up the good work.
I gave the writing quality a 4 only for the few mistakes scattered about the FF; otherwise, the overall rating would've been a 5. I like this novel far more than the author's DxD one. I did drop his DxD fic a while back, but I do remember not quite liking the flow of the story. It wasn't that it was badly written but how to say this... the progression didn't feel right(?)--it just didn't feel all that natural. This FF makes up for that, and the flow of the story is superb. The character interactions and their development are exciting and logical while keeping the original characters'--well--character. The author has a good grasp of the characters' personalities and smoothly creates interactions between canon and OC characters. The OC characters' personalities are well fleshed out, and I actually wouldn't mind a harem or no harem. Both routes seem perfectly reasonable due to the characters' personalities, the world they are in, and the time period. I do lean more towards no harem as I love the dynamic between the two characters but I wouldn't mind harem either due to how the author fleshed out their personalities. I don't really want to say more as I feel I'll start spoiling, if I haven't already, so I'll stop here. I greatly look forward to more chapters of this and keep up the great work, author-kun.
This fic was stellar up to the end of rhe Tenrou arc but with addition of several characters and the harem on top being front and centre, this crazy train is starting to derail... hard... It's turning into a too many cooks situation, with over 8 - 10+ characters doing different things at any one time. The writing quality is set to a high standard as always and regular updates is what is keeping me reading but as of late things are becoming stale, I can only hope with the gravity chamber arc being finished you find your stride again and some progress can be made story wise, it's becoming less about being a fairy tail wizard, taking quests and having some form of adventure and more of a harem sit com with people gushing over Alponzo's cooking like he's the second coming of Soma 'fu*kmothing' Yukihira.
Una historia bastante interesante, pero un poco estancada, usando la base de fairy tail y metiendo personajes de diferentes animes todo el tiempo, sin llegar a explicar la historia ni a los nuevos personajes. Básicamente, si no conoces a los personajes, no deberias leerlo.
The best fairy tail fanfic in webnovel hands down. If there was something that I'd say made me not give it the 5 stars then it would be the main characters. The girl is a doormat while the guy does actually act like he's her boyfriend at all. Sure they have their little moments from time to time were he actually acts like he cars about her but 95% it' gonna be her initiating things and this even includes with the harem as well. He seems too aloof for my liking. It feels like he "settled for less" after he lost his eyesight in his first life and he just stayed with her because she was the safest option as everyone else left him. After reincarnating he obviously cares for her but it doesn't seem like love, meanwhile the girl seem to be basically obsessed with him at every moment. The girl is a lot more grounded and likable then the guy, the only complain is that she is somewhat of a doormat a lot of the time, clearly even she has her limits but like "i made you dresses for 2 years for free"... ain't that like too much of a door mat? Imagine saying "i only gave him my lunch money for 2 years" like... excuse me?
The stories of this author are quite interesting. Although I hope that in this work there will not be a harem, as in DxD. Too many girls, it's absurd. (More than 5 and the story becomes feces)