/ Anime & Comics / Naruto- Amaterasu
摘要
" Who is that man" A meek voice enquired.
" Not much is known about him, they say he is invincible. Nobody knows where he came from, the only information about him are his black flames and his name "
"his name ?"
" ACE"
The logia Fruit Of the Heavenly flames of Amaterasu fell in the Hands of the Young Kuroko.
Watch his journey as he reaches the full potential of his Powers in the world of the ninjas and lead it through his ideals and strength alone.
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Im not a fan of the style of story telling. It is told as if whoever's point of view it is in is speaking to the reader and is immersion breaking. I wouldn't mind if it was every now and then but the whole story up to the 4th chapter (where I quit reading) is written like the MC is perpetually breaking the fourth wall. No description of the MC and the World Background is already existent so they just chose a timeline. English is written well so if it is a translation, it is done amazingly. I feel like instead of forgoing the reincarnator's perspective on chakra that it could have filled up the 6 month time skip spot where the previous chapter was really short.
tag for not having a harem is #no-harem i think.............................................................................................
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i like the story and would prefer regular updates also pls use the " and ' quotation marks correctly. There are too many mistakes
very very good ...............................................................................................................................................
Pretty good I would say just that you're chapters need more content 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
hmm good enough, Lots more to develop but good enough.😀😀😀😀😀[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Hello all of my readers, I gave a review for my book after completing the first volume on the basis of these reasons - 1)- If You want a Mc that slowly grows into power, exploring all his powers can do 2)- lots of Slice of life 3)- Kuroko brings a lot of changes in the world he is in so stay tuned for the butterfly effect 4)- a little bit of comedy 5) Good team mates such as Itachi And Shizu The first few chapters can be a bit shaky since they were written a while back, I would love it if you all can trust in the book and continue because I believe the latest chapters are quite the improvement. Am up for constructive criticism and Power stones will be appreciated if you end up liking the story. the Picture is of Kuroko Hyuga( drawn my by best-friend ) when Kuroko will be 15 years old.