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The story is good, the characters are well developed, the most important thing is the excellent translation. Kaido's human character was interesting to us.
i do enjoy this but i was hoping for more beast pirates but i under stand that you are trying world build but the title says beast pirates in it
though there's not much action for mc in the later chapters, it's still wow just wow 😳
What is in this? Kaishu and beast pirates in the beginning and then moves on to his son ainz and crow pirates, it's starting to feel like kaishu's role is merely a set up for ainz
looks like ace bit more then he could chew well looks like he is going to suffer form queen and now the minks and jack are going to clash a few years early and with no strawhats coming to the resque
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Thank you for translating. Ignore the people who say otherwise. Thank you for taking the time even though you don't need to do this. Keep it up.
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I would like to know if u would continue the novel i quit the straw hats at the beginning. I love the story i hope it resumes. Because i know you're focused on the beast pirates novel.
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Are you even checking what your uploading, the last 2 chapters are wrong, I really like this story so please fix them one is a copy of the previous chapter and the other is supposed to be a wedding but is kaishu and the others attacking the marines and WG, and golden lion is attacking beast pirates.
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there are a couple a places where things seem to be exaggerated, and the whole story has way to many moments of "heaven and earth" type speech. but other than that this story is VERY enjoyable. especially because even though it's reincarnation, you don't have to worry about wasting 30-40 chapters worth of time about a baby learning to walk, or a child learning how to punch. it just gets right into the growth phase and focuses on how the MC and Kaido grow in strength and then create a powerful pirate group. plus the system ends up having very minimal influence compared to most other stories. overall actually worth the read.
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For those who are wondering what the real rating is, I would give it 3.5 stars, it's a MTL Chinese novel, so there are a lot of clichés like courting death and the translation is good enough, what I didn't like about the novel was the fact that protagonist gets strong very quickly, taking a timeskip, it also takes a long time to form a crew, the author doesn't seem to have the creativity to invent an adventure on an unknown island that doesn't appear in One Piece or explore what we don't already know. Anyway, this novel got saturated quite quickly, I still like it enough to keep reading, but it definitely could have been handled in a different way. Still, I recommend everyone read it.
I enjoy this for quite a while, but it was ruined when both MC and Kaido upgraded their Mythical Zoan DFs and became too broken for One Piece verse. The upgrade cost is also so cheap, when he could easily gain those source points. The translation is great and the updates are fast.
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Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on
The writing quality is full of Chinese references, but the translator is not to blame. Character design simply has no visual representation or accurate description. UP ST He has very good stability in sending chapters and is always very committed. world back To be honest, the protagonist doesn't have the slightest interest in discovering One Piece's secrets, it's like those teenagers saying "I don't want to know the secrets" but it would only benefit,Complete stupidity and I almost forget that the protagonist really thinks that Oden and his family brainwashed the country of Wano, he says this as if he were justifying the massacre he did (I have nothing against it, but I didn't see a villain tag and the protagonist, at least until Wano, seemed to be an "anti hero" But that's individual taste.I hope the translator can add the villain tag so as not to make people like me read until the wano massacre hahahahah
揭示劇透 Hello, how are you? Thank you very much for the topic. More chapters, come on, more chapters, come on, come on, come on, more chapters, come on, come on.
It's a good One Piece fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a good plot/story and great english/translation.. I like this side of Kaido (he show he has human side, like fear his brother/MC, etc).. I think MC/Kaishu has an op power/system (he can upgrade a normal zoan to be ancient zoan then mythical zoan).. He also too cruel, because he want to crush Wano.. He also love fighting like Kaido.. This story like it tell us Kaido story, because MC/Kaishu is not too different from Kaido. They personality is same.. Keep up the good work author san 😁👍😍😍
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I kind of like this novel, so I decided to translate it. Moreover, I also gain some experience while doing this, so it's a win-win situation for me. If you ever read the MTL version of this, you probably notice that there's a large difference between some scenes. I'm rewriting it to make it clearer while also gaining some experience. If you like this novel, too, please consider supporting me on pat-reon. [img=recommend]
The story is good, the characters are well developed, the most important thing is the excellent translation. Kaido's human character was interesting to us.
