摘要
Yami Yuumo, an unknown mob character from Naruto's class is given modern knowledge, including the Naruto story.
He makes it his mission to rebel against the story ahead and live his life surrounded by female ninjas.
Watch as he changes the story of this world and as all the girls in the Naruto world fall deeper and deeper into depravity and corruption...
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Unlike other fanfics, author isn't messing up with old incidents. Main character has some really overpowered abilities that can be used for his goals. This was a great read. Author should keep it up
Okay, what do we have here? Innovation! MC's "kekkei genkai" ability is unprecedented, there is no cliché of MC replacing someone on a team or a team of 4 people (but a new team configuration), even the way the author avoided being caught by the FBI-chan is unique. Just...
As of chapter 39: On the grammar front this fanfic is okay and I couldn't find any mistakes. On the plot side this fanfic progress okay and I didn't get bored while reading or found any plot hole. The characters themselves also feel alive and not mechanical or robotic. The harem and s*x is also not forced or illogical but flowed quite well. Overall, I will give this fanfic five stars
One of the best fanfic of naruto I've ever seen. It's really awesome but bro you should upload chapters everyday and I've joined your patreon too. Hope this novel would be a long journey😍 Keep it up author🤩
This novel is a unique and daring take on one of my well-loved universe, blending familiar characters with entirely new and unexpected scenarios. The author's creativity is truly impressive, pushing boundaries while still staying true to some core aspects of the characters' personalities. The plot development is engaging and filled with twists that kept me on the edge of my seat. I appreciate how the writer delves deeply into certain themes, giving readers a fresh perspective that’s rarely explored in this genre. The pacing is excellent, and there’s a good balance between character development and action. Each chapter leaves you in the edge and you want more and more.... The feisty and kinky parts are just very awesome too. I highly recommend this to readers. The author has definitely earned a fan in me.
honestly i am not a fan of fanfics and tend to avoid most but this story was recommended to me and I actually liked it. For once the MC is not already a character in the story they are an outside presence and their ability is rather interesting. the only reason I didn't 5/5 this review was due to the fact I feel it doesn't update enough and I find myself going back and checking to see if there is anything new to read. If anything that just shows you wish to continue reading the story and in no way is that a real negative.
Achei a história interessante, mas a trama parece um pouco apressada e sinceramente nem precisava de um sistema. Lembre que Sakura e Ino, possuem uma personalidade forte e uma rivalidade enorme, mesmo que você tire o Sasuke da equação deveria dar bastante trabalho faze-las aderir a poligamia, quanto mais rapido for esta mudança mais suspeito o protagonista será para os lideres de Konoha, eles podem até optar por elimina-lo Fora que Anko, com o passado dela, nunca aceitaria ser sensei do protagonista, e se aceita-se no momento que ela suspeita-se que ele a esta manipulando ... bem, ela o mataria. A habilidade do protagonista, e boa para tramas no estilo intriga politica, trabalhando na sombras vendo os grandes se espancaram enquanto ele colhe os frutos.
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I must say I really like the story. The MC really is easy to like. I still had to take a few points off. I really like Naruto and thought it was a shame that everyone, even Hinata, laughed at Naruto. It's not Naruto's fault but rather the simplified conditions for Genin that Naruto fails with his huge chakra reserves. I like the rest of the story anyway.
Very interesting read, im not fan of NTR Main Charakters, but after reading your reasons, i aggre with your opinion about OG Naruto, this is why im mostly read stories with diffrent personality wise Naruto.
if you drop this then you are gay.......