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Barbarossa Kaishu transmigrates to one piece and becomes the older brother of Kaidou of the Beasts while possessing a stronger physique talent!
After the Battle of the Gods Valley, the Strongest Assistant system was activated.
It can continuously improve the loyalty of the crew members while letting their Zoan-type devil fruit evolve.
Sengoku: Why all of the Beasts Pirates are Mythical Zoan Devil Fruit Users?!
Five Elders: Damn it! How can the Beasts Pirates be scarier than Rocks Pirates?
Garp: My iron fist can't even break Kaishu's defense at all!
Imu: How can there be such a terrible monster? Why even Uranus can't kill Kaishu!!
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You're doing a great job translating, but please replace the word 'ZOMBIE' with 'VAMPIRE'
This fanfiction good potential with no error while translation... please don't drop awaiting new chapters....... One of the best One piece fanfic
This one is a fun one. Seeing a more human side of kaido is quite nice. The story flows well in terms of tempo, and the quality is on point when it comes to spelling and phrasing.
The writing quality is full of Chinese references, but the translator is not to blame. Character design simply has no visual representation or accurate description. UP ST He has very good stability in sending chapters and is always very committed. world back To be honest, the protagonist doesn't have the slightest interest in discovering One Piece's secrets, it's like those teenagers saying "I don't want to know the secrets" but it would only benefit,Complete stupidity and I almost forget that the protagonist really thinks that Oden and his family brainwashed the country of Wano, he says this as if he were justifying the massacre he did (I have nothing against it, but I didn't see a villain tag and the protagonist, at least until Wano, seemed to be an "anti hero" But that's individual taste.I hope the translator can add the villain tag so as not to make people like me read until the wano massacre hahahahah
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It would have been okay if we didn't knew about what god valley was.. ........ Don't translate it dude you are wasting your time....................................
For those who are wondering what the real rating is, I would give it 3.5 stars, it's a MTL Chinese novel, so there are a lot of clichés like courting death and the translation is good enough, what I didn't like about the novel was the fact that protagonist gets strong very quickly, taking a timeskip, it also takes a long time to form a crew, the author doesn't seem to have the creativity to invent an adventure on an unknown island that doesn't appear in One Piece or explore what we don't already know. Anyway, this novel got saturated quite quickly, I still like it enough to keep reading, but it definitely could have been handled in a different way. Still, I recommend everyone read it.
I enjoy this for quite a while, but it was ruined when both MC and Kaido upgraded their Mythical Zoan DFs and became too broken for One Piece verse. The upgrade cost is also so cheap, when he could easily gain those source points. The translation is great and the updates are fast.
I really like this story. Even though I hate the idea of having a petreon I will forget it. I have a question, did you read all of it then start translating it or you read it as you translate it ?
there are a couple a places where things seem to be exaggerated, and the whole story has way to many moments of "heaven and earth" type speech. but other than that this story is VERY enjoyable. especially because even though it's reincarnation, you don't have to worry about wasting 30-40 chapters worth of time about a baby learning to walk, or a child learning how to punch. it just gets right into the growth phase and focuses on how the MC and Kaido grow in strength and then create a powerful pirate group. plus the system ends up having very minimal influence compared to most other stories. overall actually worth the read.
Not bad..........................................................................................................................................
Please release more chapters. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
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though there's not much action for mc in the later chapters, it's still wow just wow 😳
I kind of like this novel, so I decided to translate it. Moreover, I also gain some experience while doing this, so it's a win-win situation for me. If you ever read the MTL version of this, you probably notice that there's a large difference between some scenes. I'm rewriting it to make it clearer while also gaining some experience. If you like this novel, too, please consider supporting me on pat-reon. [img=recommend]