i do enjoy this but i was hoping for more beast pirates but i under stand that you are trying world build but the title says beast pirates in it
though there's not much action for mc in the later chapters, it's still wow just wow 😳
What is in this? Kaishu and beast pirates in the beginning and then moves on to his son ainz and crow pirates, it's starting to feel like kaishu's role is merely a set up for ainz
looks like ace bit more then he could chew well looks like he is going to suffer form queen and now the minks and jack are going to clash a few years early and with no strawhats coming to the resque
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Thank you for translating. Ignore the people who say otherwise. Thank you for taking the time even though you don't need to do this. Keep it up.
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I would like to know if u would continue the novel i quit the straw hats at the beginning. I love the story i hope it resumes. Because i know you're focused on the beast pirates novel.
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Are you even checking what your uploading, the last 2 chapters are wrong, I really like this story so please fix them one is a copy of the previous chapter and the other is supposed to be a wedding but is kaishu and the others attacking the marines and WG, and golden lion is attacking beast pirates.
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揭示劇透 there are a couple a places where things seem to be exaggerated, and the whole story has way to many moments of "heaven and earth" type speech. but other than that this story is VERY enjoyable. especially because even though it's reincarnation, you don't have to worry about wasting 30-40 chapters worth of time about a baby learning to walk, or a child learning how to punch. it just gets right into the growth phase and focuses on how the MC and Kaido grow in strength and then create a powerful pirate group. plus the system ends up having very minimal influence compared to most other stories. overall actually worth the read.
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For those who are wondering what the real rating is, I would give it 3.5 stars, it's a MTL Chinese novel, so there are a lot of clichés like courting death and the translation is good enough, what I didn't like about the novel was the fact that protagonist gets strong very quickly, taking a timeskip, it also takes a long time to form a crew, the author doesn't seem to have the creativity to invent an adventure on an unknown island that doesn't appear in One Piece or explore what we don't already know. Anyway, this novel got saturated quite quickly, I still like it enough to keep reading, but it definitely could have been handled in a different way. Still, I recommend everyone read it.
I enjoy this for quite a while, but it was ruined when both MC and Kaido upgraded their Mythical Zoan DFs and became too broken for One Piece verse. The upgrade cost is also so cheap, when he could easily gain those source points. The translation is great and the updates are fast.
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Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on
The writing quality is full of Chinese references, but the translator is not to blame. Character design simply has no visual representation or accurate description. UP ST He has very good stability in sending chapters and is always very committed. world back To be honest, the protagonist doesn't have the slightest interest in discovering One Piece's secrets, it's like those teenagers saying "I don't want to know the secrets" but it would only benefit,Complete stupidity and I almost forget that the protagonist really thinks that Oden and his family brainwashed the country of Wano, he says this as if he were justifying the massacre he did (I have nothing against it, but I didn't see a villain tag and the protagonist, at least until Wano, seemed to be an "anti hero" But that's individual taste.I hope the translator can add the villain tag so as not to make people like me read until the wano massacre hahahahah
揭示劇透 Hello, how are you? Thank you very much for the topic. More chapters, come on, more chapters, come on, come on, come on, more chapters, come on, come on.
It's a good One Piece fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a good plot/story and great english/translation.. I like this side of Kaido (he show he has human side, like fear his brother/MC, etc).. I think MC/Kaishu has an op power/system (he can upgrade a normal zoan to be ancient zoan then mythical zoan).. He also too cruel, because he want to crush Wano.. He also love fighting like Kaido.. This story like it tell us Kaido story, because MC/Kaishu is not too different from Kaido. They personality is same.. Keep up the good work author san 😁👍😍😍
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I kind of like this novel, so I decided to translate it. Moreover, I also gain some experience while doing this, so it's a win-win situation for me. If you ever read the MTL version of this, you probably notice that there's a large difference between some scenes. I'm rewriting it to make it clearer while also gaining some experience. If you like this novel, too, please consider supporting me on pat-reon. [img=recommend]